[COMPLETE][Magazine][Short Stories]The Rover Vol. 01 No. 09 - kit
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I thought it was clear. You rendered it wonderfully. Amusing misunderstanding! You are PL OK.
thank you, that was ultra fastneecheelok70 wrote: ↑April 25th, 2021, 5:49 am I thought it was clear. You rendered it wonderfully. Amusing misunderstanding! You are PL OK.
Sonia
I will be on vacation from Wednesday 27 March till Sunday 14 April
and unable to PL during that time. Thank you for your patience.
and unable to PL during that time. Thank you for your patience.
as I haven't heard back from the new volunteer, and no minute-test has yet been started, sections 4 and 5 are up for grabs again. Back to Readers Wanted.
Sonia
Sonia
I will be on vacation from Wednesday 27 March till Sunday 14 April
and unable to PL during that time. Thank you for your patience.
and unable to PL during that time. Thank you for your patience.
you want both sections ? All right, thank you, Lynda, that makes us back fully claimed then
have fun recording
Sonia
I will be on vacation from Wednesday 27 March till Sunday 14 April
and unable to PL during that time. Thank you for your patience.
and unable to PL during that time. Thank you for your patience.
Yes please - I warmed up on Section 3 - it is now recorded.
Lynda
wait...section 3 has already been recorded by Jim ! I hope you are not doing work double. Well if you did, since it's a poem, it can always be offered to the monthly poetry collection.
Sonia
I will be on vacation from Wednesday 27 March till Sunday 14 April
and unable to PL during that time. Thank you for your patience.
and unable to PL during that time. Thank you for your patience.
Here is Section 4 -
https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/rover0109_04_various_128kb.mp3
Section 5 is soon to follow....
Section 8 is long and is half recorded...
Lynda
https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/rover0109_04_various_128kb.mp3
Section 5 is soon to follow....
Section 8 is long and is half recorded...
Lynda
Hi Sonia -
Here is Section 5 -
https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/rover0109_05_various_128kb.mp3 - 29:24
Lynda
Here is Section 5 -
https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/rover0109_05_various_128kb.mp3 - 29:24
Lynda
what is the length please ?Lmnei wrote: ↑June 6th, 2021, 6:25 pmHere is Section 4 -
https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/rover0109_04_various_128kb.mp3
thank you for letting me know, Lynda, and it's not a problem, I can give you a one-month extension on it, so you can finish without stress.Section 8 is long and is half recorded...
And thanks for the other two stories, will listen to them soon !
Sonia
I will be on vacation from Wednesday 27 March till Sunday 14 April
and unable to PL during that time. Thank you for your patience.
and unable to PL during that time. Thank you for your patience.
ok, I already had time to listen to section 4, what a lovely romantic story...though I suspected they may have "acted" the illness so they could get married I'm such a suspicious person.Lmnei wrote: ↑June 6th, 2021, 6:25 pmHere is Section 4 -
https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/rover0109_04_various_128kb.mp3
Nicely narrated, Lynda, and easy to understand, thank you so much. It was a long section, well done. However I found a few errors and stumbles, that may get edited still, if you wouldn't mind:
> at 0:35: "the romance of physic" – you say "psychic"
> at 12:21: (p. 133) "the blooming verdure" – you say "booming vendure", unless my ears are deceiving me
> at 16:40: (p. 133) repeat: "the great hall clock struck eleven" – first version can get cut
> at 26:20: (p. 134) stumble and repeat: "laughter degu – disgusted him" – "degu" can easily get cut out
> at 26:46: (p. 134) April, 16th 183-" – you say "eighteen three", I would suggest "eighteen thirty..." letting the voice trail off a bit or adding "blank" or "something" to show that it's in the thirties when this happened
> at 28:20: (p. 134) "your friend and ob't serv't" – I think the phrasing usually runs "obedient servant" in the context of the ending of a letter
> at 36:44: (p. 135) stumble and repeat": "in the babe which she held in hers - in her arms" – "in hers" can get cut
thanks, will try to listen to the next section soon
Sonia
I will be on vacation from Wednesday 27 March till Sunday 14 April
and unable to PL during that time. Thank you for your patience.
and unable to PL during that time. Thank you for your patience.
this was a funny outcome, and yes, I totally believe the popular story that it was Kaled coming for his beloved Maami. Good on themLmnei wrote: ↑June 6th, 2021, 7:20 pmHere is Section 5 -
https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/rover0109_05_various_128kb.mp3 - 29:24
Another nice narration, thank you, Lynda. Here I only found two small edits to be made:
> at 0:33: "section 5" – you say "section 4"
> at 7:24: (p. 135) stumble and repeat: "not the least bit strange" – first version can get cut
thanks, and looking forward to the final story
Sonia
I will be on vacation from Wednesday 27 March till Sunday 14 April
and unable to PL during that time. Thank you for your patience.
and unable to PL during that time. Thank you for your patience.