[COMPLETE] Ideala by Sarah Grand - rap
Thank you both. Hope you enjoyed your chapters. Would you like to record more sections from this book?
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Hi Taylor! I loved your expressive reading!JoMarch2021 wrote: ↑June 28th, 2021, 6:31 pm https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/ideala_07_grand_128kb.mp3
6:34
I have a few edits to suggest on some stumbles:
3:43 repeat of "and I may say"
4:02-4:06 stumble in the phrase "not because the things are right in themselves"
4:57 stumble on "in the world"
6:24 stumble on "same thing again exactly"
Let me know if you'll be able to fix these or not.
Also the beginning silence feels a bit long, you could shorten it to 1 second.
Chapters 8 and 9 are PL OK
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There's a longer pause at around 1:07-1:12, and the slightest stumble at around 7:20 if you feel you can fix (optional) on the phrase "with a -- red handkerchief".TheThirdDoctorLight wrote: ↑June 28th, 2021, 5:27 pm Ch. 19: https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/ideala_19_grand_128kb.mp3
Time: 11:30
The rest, 16,17,18,20 are PL OK! Magnificent reading!
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Got it. Easy to take out the pause. I did a punch-in for the "red handkerchief" sentence-- stumble is gone, though admittedly the tone sounds a little different from the rest of the recording. I've reuploaded-- new time is 11:26.Rapunzelina wrote: ↑June 30th, 2021, 5:21 am
There's a longer pause at around 1:07-1:12, and the slightest stumble at around 7:20 if you feel you can fix (optional) on the phrase "with a -- red handkerchief".
The rest, 16,17,18,20 are PL OK! Magnificent reading!
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Ok! And here's Ch. 21: https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/ideala_21_grand_128kb.mp3
Time: 16:31
Time: 16:31
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Sections 19 and 21 are PL OK! Brilliant work!
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Thank you!
Here's chapter 22! (6:40)
https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/ideala_22_grand_128kb.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/ideala_22_grand_128kb.mp3
And here is 23! (5:01)
https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/ideala_23_grand_128kb.mp3
May I also take chapters 24 and 25?
https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/ideala_23_grand_128kb.mp3
May I also take chapters 24 and 25?
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Thanks! I will make sure this gets fixed.Rapunzelina wrote: ↑June 30th, 2021, 5:14 amHi Taylor! I loved your expressive reading!JoMarch2021 wrote: ↑June 28th, 2021, 6:31 pm https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/ideala_07_grand_128kb.mp3
6:34
I have a few edits to suggest on some stumbles:
3:43 repeat of "and I may say"
4:02-4:06 stumble in the phrase "not because the things are right in themselves"
4:57 stumble on "in the world"
6:24 stumble on "same thing again exactly"
Let me know if you'll be able to fix these or not.
Also the beginning silence feels a bit long, you could shorten it to 1 second.
Chapters 8 and 9 are PL OK