[COMPLETE] The Story of Japan by Robert Van Bergen - availle
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Are section 25 and 26 PL ok?
WW
WW
I was going to let you work through the issues identified in section 27 and then give you time to address similar issues in these two sections before listening to them. Would it help if I listened to them now?
Michael
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Its fine ill edit section 27 in the day and then post it when completed
WW
WW
Michael:
I was so thrilled that Section 30 PL oked . Frankly I was getting a little frustrated earlier.
Uploaded section 28 and 29 . Will wait for your feedback. Thanks.
28 - 12:30
29 - 6:53
https://librivox.org/uploads/availle/storyjapan_28_vanbergen_128kb.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/availle/storyjapan_29_vanbergen_128kb.mp3
I was so thrilled that Section 30 PL oked . Frankly I was getting a little frustrated earlier.
Uploaded section 28 and 29 . Will wait for your feedback. Thanks.
28 - 12:30
29 - 6:53
https://librivox.org/uploads/availle/storyjapan_28_vanbergen_128kb.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/availle/storyjapan_29_vanbergen_128kb.mp3
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I recall that I also had some frustrating technical issues when I was starting here and almost gave up. I'm glad that I didn't.
Both are PL OK! The length here are reversed, but I fixed that.28 - 12:30
29 - 6:53
Thanks!
Michael
Thank you, Rita!RitaBoutros wrote: ↑January 7th, 2021, 6:34 am Sec 19:
https://librivox.org/uploads/availle/storyjapan_19_vanbergen_128kb.mp3
15:25
Michael
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https://librivox.org/uploads/availle/storyjapan_27_vanbergen_128kb.mp3
Hope section 27 pl ok now
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Hope section 27 pl ok now
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Thank you! I'm glad you got your editing questions answered. Will PL tomorrow.WanderingWalker wrote: ↑January 8th, 2021, 2:04 pm https://librivox.org/uploads/availle/storyjapan_27_vanbergen_128kb.mp3
Hope section 27 pl ok now
15.25
Michael
Could you delete the repetition of "section 19" after the disclaimer (0:22)? It's not part of this project's intro format. I just realized that I missed this issue in your other two sections, but you don't need to change those. It's not important enough to un-OK a section.RitaBoutros wrote: ↑January 7th, 2021, 6:34 am Sec 19:
https://librivox.org/uploads/availle/storyjapan_19_vanbergen_128kb.mp3
15:25
Thanks!
Michael
The first half of this section, which I had PLed, is fine, but starting the second half I found several issues within the space of a minute:WanderingWalker wrote: ↑January 8th, 2021, 2:04 pm https://librivox.org/uploads/availle/storyjapan_27_vanbergen_128kb.mp3
Hope section 27 pl ok now
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(7:12) p. 186 missing words "however, he"
(7:18) large volume drop
(7:18) several words missing "Both... and when"
(8:03) repeat: "government"
(8:06) editing cue left in
Please understand that we expect readers to check their recording and fix any such issues that they find before the file is uploaded for the first time. PLing is a double-check, not the first check. It's rare that the PL finds more than a couple of these even in a longer recording. Please let me know when you've done that and I'll PL the rest of the section.
Thanks,
Michael
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https://librivox.org/uploads/availle/storyjapan_27_vanbergen_128kb.mp3
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made the edits requested and sorted the volume and hope this is pl ok now
Thank you so much for the advice and pointers given so far i really appreciate it
WanderwingWalker
15.28
made the edits requested and sorted the volume and hope this is pl ok now
Thank you so much for the advice and pointers given so far i really appreciate it
WanderwingWalker
Thank you. I'm glad to help. Before I PL it, I'd like to verify one question, because it wasn't clear from your message: have you checked the remainder of this section yourself (now or earlier) for repetitions, missing words and other issues of the kind that I've asked you to fix so far? I want to make sure I've been able to communicate our expected process.WanderingWalker wrote: ↑January 9th, 2021, 11:57 am https://librivox.org/uploads/availle/storyjapan_27_vanbergen_128kb.mp3
15.28
made the edits requested and sorted the volume and hope this is pl ok now
Thank you so much for the advice and pointers given so far i really appreciate it
WanderwingWalker
Michael
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Yes done the edits listed from listening to it so far