[COMPLETE][Magazine][Short Stories]The Rover Vol. 01 No. 10 - kit

[Kitty]

Thank you. I will try to prioritize this so you can wrap this project.

no hurry, we are still waiting for two more readers, so this is not ready to wrap yet.

Sonia

[GregGiordano]

Sonia,

I have recorded my section. I hope to have it edited within a couple days.

Take care,

Greg

[GregGiordano]

Here is Section 4 - The Iron Shroud:

https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/rover0110_4_various_128kb.mp3

Run time is 38:11

Take care,

Greg

[Kitty]

Here is Section 4 - The Iron Shroud:
https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/rover0110_4_various_128kb.mp3
Run time is 38:11

this was shocking !!!! It reminded me totally of Poe's The Pit and the Pendulum, without the happy end, sadly. I felt the claustrophobia which would have overwhelmed me in that tower while listening to you. This was a powerful story, and you narrated it very well.

Need to calm down my nerves now.

I did not really understand why the last window would be closer to the prisoner in the end. I thought the roof was coming down, but now it seems the floor was going up, otherwise this would not be possible.

I only have one small correction to add:

> at 0:40-0:44: the title is repeated twice, you can cut out one of the versions. Once is enough

thank you Greg !

Sonia

[GregGiordano]

Here is Section 4 - The Iron Shroud:
https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/rover0110_4_various_128kb.mp3
Run time is 38:11

this was shocking !!!! It reminded me totally of Poe's The Pit and the Pendulum, without the happy end, sadly. I felt the claustrophobia which would have overwhelmed me in that tower while listening to you. This was a powerful story, and you narrated it very well.

Need to calm down my nerves now.

I did not really understand why the last window would be closer to the prisoner in the end. I thought the roof was coming down, but now it seems the floor was going up, otherwise this would not be possible.

I only have one small correction to add:

> at 0:40-0:44: the title is repeated twice, you can cut out one of the versions. Once is enough

thank you Greg !

Sonia

Thank you for the quick proofing! I'll fix the repeat tonight and repost.

Thank you!

[Kitty]

actually I found a wiki article on it, and apparently Poe got the idea for his P&P from the Iron Shroud. Must have been famous in the day: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/The_Iron_Shroud

Quite interesting. Charlotte Brontë also mentioned it in Jane Eyre.

Sonia

[GregGiordano]

actually I found a wiki article on it, and apparently Poe got the idea for his P&P from the Iron Shroud. Must have been famous in the day: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/The_Iron_Shroud

Quite interesting. Charlotte Brontë also mentioned it in Jane Eyre.

Sonia

That is cool. It was obvious that this story was not a quickly written fluff piece. It was well-paced and dramatic.

[GregGiordano]

Here is Section 4 with requested correction:

https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/rover0110_4_various_128kb.mp3

New run time is 38:06

Take care,

Greg

[Kitty]

Here is Section 4 with requested correction:
https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/rover0110_4_various_128kb.mp3

thank you, and now definitely PL ok

Sonia

[GregGiordano]

Here is Section 4 with requested correction:
https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/rover0110_4_various_128kb.mp3

thank you, and now definitely PL ok

Sonia

[Lmnei]

Hi Kitty -

Just want to confirm that The Sea Cave is actually (after all those long recordings) a 14 line poem that I am doing. The next page is blank in the link referenced on page 1 of this forum - so it seems this is a pretty short recording

Am I correct? Or is my computer not showing me the next page???

If it is just a poem - here it is - https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/rover0110_7_various_128kb.mp3 - 2:01

Lynda

[Kitty]

Just want to confirm that The Sea Cave is actually (after all those long recordings) a 14 line poem that I am doing. The next page is blank in the link referenced on page 1 of this forum - so it seems this is a pretty short recording

Am I correct? Or is my computer not showing me the next page???

no it's correct, there are poems interspersed between the longer stories. So this time you've had a shorter stint And the Sea Cave is a lovely poem and nicely narrated by you. Flawless too, so PL ok right away. Thank you !!!

Have you seen my PL notes for Merry Terry though ?

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Announcement: as I haven't heard back from the reader, Section 6 is opened up for grabs again. It's the final section, so there's hope we can wrap this up soon.

Back to Readers Wanted for the time being.

Sonia

[Lmnei]

Hi Sonia -

I am set up for recording now so I will do Section 6. Yes I saw Merry's PL feedback - I just wanted to get this other one done as I thought it was LONGER.... my mistake! I will do both the feedback and recording of this one at the same time.

Lynda

[Kitty]

I am set up for recording now so I will do Section 6. Yes I saw Merry's PL feedback - I just wanted to get this other one done as I thought it was LONGER.... my mistake! I will do both the feedback and recording of this one at the same time.

wow, thank you for making us fully claimed again, Lynda this one is a bit longer though

back to readers found then.

Sonia

[Lmnei]

Hi Sonia -

Here is Section 6 -

https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/rover0110_6_various_128kb.mp3 - 31:08

Hot off Audacity!

Lynda