[COMPLETE] Ideala by Sarah Grand - rap

JoMarch2021 · Post by **JoMarch2021** » June 28th, 2021, 6:37 pm

https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/ideala_09_grand_128kb.mp3
4:38

miss stav · Post by **miss stav** » June 28th, 2021, 7:34 pm

Thank you both. Hope you enjoyed your chapters. Would you like to record more sections from this book?

Post by **Rapunzelina** » June 30th, 2021, 5:14 am

JoMarch2021 wrote: ↑June 28th, 2021, 6:31 pm https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/ideala_07_grand_128kb.mp3
6:34

Hi Taylor! I loved your expressive reading!
I have a few edits to suggest on some stumbles:
3:43 repeat of "and I may say"
4:02-4:06 stumble in the phrase "not because the things are right in themselves"
4:57 stumble on "in the world"
6:24 stumble on "same thing again exactly"
Let me know if you'll be able to fix these or not.
Also the beginning silence feels a bit long, you could shorten it to 1 second.

Chapters 8 and 9 are PL OK

Post by **Rapunzelina** » June 30th, 2021, 5:21 am

TheThirdDoctorLight wrote: ↑June 28th, 2021, 5:27 pm Ch. 19: https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/ideala_19_grand_128kb.mp3
Time: 11:30

There's a longer pause at around 1:07-1:12, and the slightest stumble at around 7:20 if you feel you can fix (optional) on the phrase "with a -- red handkerchief".

The rest, 16,17,18,20 are PL OK! Magnificent reading!

TheThirdDoctorLight · Post by **TheThirdDoctorLight** » June 30th, 2021, 5:32 pm

Rapunzelina wrote: ↑June 30th, 2021, 5:21 am
There's a longer pause at around 1:07-1:12, and the slightest stumble at around 7:20 if you feel you can fix (optional) on the phrase "with a -- red handkerchief".

The rest, 16,17,18,20 are PL OK! Magnificent reading!

Got it. Easy to take out the pause. I did a punch-in for the "red handkerchief" sentence-- stumble is gone, though admittedly the tone sounds a little different from the rest of the recording. I've reuploaded-- new time is 11:26.

TheThirdDoctorLight · Post by **TheThirdDoctorLight** » June 30th, 2021, 6:02 pm

Ok! And here's Ch. 21: https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/ideala_21_grand_128kb.mp3
Time: 16:31

miss stav · Post by **miss stav** » June 30th, 2021, 9:18 pm

Thanks a lot.

Post by **Rapunzelina** » July 1st, 2021, 1:50 pm

Sections 19 and 21 are PL OK! Brilliant work!

TheThirdDoctorLight · Post by **TheThirdDoctorLight** » July 1st, 2021, 5:07 pm

Rapunzelina wrote: ↑July 1st, 2021, 1:50 pm Sections 19 and 21 are PL OK! Brilliant work!

Thank you!

aimeenm · Post by **aimeenm** » July 2nd, 2021, 4:01 pm

Here's chapter 22! (6:40)
https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/ideala_22_grand_128kb.mp3

aimeenm · Post by **aimeenm** » July 2nd, 2021, 5:03 pm

And here is 23! (5:01)
https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/ideala_23_grand_128kb.mp3

May I also take chapters 24 and 25?

miss stav · Post by **miss stav** » July 2nd, 2021, 8:12 pm

Hi, thanks for 22 and 23. Sure, 24 and 25 are all yours. Have fun.

JoMarch2021 · Post by **JoMarch2021** » July 3rd, 2021, 7:40 am

Rapunzelina wrote: ↑June 30th, 2021, 5:14 am
JoMarch2021 wrote: ↑June 28th, 2021, 6:31 pm https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/ideala_07_grand_128kb.mp3
6:34
Hi Taylor! I loved your expressive reading!
I have a few edits to suggest on some stumbles:
3:43 repeat of "and I may say"
4:02-4:06 stumble in the phrase "not because the things are right in themselves"
4:57 stumble on "in the world"
6:24 stumble on "same thing again exactly"
Let me know if you'll be able to fix these or not.
Also the beginning silence feels a bit long, you could shorten it to 1 second.

Chapters 8 and 9 are PL OK

Thanks! I will make sure this gets fixed.

aimeenm · Post by **aimeenm** » July 5th, 2021, 1:00 pm

miss stav wrote: ↑July 2nd, 2021, 8:12 pm Hi, thanks for 22 and 23. Sure, 24 and 25 are all yours. Have fun.

Here is 24! (18:14)
https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/ideala_24_grand_128kb.mp3

aimeenm · Post by **aimeenm** » July 5th, 2021, 1:08 pm

I can also taker the preface if that's ok.