[COMPLETE] Captain Billy's Whiz Bang, Vol. 3, No. 28, December, 1921, by W. H. Fawcett (1885 - 1940) - icequeen

speaker987 · Post by **speaker987** » August 29th, 2021, 12:34 pm

I will take Section 20 if no one has claimed it.

Thanks

Darrell

silverquill · Post by **silverquill** » August 29th, 2021, 7:01 pm

speaker987 wrote: ↑August 29th, 2021, 12:34 pm I will take Section 20 if no one has claimed it.

Thanks

Darrell

All yours!
Thank you.
(Don't forget the end of book blurb)

LCaulkins · Post by **LCaulkins** » August 30th, 2021, 7:38 am

speaker987 wrote: ↑August 28th, 2021, 7:30 pm Here is --
Section 04 Drippings From the Fawcett, Part III

https://librivox.org/uploads/icequeen/whizbangv3n28_04_fawcett_128kb.mp3

Length 7 mins 10 secs

Darrell

A most excellent recording, Darrell!

Optional PL Notes:

If you are open for a suggestion, there is an optional edit you can do at two points to clear things up for listeners who won't be seeing the text while hearing your reading.

A good pause inserted before each of the two new "articles" in this section's portion will provide a cue for the listener that the topic has shifted. Right now, the spacing is the same as any sentence start, so they don't know it's the next "thing."

I notice that the ending silence is 8 seconds instead of 5 - it would be fairly simple to cut out 1.5 seconds to add to each of the spots where the new items start. If you'd like to do this edit, here are the time points for you:

5:24 - can use a longer pause before "And there was Captain Al Waddell. . .

3:55 - can use a longer pause before "There are still a few rumbling in San Francisco. . .

speaker987 · Post by **speaker987** » August 30th, 2021, 11:24 am

Section 20 done. Old time history.. Love it!!

https://librivox.org/uploads/icequeen/whizbangv3n28_20_fawcett_128kb.mp3

Length 6 min 1 sec

Darrell

speaker987 · Post by **speaker987** » August 30th, 2021, 11:50 am

Update to Section 4- pauses added and shortened end close to to 5 sec.

https://librivox.org/uploads/icequeen/whizbangv3n28_04_fawcett_128kb.mp3

Thanks for the PL Notes

Darrell

nighthawks · Post by **nighthawks** » August 30th, 2021, 12:11 pm

Here is Section 05, Drippings of the Fawcett IV

https://librivox.org/uploads/icequeen/whizbangv3n28_05_fawcett_128kb.mp3

04:56

LCaulkins · Post by **LCaulkins** » August 30th, 2021, 12:22 pm

speaker987 wrote: ↑August 30th, 2021, 11:50 am Update to Section 4- pauses added and shortened end close to to 5 sec.

https://librivox.org/uploads/icequeen/whizbangv3n28_04_fawcett_128kb.mp3

Thanks for the PL Notes

Darrell

Nice

Section 4 is PL OK

(I'll PL your section 20 - And nighthawks's 5 - when Larry's been on LV and loaded them into the MW)

speaker987 · Post by **speaker987** » August 30th, 2021, 4:18 pm

Thank you for the tips- and always open to feedback to get better!!

Darrell

silverquill · Post by **silverquill** » August 30th, 2021, 9:04 pm

speaker987 wrote: ↑August 30th, 2021, 11:24 am Section 20 done. Old time history.. Love it!!

https://librivox.org/uploads/icequeen/whizbangv3n28_20_fawcett_128kb.mp3

Length 6 min 1 sec

Darrell

Glad you enjoyed! (We'll have more issues of this mag coming along)
Ready for PL

silverquill · Post by **silverquill** » August 30th, 2021, 9:05 pm

nighthawks wrote: ↑August 30th, 2021, 12:11 pm Here is Section 05, Drippings of the Fawcett IV

https://librivox.org/uploads/icequeen/whizbangv3n28_05_fawcett_128kb.mp3

04:56

Thanks for another section!
Ready for PL

nighthawks · Post by **nighthawks** » August 31st, 2021, 2:15 am

May I please record Section 16, Can we forgive him?

LCaulkins · Post by **LCaulkins** » August 31st, 2021, 6:16 am

nighthawks wrote: ↑August 30th, 2021, 12:11 pm Here is Section 05, Drippings of the Fawcett IV

https://librivox.org/uploads/icequeen/whizbangv3n28_05_fawcett_128kb.mp3

04:56

Section 5 is PL OK

and very nicely done!

LCaulkins · Post by **LCaulkins** » August 31st, 2021, 6:27 am

speaker987 wrote: ↑August 30th, 2021, 11:24 am Section 20 done. Old time history.. Love it!!

https://librivox.org/uploads/icequeen/whizbangv3n28_20_fawcett_128kb.mp3

Length 6 min 1 sec

Darrell

Superb! Section 20 is PL OK

silverquill · Post by **silverquill** » August 31st, 2021, 7:54 am

nighthawks wrote: ↑August 31st, 2021, 2:15 am May I please record Section 16, Can we forgive him?

You've got it.
Thanks!

KDonProduction · Post by **KDonProduction** » August 31st, 2021, 8:33 pm

Can I claim section 19?