[COMPLETE][History]World's Story 15: The World War - kit

[neecheelok70]

May I have 31 and 39? Jim

[adr6090]

https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/worldstory15_11_dresser_128kb.mp3 time19:43
Here is section 11 & the Kitchener mob is now en route.....

[Kitty]

May I have 31 and 39? Jim

of course, thank you Jim

Sonia

[Kitty]

https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/worldstory15_11_dresser_128kb.mp3 time19:43
Here is section 11 & the Kitchener mob is now en route.....

thank you, April, always interesting, what "Kitchener's Mob" is up to nice narrative, and excellent French pronunciation

Just two notes to correct:

> at 0:44: (p. 44) missed part of sentence (underlined): "his bayonet, the long single-edged blade"

> from 16:24-19:38: for some reason, the last 2 pages are repeated here, starting from the end of page 50 "Within a few moments" till the end of the section. You can cut all this, or maybe check which version you wanted to keep

Thanks

Sonia

[adr6090]

Hello Sonia
I will get the issues that you have mentioned taken care of.
Thank you,
April

https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/worldstory15_11_dresser_128kb.mp3 time19:43
Here is section 11 & the Kitchener mob is now en route.....

thank you, April, always interesting, what "Kitchener's Mob" is up to nice narrative, and excellent French pronunciation

Just two notes to correct:

> at 0:44: (p. 44) missed part of sentence (underlined): "his bayonet, the long single-edged blade"

> from 16:24-19:38: for some reason, the last 2 pages are repeated here, starting from the end of page 50 "Within a few moments" till the end of the section. You can cut all this, or maybe check which version you wanted to keep

Thanks

Sonia

[adr6090]

Sonia,
Here is my edited file.

https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/worldstory15_11_dresser_128kb.mp3 time 16:29

[neecheelok70]

Here is Section 26:

https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/worldstory15_26_dresser_128kb.mp3

20:09

Jim

[Kitty]

Here is my edited file.
https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/worldstory15_11_dresser_128kb.mp3 time 16:29

thank you April, all PL ok now

Sonia

[Kitty]

Here is Section 26:
https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/worldstory15_26_dresser_128kb.mp3

action packed ! thanks, Jim.

I only found a small spot to correct:

> at 14:17: (p. 155) stumble and repeat: "the admirable McSnape" – can be cut once. Also I think "M'Snape" is the abbreviation for "MacSnape". I have encountered that quite often already in old books. Sometimes you say "Mac" sometimes only "M". This is optional however, no need to correct it everywhere

Thanks

Sonia

[Kitty]

and here are my last two shorties, for whenever you have time to PL, Jim thanks

https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/worldstory15_01_dresser_128kb.mp3
Recording time: 2:56 min.

https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/worldstory15_02_dresser_128kb.mp3
Recording time: 2:32 min.

Sonia

[neecheelok70]

Sections 1 and2 are perfectly PL OK. Jim

[Kitty]

Sections 1 and2 are perfectly PL OK. Jim

thank you, Jim

Sonia

[neecheelok70]

Here is the corrected 26:

https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/worldstory15_26_dresser_128kb.mp3

20:07

Jim

I started to go back to fix the McSnakes, but I then realized you would have to go back and PL them. But if you want me to, I gladly will.

[Kitty]

Here is the corrected 26:
https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/worldstory15_26_dresser_128kb.mp3
I started to go back to fix the McSnakes, but I then realized you would have to go back and PL them. But if you want me to, I gladly will.

no it's not necessary, otherwise I would have given you the time stamps. No worries. So you only corrected that one repeat ? Then it's PL ok, thanks

Sonia

[neecheelok70]

Yes, only the repeat. Thanks. Jim