[COMPLETE] The Centaurians by Biagi - rap

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Sheldonme
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Just wanted to check: When I'm doing the intro for section 22, should I say Section 22 or chapter 19? There are 2 spots, one where it asks for the section # (which I assumed would be 22) and then at the end of the intro where it says "The Centaurians, by Biagi. (Section Title)" I wasn't sure if I should use Chapter 19 in this spot, since that's what's at the beginning of the text in section 22?

Thanks!
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Post by gyllila »

Sheldonme wrote: July 27th, 2021, 5:52 am Just wanted to check: When I'm doing the intro for section 22, should I say Section 22 or chapter 19? There are 2 spots, one where it asks for the section # (which I assumed would be 22) and then at the end of the intro where it says "The Centaurians, by Biagi. (Section Title)" I wasn't sure if I should use Chapter 19 in this spot, since that's what's at the beginning of the text in section 22?

Thanks!
Yes, your section number is 22 and section title is Chapter XIX. Have fun with recording. :D
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Sheldonme wrote: July 28th, 2021, 6:24 am I just uploaded section 22!


https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/centaurians_22_biagi_128kb.mp3
Congratulations to your first upload, it has passed checker and is now ready for PL! :clap:
Sheldonme
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gyllila wrote: July 28th, 2021, 7:32 am
Sheldonme wrote: July 28th, 2021, 6:24 am I just uploaded section 22!


https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/centaurians_22_biagi_128kb.mp3
Congratulations to your first upload, it has passed checker and is now ready for PL! :clap:
Thanks!
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PQuesoLoco wrote: July 26th, 2021, 11:02 am here is my Chapter 9 ! :D sorry this took so long

https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/centaurians_09_biagi_128kp.mp3
35.29
I have a couple of pl notes for chapter 9:

The pause at 0:20 felt somewhat long. It could be shortened to 2-3 seconds.

There is a repetition at around 3:15-3:30 of "We knew the old boy was happy and congratulated him, then viewed the mystery through the telescope. It rose higher, glimmering in pale splendor, weird, unnatural, as it flared in uncanny, pinkish light, without sparkle or brilliancy. "

16:13-16:23 repetition of "As the narrow ribbons of fire shot upward, bursting into thousands of bright-hued sparks, these wise men concluded it was a signal of some sort"

27:05 missing sentence "on that account. They declared war at the least provocation, then prolonged it because pride, honor or fear of losing prestige with other nations was at stake. They would dispute"

You could work on these edits backwards so that timestamps are more accurate.
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Post by Rapunzelina »

Sheldonme wrote: July 28th, 2021, 6:24 am I just uploaded section 22!


https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/centaurians_22_biagi_128kb.mp3
That was great! PL OK!
TheThirdDoctorLight wrote: July 26th, 2021, 6:28 pm Done and done!
Section 23: https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/centaurians_23_biagi_128kb.mp3 (Time: 14:04)
Section 24: https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/centaurians_24_biagi_128kb.mp3 (Time: 31:49)

This project sure has come together fast! Looking forward to listening to the whole thing when it's completed!
These are also PL OK :thumbs:
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Post by Sheldonme »

Rapunzelina wrote: July 30th, 2021, 8:24 am
Sheldonme wrote: July 28th, 2021, 6:24 am I just uploaded section 22!


https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/centaurians_22_biagi_128kb.mp3
That was great! PL OK!
Thank you!
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Here is Section 19 (duration 13:49)! Ready for PL! :D I wanted to get it posted ASAP since everyone else recorded their sections so quickly.

https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/centaurians_19_biagi_128kb.mp3
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Gambit8008 wrote: August 6th, 2021, 7:26 am Here is Section 19 (duration 13:49)! Ready for PL! :D I wanted to get it posted ASAP since everyone else recorded their sections so quickly.

https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/centaurians_19_biagi_128kb.mp3
That is really kind of you. :thumbs:
Checker OK and ready for PL! :clap:
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:clap: :clap: sections 19 and 21 are PL OK!
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Rapunzelina wrote: August 7th, 2021, 6:11 am :clap: :clap: sections 19 and 21 are PL OK!
Thank you! :thumbs:
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Rapunzelina wrote: July 30th, 2021, 8:22 am
PQuesoLoco wrote: July 26th, 2021, 11:02 am here is my Chapter 9 ! :D sorry this took so long

https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/centaurians_09_biagi_128kp.mp3
35.29
I have a couple of pl notes for chapter 9:

The pause at 0:20 felt somewhat long. It could be shortened to 2-3 seconds.

There is a repetition at around 3:15-3:30 of "We knew the old boy was happy and congratulated him, then viewed the mystery through the telescope. It rose higher, glimmering in pale splendor, weird, unnatural, as it flared in uncanny, pinkish light, without sparkle or brilliancy. "

16:13-16:23 repetition of "As the narrow ribbons of fire shot upward, bursting into thousands of bright-hued sparks, these wise men concluded it was a signal of some sort"

27:05 missing sentence "on that account. They declared war at the least provocation, then prolonged it because pride, honor or fear of losing prestige with other nations was at stake. They would dispute"

You could work on these edits backwards so that timestamps are more accurate.
Thank you sorry for delay! I didn't mean to hold anyone up! I will correct as soon as I can
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Post by PQuesoLoco »

Unfortunately I was able to fix those corrections that needed re-recording to change because the microphone I used the first time isn't with me currently but I will be rectifying that today or tomorrow. Thank you for your patience
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