Phew, that was a long one! Well done for getting through that for your first recording
Very nicely read, but there are a few bits to be fixed. I suggest that you work from the end of these notes backwards, then the time stamps will all remain the same in audacity.
File name should be wildanimalshome_04_seton_128kb
3:28 A phone goes off during the line 'But at length I was eyewitness of an episode that explained the puzzle.'
3:58 I heard 'that I saw them single file
in' but this should say 'that I saw them signally fail
8:12 - 8:15 The silence here is around a second too long, and there is a 'clunk' at 8:13
10:13 i heard 'He would not
trot a few steps out of my way, then turn and gaze at me' but this should be 'He would trot...'
13:46 I heard 'Then the mountains veered suddenly' but this should be 'Then the mountain breeze veered suddenly'. There is also a phone noise here.
16:11 - 16:15 the silence here is slightly too long.
(optional) 16:15 I wouldn't usual mention pronunciation errors in PL, but this one changes the meaning of the text. It should be the 'bugling' (as in bew-gling) elk, rather than bulging
(optional) 17:37 'bulging' here should again bugling
20:12 In the sentence 'one was fencing and was still perlite' there is a stumble before the word 'perlite' (i think perlite is supposed to a phonetic spelling of 'polite)
20:48-53 The silence here is too long
21:23 There is a phone noise in 'a perfect incarnation of brute ferocity and hate' (you might want to start muting your phone during recording sessions
24:48 -55 The silence is too long. Generally I dont leave more than 2 seconds of silence anywhere, as listeners might think it stopped playing.
30:27-34 The silence is too long
33:25-30 The silence is too long
33:30 The title 'The Siren Call' is missing
36:00 I heard 'it might have been a wolf or
a Bear' but this should be 'it might have been the "woof" of
37:25 Phone noise in 'It all seemed so natural'
38:14-18 Silence is too long
43:40-45 Silence is too long
49:04 Phone noise in 'or the well-known ranges.'
50:48 'End of wild animals at home...' can be removed, as this is not the final chapter.