COMPLETE: Selected Lead Articles from "THE DAWN", by Louisa Lawson -jo

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Thank you, April , Wendy and Jenn. Sections 15, 3 and 4 all queued for PL.

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SaraHale wrote: April 6th, 2021, 2:58 am Hey Lynda!

You did an AWESOME job editing fair pay.

But, I still don't hear @03:48 - "A wife has no time to think of her own life and development". I hear it, woman. Could you please correct this one?

Thanks!! :9:
Ha, ha - that was funny! I replaced woman with woman!

Here it is now with wife.... the time for the recording is the same....

https://librivox.org/uploads/knotyouraveragejo/thedawn_16_lawson_128kb.mp3

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Lmnei wrote: April 6th, 2021, 6:50 pm Ha, ha - that was funny! I replaced woman with woman!

Here it is now with wife.... the time for the recording is the same....

https://librivox.org/uploads/knotyouraveragejo/thedawn_16_lawson_128kb.mp3

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Thanks so much! Perfectly done. Section 16 is PL OK. :clap:
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Sections 15, 3, and 4 are all PL OK. :clap:
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Thank you, Betty, queued for PL.

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Hi, Betty!

Your section is well-narrated. I just have a tiny PL note.

@4:15 - You said End of section 2 instead of End of section 11.

Could you please correct that part? Thanks! :D
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JenniferFour wrote: April 9th, 2021, 11:37 am Section 2 for you; time is 5:11

https://librivox.org/uploads/knotyouraveragejo/thedawn_02_lawson_128kb.mp3
Thank you, Jennifer, queued for PL.

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JenniferFour wrote: April 9th, 2021, 11:37 am Section 2 for you; time is 5:11

https://librivox.org/uploads/knotyouraveragejo/thedawn_02_lawson_128kb.mp3
PL OK :clap:
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Thanks Sara!
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