[COMPLETE][Magazine][Short Stories]The Rover Vol. 01 No. 09 - kit

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I thought it was clear. You rendered it wonderfully. Amusing misunderstanding! You are PL OK. :thumbs:
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neecheelok70 wrote: April 25th, 2021, 5:49 am I thought it was clear. You rendered it wonderfully. Amusing misunderstanding! You are PL OK. :thumbs:
thank you, that was ultra fast :shock:

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as I haven't heard back from the new volunteer, and no minute-test has yet been started, sections 4 and 5 are up for grabs again. Back to Readers Wanted.

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Hi Sonia -

I will do them saying I am up recording my section right now anyways...

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Lmnei wrote: May 5th, 2021, 12:05 amI will do them saying I am up recording my section right now anyways...
you want both sections ? All right, thank you, Lynda, that makes us back fully claimed then :9:

have fun recording

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Kitty wrote: May 5th, 2021, 12:07 am
Lmnei wrote: May 5th, 2021, 12:05 amI will do them saying I am up recording my section right now anyways...
you want both sections ? All right, thank you, Lynda, that makes us back fully claimed then :9:

have fun recording

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Yes please - I warmed up on Section 3 - it is now recorded.

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Lmnei wrote: May 5th, 2021, 12:55 amI warmed up on Section 3 - it is now recorded.
wait...section 3 has already been recorded by Jim ! I hope you are not doing work double. :? Well if you did, since it's a poem, it can always be offered to the monthly poetry collection.

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Kitty wrote: May 5th, 2021, 1:13 am
Lmnei wrote: May 5th, 2021, 12:55 amI warmed up on Section 3 - it is now recorded.
wait...section 3 has already been recorded by Jim ! I hope you are not doing work double. :? Well if you did, since it's a poem, it can always be offered to the monthly poetry collection.

Sonia
Sorry! Section 4 NOT 3...

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Lmnei wrote: May 5th, 2021, 1:29 amSorry! Section 4 NOT 3...
:thumbs: reassuring :mrgreen:

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Hi Sonia -

Just completing my sections right now - the text is hard to read from at times!

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Here is Section 4 -

https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/rover0109_04_various_128kb.mp3

Section 5 is soon to follow....

Section 8 is long and is half recorded...

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Hi Sonia -

Here is Section 5 -

https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/rover0109_05_various_128kb.mp3 - 29:24

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Lmnei wrote: June 6th, 2021, 6:25 pmHere is Section 4 -
https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/rover0109_04_various_128kb.mp3
what is the length please ?
Section 8 is long and is half recorded...
thank you for letting me know, Lynda, and it's not a problem, I can give you a one-month extension on it, so you can finish without stress.

And thanks for the other two stories, will listen to them soon !

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Lmnei wrote: June 6th, 2021, 6:25 pmHere is Section 4 -
https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/rover0109_04_various_128kb.mp3
ok, I already had time to listen to section 4, what a lovely romantic story...though I suspected they may have "acted" the illness so they could get married :lol: I'm such a suspicious person. :mrgreen:

Nicely narrated, Lynda, and easy to understand, thank you so much. It was a long section, well done. However I found a few errors and stumbles, that may get edited still, if you wouldn't mind:

> at 0:35: "the romance of physic" – you say "psychic"

> at 12:21: (p. 133) "the blooming verdure" – you say "booming vendure", unless my ears are deceiving me :?

> at 16:40: (p. 133) repeat: "the great hall clock struck eleven" – first version can get cut

> at 26:20: (p. 134) stumble and repeat: "laughter degu – disgusted him" – "degu" can easily get cut out

> at 26:46: (p. 134) April, 16th 183-" – you say "eighteen three", I would suggest "eighteen thirty..." letting the voice trail off a bit or adding "blank" or "something" to show that it's in the thirties when this happened

> at 28:20: (p. 134) "your friend and ob't serv't" – I think the phrasing usually runs "obedient servant" in the context of the ending of a letter

> at 36:44: (p. 135) stumble and repeat": "in the babe which she held in hers - in her arms" – "in hers" can get cut

thanks, will try to listen to the next section soon

Sonia
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Lmnei wrote: June 6th, 2021, 7:20 pmHere is Section 5 -
https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/rover0109_05_various_128kb.mp3 - 29:24
:lol: this was a funny outcome, and yes, I totally believe the popular story that it was Kaled coming for his beloved Maami. Good on them :thumbs:

Another nice narration, thank you, Lynda. Here I only found two small edits to be made:

> at 0:33: "section 5" – you say "section 4"

> at 7:24: (p. 135) stumble and repeat: "not the least bit strange" – first version can get cut

thanks, and looking forward to the final story 8-)

Sonia
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