[COMPLETE][Magazine][Short Stories]The Rover Vol. 01 No. 09 - kit
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I thought it was clear. You rendered it wonderfully. Amusing misunderstanding! You are PL OK.
thank you, that was ultra fastneecheelok70 wrote: ↑April 25th, 2021, 5:49 am I thought it was clear. You rendered it wonderfully. Amusing misunderstanding! You are PL OK.
Sonia
Yes please - I warmed up on Section 3 - it is now recorded.
Lynda
Here is Section 4 -
https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/rover0109_04_various_128kb.mp3
Section 5 is soon to follow....
Section 8 is long and is half recorded...
Lynda
https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/rover0109_04_various_128kb.mp3
Section 5 is soon to follow....
Section 8 is long and is half recorded...
Lynda
Hi Sonia -
Here is Section 5 -
https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/rover0109_05_various_128kb.mp3 - 29:24
Lynda
Here is Section 5 -
https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/rover0109_05_various_128kb.mp3 - 29:24
Lynda
what is the length please ?Lmnei wrote: ↑June 6th, 2021, 6:25 pmHere is Section 4 -
https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/rover0109_04_various_128kb.mp3
thank you for letting me know, Lynda, and it's not a problem, I can give you a one-month extension on it, so you can finish without stress.Section 8 is long and is half recorded...
And thanks for the other two stories, will listen to them soon !
Sonia
ok, I already had time to listen to section 4, what a lovely romantic story...though I suspected they may have "acted" the illness so they could get married I'm such a suspicious person.Lmnei wrote: ↑June 6th, 2021, 6:25 pmHere is Section 4 -
https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/rover0109_04_various_128kb.mp3
Nicely narrated, Lynda, and easy to understand, thank you so much. It was a long section, well done. However I found a few errors and stumbles, that may get edited still, if you wouldn't mind:
> at 0:35: "the romance of physic" – you say "psychic"
> at 12:21: (p. 133) "the blooming verdure" – you say "booming vendure", unless my ears are deceiving me
> at 16:40: (p. 133) repeat: "the great hall clock struck eleven" – first version can get cut
> at 26:20: (p. 134) stumble and repeat: "laughter degu – disgusted him" – "degu" can easily get cut out
> at 26:46: (p. 134) April, 16th 183-" – you say "eighteen three", I would suggest "eighteen thirty..." letting the voice trail off a bit or adding "blank" or "something" to show that it's in the thirties when this happened
> at 28:20: (p. 134) "your friend and ob't serv't" – I think the phrasing usually runs "obedient servant" in the context of the ending of a letter
> at 36:44: (p. 135) stumble and repeat": "in the babe which she held in hers - in her arms" – "in hers" can get cut
thanks, will try to listen to the next section soon
Sonia
this was a funny outcome, and yes, I totally believe the popular story that it was Kaled coming for his beloved Maami. Good on themLmnei wrote: ↑June 6th, 2021, 7:20 pmHere is Section 5 -
https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/rover0109_05_various_128kb.mp3 - 29:24
Another nice narration, thank you, Lynda. Here I only found two small edits to be made:
> at 0:33: "section 5" – you say "section 4"
> at 7:24: (p. 135) stumble and repeat: "not the least bit strange" – first version can get cut
thanks, and looking forward to the final story
Sonia