[COMPLETE][Magazine][Short Stories]The Rover Vol. 01 No. 25 - kit
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Alan has thrown down the gauntlet, and I must respond. Is it possible for me to exchange my 8 for the gargantuan 9? Jim
I think no one ever gave back an easy shortie for a huge section. You definitely deserve a medal of heroism.neecheelok70 wrote: ↑September 30th, 2021, 9:58 amAlan has thrown down the gauntlet, and I must respond. Is it possible for me to exchange my 8 for the gargantuan 9? Jim
Switch made...I hope the story is worth it.
Thank you
Sonia
I agree...bizarre. The ramblings of a fan of the magazine perhaps ? Or the editors making a bit of fun ?neecheelok70 wrote: ↑September 30th, 2021, 9:52 amHere is Section 10--a whole bunch of nonsense:
https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/rover0125_10_various_128kb.mp3
In any case, excellently narrated again and PL ok.
Thank you, Jim
Sonia
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Thanks, Sonia! I see it as a challenge. It looks as if it will be the longest of my Rovers so far. Jim
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Here it is, the monster known as Number 9--very descriptive; and powerful:
https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/rover0125_09_various_128kb.mp3
59:34
Jim
https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/rover0125_09_various_128kb.mp3
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Jim
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Here is section 2 - I didn't say the title until after I read the little blurb about Boston, hope that's ok, if not just let me know and I can change it.
length - 9:48.51
https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/rover0125_02_various_128kb.mp3
Thanks, Gini
length - 9:48.51
https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/rover0125_02_various_128kb.mp3
Thanks, Gini
one hour of swashbuckling action ! What a story, though a bit incredible as to this sister all of a sudden being the same as the wife and why did she seem to struggle in the end, was she still alive by any chance ? I would have liked less ambiguity on that point.neecheelok70 wrote: ↑October 1st, 2021, 12:34 pmHere it is, the monster known as Number 9--very descriptive; and powerful:
https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/rover0125_09_various_128kb.mp3
Wonderful narration, Jim, and absolutely error-free. For such a long section, this was quite a feat.
PL ok, thanks
Sonia
thank you, Gini, another wonderfully narrated section interesting facts about Boston, too.Theginmann wrote: ↑October 1st, 2021, 1:14 pmHere is section 2 - I didn't say the title until after I read the little blurb about Boston, hope that's ok, if not just let me know and I can change it.
But yes please add the title of the section at the beginning. In the intro, I wanted to state the section title, regardless whether there is an introduction summary coming before. Later on, when the story proper starts, you can well repeat it (as you did here correctly), then people know this is where the real story starts.
> at 0:24: please insert title here already: "Yankee Notions, by Samuel Kettel"
The rest is perfect, thank you
Sonia
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Thanks, Sonia. It was quite an adventure!
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Here is Section 7--interesting study in extreme opposites:
https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/rover0125_07_various_128kb.mp3
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Jim
https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/rover0125_07_various_128kb.mp3
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Jim
what an extremely sad fate for Margaret. I cannot believe the sisters wouldn't keep close and each help the other It saddened me.neecheelok70 wrote: ↑October 4th, 2021, 10:16 amHere is Section 7--interesting study in extreme opposites:
https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/rover0125_07_various_128kb.mp3
But the story was well narrated and it's absolutely PL ok. Good job on the Scottish poetry
thank you, Jim
Sonia
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Section 6 - The Free Rover
https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/rover0125_06_various_128kb.mp3
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A nicely rhythmic poem
https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/rover0125_06_various_128kb.mp3
2.48
A nicely rhythmic poem
Alan
the sixth age shifts into the slippered pantaloon with spectacles on nose
the sixth age shifts into the slippered pantaloon with spectacles on nose
indeed, I liked it too thank you, Alan, another perfect PL ok narrationalanmapstone wrote: ↑October 5th, 2021, 1:54 amSection 6 - The Free Rover
https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/rover0125_06_various_128kb.mp3
A nicely rhythmic poem
Sonia
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Hi there, here is the revised section 2 - new length - 9:51.12
https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/rover0125_02_various_128kb.mp3
Thanks, Gini
https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/rover0125_02_various_128kb.mp3
Thanks, Gini