Complete-[CHILD/NATURE] Our Feathered Friends, by Elizabeth & Joseph Grinnel-ag
Enjoyed listening to these very much.slgill wrote: ↑March 2nd, 2021, 4:43 pm Hi,
Here is Chapter 21- https://librivox.org/uploads/alg1001/ourfeatheredfriends_21_grinnell_128kb.mp3
File length- 07:07
Hope you enjoy!
Sue
Both chapter 1 and 21 are PL OK.
Thanks,
M
Thank you. Both of these are now PL OK.Smilingjade wrote: ↑March 2nd, 2021, 2:43 pmHello, I revised with the changes and here are the files...https://librivox.org/uploads/alg1001/ourfeatheredfriends_10_grinnell_128kb.mp3mleigh wrote: ↑February 28th, 2021, 7:07 pmThe two chapters were interesting to listen to and you did a nice job with the reading. That being said, however, there are a few small changes to be made to the files.Smilingjade wrote: ↑February 27th, 2021, 5:09 pm Hello,
I have completed reading Chapter 10 : https://librivox.org/uploads/alg1001/ourfeatheredfriends_10_grinnell_128kb.mp3 duration 07:45
as well as Chapter 11 : https://librivox.org/uploads/alg1001/ourfeatheredfriends_11_grinnell_128kb.mp3 duration 10:33
Please review and provide feedback.
Appreciate the opportunity to read and thank you.
SmilingJade
Both files have background noise throughout. Running the files through Noise Reduction in Audacity should clean up a lot of that.
Also, the instructions ask to put your (optional) name at only the beginning or end of the recording, not in both places.
Additional items for Chapter 10
1. At ~1:44, delete the caption "Chimney Swift"
2. At ~2:21, delete the caption "Arkansas Goldfinch"
3. At ~7:10, change "when" to "which" in "when he could make as good a meal"
4. At either 0:16 or 7:39 remove "read by smilingjade". You do not need to remove both.
Additional items for Chapter 11
1. You should have a little more silence at the beginning, add around 0.5 seconds
2. At either 0:16 or 10:26 remove "read by smilingjade". You do not need to remove both.
Please let us know if you would like any assistance with these.
Thanks,
M
https://librivox.org/uploads/alg1001/ourfeatheredfriends_11_grinnell_128kb.mp3
Thank you and hope that fixed the feedback you provided.
SmilingJade
M
Your singing was great! It really fit in perfectly in my opinion. (Now my singing on the other hand...)Bookworm360 wrote: ↑March 1st, 2021, 9:35 am Here's 15(please excuse my terrible singing and pity my future kids )!
https://librivox.org/uploads/alg1001/ourfeatheredfriends_15_grinnell_128kb.mp3
Just a few minor tweaks needed to mark this PL OK - and none involve your singing.
You have a little too much silence at both the beginning and the end. There should be between .5 and 1 second of silence at the start, I suggest you remove about .5 seconds.
At the end, it should be around 5 seconds. so a little over 1 second should be removed here.
I also recommend that you run the file through a noise reduction to cleanup some of the extraneous background noises.
Please let me know if you would like an assistance with that.
You did a really nice job with the chapter.
Thanks,
M
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All right, will do! (And thank you for boosting my singing confidence )
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Thank you!briannag wrote: ↑March 4th, 2021, 10:22 pm https://librivox.org/uploads/alg1001/ourfeatheredfriends_24_grinnell128kb.mp3
Here is chapter 24. Time is 7:08.
Please let me know if I need to make any edits!
-Brianna
Stand by for your proof listening report.
On the road again, so delays are possible
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briannag wrote: ↑March 4th, 2021, 10:22 pm https://librivox.org/uploads/alg1001/ourfeatheredfriends_24_grinnell128kb.mp3
Here is chapter 24. Time is 7:08.
Please let me know if I need to make any edits!
-Brianna
Chapter 24 was beautifully done - just two minor issues with the length of the silences at the start and finish.
There is a little two much silence at the start - it should be no more than 1 sec. Something to pay attention to in future recordings.
The end should have no more than 5 seconds of silence. Please remove ~ 2 seconds of what you have.
Thanks,
M
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Here is Chapter 9. Run time is 7:47
https://librivox.org/uploads/alg1001/ourfeatheredfriends_09_grinnell_128kb.mp3
Thanks,
Andrea
https://librivox.org/uploads/alg1001/ourfeatheredfriends_09_grinnell_128kb.mp3
Thanks,
Andrea
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Thank you!HeartsandStars wrote: ↑March 7th, 2021, 4:41 pm Here is Chapter 9. Run time is 7:47
https://librivox.org/uploads/alg1001/ourfeatheredfriends_09_grinnell_128kb.mp3
Thanks,
Andrea
This is Ready for PL.
On the road again, so delays are possible
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https://librivox.org/uploads/alg1001/ourfeatheredfriends_24_grinnell128kb.mp3mleigh wrote: ↑March 7th, 2021, 10:00 ambriannag wrote: ↑March 4th, 2021, 10:22 pm https://librivox.org/uploads/alg1001/ourfeatheredfriends_24_grinnell128kb.mp3
Here is chapter 24. Time is 7:08.
Please let me know if I need to make any edits!
-Brianna
Chapter 24 was beautifully done - just two minor issues with the length of the silences at the start and finish.
There is a little two much silence at the start - it should be no more than 1 sec. Something to pay attention to in future recordings.
The end should have no more than 5 seconds of silence. Please remove ~ 2 seconds of what you have.
Thanks,
M
Here is the edited version of chapter 24. Time is 7:05
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Great!briannag wrote: ↑March 7th, 2021, 9:52 pmhttps://librivox.org/uploads/alg1001/ourfeatheredfriends_24_grinnell128kb.mp3mleigh wrote: ↑March 7th, 2021, 10:00 ambriannag wrote: ↑March 4th, 2021, 10:22 pm https://librivox.org/uploads/alg1001/ourfeatheredfriends_24_grinnell128kb.mp3
Here is chapter 24. Time is 7:08.
Please let me know if I need to make any edits!
-Brianna
Chapter 24 was beautifully done - just two minor issues with the length of the silences at the start and finish.
There is a little two much silence at the start - it should be no more than 1 sec. Something to pay attention to in future recordings.
The end should have no more than 5 seconds of silence. Please remove ~ 2 seconds of what you have.
Thanks,
M
Here is the edited version of chapter 24. Time is 7:05
MW Updated and Ready for Spot PL.
On the road again, so delays are possible
~ Larry
~ Larry
Hi,
Here is Ch. 22 "More About Our Robin"- https://librivox.org/uploads/alg1001/ourfeatheredfriends_22_grinnell_128kb.mp3
File length- 09:18
Hope all is good with this! Thanks!
Sue
Here is Ch. 22 "More About Our Robin"- https://librivox.org/uploads/alg1001/ourfeatheredfriends_22_grinnell_128kb.mp3
File length- 09:18
Hope all is good with this! Thanks!
Sue
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Thank you!slgill wrote: ↑March 8th, 2021, 4:13 pm Hi,
Here is Ch. 22 "More About Our Robin"- https://librivox.org/uploads/alg1001/ourfeatheredfriends_22_grinnell_128kb.mp3
File length- 09:18
Hope all is good with this! Thanks!
Sue
We will have a PL report for you soon.
On the road again, so delays are possible
~ Larry
~ Larry