I can tell, it sounds great! Thank you for this section! Things get pretty intense in this part of the book (and I won't say much more than that so as not to spoil anything for people who haven't read it yet ). I have just a few notes:brownrottger wrote: ↑June 16th, 2021, 3:44 am 18:37 https://librivox.org/uploads/knotyouraveragejo/mauprat_35_sand_128kb.mp3 I had a blast making this chapter!!
- At 1:44, "When they are no more," you say "There are no more."
- At 2:25, after "turning the dagger in my breast?" could you include the line "Are you afraid that I may survive this blow?"?