COMPLETE [DRAM.READ] Sylvie and Bruno by Lewis Carroll -m8b1
Sorry again - my wifi router broke and I've had to use the computers at my school... All the students are cramming for finals, though, so it's hard to get a computer most days
Here's a first start on PLing, will post more as I have a computer to listen
Arie - chapter 10 is PL OK, and the other chapters will come soon!
Bala - chapters 5 and 8 are PL OK!
Kristin - woman3 and chorus are PL OK!
Here's a first start on PLing, will post more as I have a computer to listen
Arie - chapter 10 is PL OK, and the other chapters will come soon!
Bala - chapters 5 and 8 are PL OK!
Kristin - woman3 and chorus are PL OK!
micky
Narrator chapters 14 & 15:
https://librivox.org/uploads/m8b1/sylvieandbruno_narrator_14_128kb.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/m8b1/sylvieandbruno_narrator_15_128kb.mp3
Arie
https://librivox.org/uploads/m8b1/sylvieandbruno_narrator_14_128kb.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/m8b1/sylvieandbruno_narrator_15_128kb.mp3
Arie
Cheers
Arie: narrator chapters 11 & 15 are PL OK
Chapter 12 - around 02:01, there is a line missing: "That would be awkward, I admitted, taking it quite as a matter of course that he had so suddenly caught sight of me."
Before 02:23, the line "said Bruno" is missing
07:42, missing the part of the line, "And he went on with his work"
Chapter 13 - before 01:28, I'm not sure if the translated doggee ("humans, I verily believe...") should be read by the mastiff or the narrator?
Before 02:55, again unsure about the translated dogged ("she's not such a bad-looking human, is she?")
Chapter 14 - 02:01, for the line "He either fears his fate too much, or his desert is small" I heard "his dessert is small"
Arnaldo: Earl chapters 8, 17, 18, 20, & 23 are all PL OK
And Melanie, you are next up on my list!
ETA: Also, since the narrator chapters 14 & 15 weren't in the MW yet, I took the liberty of adding them while I was inputting my notes
Chapter 12 - around 02:01, there is a line missing: "That would be awkward, I admitted, taking it quite as a matter of course that he had so suddenly caught sight of me."
Before 02:23, the line "said Bruno" is missing
07:42, missing the part of the line, "And he went on with his work"
Chapter 13 - before 01:28, I'm not sure if the translated doggee ("humans, I verily believe...") should be read by the mastiff or the narrator?
Before 02:55, again unsure about the translated dogged ("she's not such a bad-looking human, is she?")
Chapter 14 - 02:01, for the line "He either fears his fate too much, or his desert is small" I heard "his dessert is small"
Arnaldo: Earl chapters 8, 17, 18, 20, & 23 are all PL OK
And Melanie, you are next up on my list!
ETA: Also, since the narrator chapters 14 & 15 weren't in the MW yet, I took the liberty of adding them while I was inputting my notes
micky
Here are Chapters 12 and 14 updated:micky wrote: Chapter 12 - around 02:01, there is a line missing; Before 02:23, the line "said Bruno" is missing; 07:42, missing the part of the line.
Chapter 13 - before 01:28, I'm not sure if the translated doggee ("humans, I verily believe...") should be read by the mastiff or the narrator? Before 02:55, again unsure about the translated dogged ("she's not such a bad-looking human, is she?")
Chapter 14 - 02:01, for the line "He either fears his fate too much, or his desert is small" I heard "his dessert is small"
https://librivox.org/uploads/m8b1/sylvieandbruno_narrator_12_128kb.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/m8b1/sylvieandbruno_narrator_14_128kb.mp3
I'm not sure what you want me to do about Chapter 13. Do I need to edit out those two areas?
Arie
Cheers
Thanks, Arie, I probably didn't make that clear - those lines weren't included in your recordings, and I was hoping that Algy would know which reader was supposed to have those lines... I would wait to record them for now, I would hate to have you put in the work and then realize you didn't have to in the first place
ETA: Oh my, I just found the google docs links and my life got sooo much easier! So obviously, these lines were not yours to record and my stumbling around the original document created more hassles than necessary
And PL is pending on your updated sections
ETA: chapters 12 & 14 are PL OK! I will add the new links to the MW as well.
