(Complete) The Heart of a Dog by Albert Payson Terhune - lt
Section 16: 9:39-9:43 there’s a long silence
25:45-47, stumble over word and silence
I did notice that there's quite a bit of stammering and stumbling over words. I couldn't catch the times though because of their brevity, but do you want to try re-recording? Sometimes just reading it the second time can help the words flow better. I'm ok with marking it PL OK once you correct the above-mentioned answers, but I did want to give you the option of re-recording if that makes you more comfortable.
25:45-47, stumble over word and silence
I did notice that there's quite a bit of stammering and stumbling over words. I couldn't catch the times though because of their brevity, but do you want to try re-recording? Sometimes just reading it the second time can help the words flow better. I'm ok with marking it PL OK once you correct the above-mentioned answers, but I did want to give you the option of re-recording if that makes you more comfortable.
Section 19:
I think you might want to reread this one. Your reading is so speedy that it's very difficult for me to understand what you're saying, and it leads to long pauses so you can catch your breath (which is completely understandable). There's also some "squelching" sounds that occur when you're out of breath. I hope you don't take this the wrong way, you did an excellent job reading, it's just a little quick for the rest of us
I think you might want to reread this one. Your reading is so speedy that it's very difficult for me to understand what you're saying, and it leads to long pauses so you can catch your breath (which is completely understandable). There's also some "squelching" sounds that occur when you're out of breath. I hope you don't take this the wrong way, you did an excellent job reading, it's just a little quick for the rest of us
That's a bit weird. I've checked my MP3 file at home and it seems good, and I just listened to the file linked to in the Magic Window and the audio is there too. Are you still not hearing the audio after the intro?
Thanks,
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Thanks for the feedback! I’ll re-record it on my next session.Maddie wrote: ↑June 21st, 2021, 5:52 pm Section 19:
I think you might want to reread this one. Your reading is so speedy that it's very difficult for me to understand what you're saying, and it leads to long pauses so you can catch your breath (which is completely understandable). There's also some "squelching" sounds that occur when you're out of breath. I hope you don't take this the wrong way, you did an excellent job reading, it's just a little quick for the rest of us
2 Timothy 1:7. Look it up.
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Hi! Here's the corrected files (so sorry for the delay, I've been attending full time conservatory)
https://librivox.org/uploads/lynnet/heartofadog_15_terhune_128kb.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/lynnet/heartofadog_16_terhune_128kb.mp3
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https://librivox.org/uploads/lynnet/heartofadog_15_terhune_128kb.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/lynnet/heartofadog_16_terhune_128kb.mp3
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Thank youawonski wrote: ↑June 30th, 2021, 6:13 am Hi! Here's the corrected files (so sorry for the delay, I've been attending full time conservatory)
https://librivox.org/uploads/lynnet/heartofadog_15_terhune_128kb.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/lynnet/heartofadog_16_terhune_128kb.mp3
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Never mind; Audacity is acting up so I will need to figure that out. Till my next recording session, then...(Pity since this is such a lovely chapter. )Bookworm360 wrote: ↑June 28th, 2021, 9:48 amThanks for the feedback! I’ll re-record it on my next session.Maddie wrote: ↑June 21st, 2021, 5:52 pm Section 19:
I think you might want to reread this one. Your reading is so speedy that it's very difficult for me to understand what you're saying, and it leads to long pauses so you can catch your breath (which is completely understandable). There's also some "squelching" sounds that occur when you're out of breath. I hope you don't take this the wrong way, you did an excellent job reading, it's just a little quick for the rest of us
2 Timothy 1:7. Look it up.
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