ETA: Oh my, I just found the google docs links and my life got sooo much easier! So obviously, these lines were not yours to record and my stumbling around the original document created more hassles than necessary
And PL is pending on your updated sections
ETA: chapters 12 & 14 are PL OK! I will add the new links to the MW as well.
micky
Melanie - Just as a side note, but it is helpful for whoever edits the lines together if there is a bit more space between lines (the wiki has some more info about plays/dramatic readings) Your sections are already recorded so it's not an issue, just a heads-up for future recordings
Chapters 2, 5, 8, 16, 18, & 19 are PL OK!
In chapter 5, you introduce your character as "My Lady 1" and don't include "Lady Muriel"... Not sure if this is important or not so I will let Algy decide on that one Will mark as OK for now and come back later if needed!
Chapter 17 - before 00:49, missing the line "Oh yes indeed, indeed! So true!"
And great job on the song - you have an amazing voice!
Chapters 2, 5, 8, 16, 18, & 19 are PL OK!
In chapter 5, you introduce your character as "My Lady 1" and don't include "Lady Muriel"... Not sure if this is important or not so I will let Algy decide on that one Will mark as OK for now and come back later if needed!
Chapter 17 - before 00:49, missing the line "Oh yes indeed, indeed! So true!"
And great job on the song - you have an amazing voice!
micky
Hi Mickymicky wrote:Melanie -
In chapter 5, you introduce your character as "My Lady 1" and don't include "Lady Muriel"... Not sure if this is important or not so I will let Algy decide on that one Will mark as OK for now and come back later if needed!
The editor really only needs one instance of the character reading his/her name - this is used for the dramatis personae. As Melanie read the full "My Lady 1 - Lady Muriel" at the start of chapter two she won't need to change chapter 5.
Cheers
Perfect, thanks so much Algy!Algy Pug wrote:The editor really only needs one instance of the character reading his/her name - this is used for the dramatis personae. As Melanie read the full "My Lady 1 - Lady Muriel" at the start of chapter two she won't need to change chapter 5.
micky
Narrator chapters 16 & 17:
https://librivox.org/uploads/m8b1/sylvieandbruno_narrator_16_128kb.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/m8b1/sylvieandbruno_narrator_17_128kb.mp3
Arie
https://librivox.org/uploads/m8b1/sylvieandbruno_narrator_16_128kb.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/m8b1/sylvieandbruno_narrator_17_128kb.mp3
Arie
Cheers
I think you have sent your post to the wrong thread - it should be:azureblue wrote:sorry I meant
https://librivox.org/uploads/m8b1/sylvieandbruno_willdearth_all_128kb.mp3
viewtopic.php?f=27&t=51632
Of course if you wish to take a section in Sylvie and Bruno you are more than welcome.
Cheers
Thanks for the information on leaving more space. I will do that for the remaining recordings.micky wrote:Melanie - Just as a side note, but it is helpful for whoever edits the lines together if there is a bit more space between lines (the wiki has some more info about plays/dramatic readings) Your sections are already recorded so it's not an issue, just a heads-up for future recordings
Chapters 2, 5, 8, 16, 18, & 19 are PL OK!
In chapter 5, you introduce your character as "My Lady 1" and don't include "Lady Muriel"... Not sure if this is important or not so I will let Algy decide on that one Will mark as OK for now and come back later if needed!
Chapter 17 - before 00:49, missing the line "Oh yes indeed, indeed! So true!"
And great job on the song - you have an amazing voice!
I have fixed Chapter 17. Here is the link to the fixed version.
https://librivox.org/uploads/m8b1/sylvieandbruno_ladymuriel_17_128kb.mp3
Thanks for the compliment about the song
Here are the final 3 chapters (20, 22, 25) for My Lady1/Lady Muriel
7:12 - https://librivox.org/uploads/m8b1/sylvieandbruno_ladymuriel_20_128kb.mp3
1:39 - https://librivox.org/uploads/m8b1/sylvieandbruno_ladymuriel_22_128kb.mp3
5:30 - https://librivox.org/uploads/m8b1/sylvieandbruno_ladymuriel_25_128kb.mp3
~ M
7:12 - https://librivox.org/uploads/m8b1/sylvieandbruno_ladymuriel_20_128kb.mp3
1:39 - https://librivox.org/uploads/m8b1/sylvieandbruno_ladymuriel_22_128kb.mp3
5:30 - https://librivox.org/uploads/m8b1/sylvieandbruno_ladymuriel_25_128kb.mp3
~ M