PL Okay for Chapter 13.

Lora
Hi Roy!Roypercy wrote: ↑January 9th, 2021, 5:33 pmHi Andrew:
I got your message, and I am still planning on reading the chapters I requested. I'm sorry, I can't figure out how to reply to your message! I seem not to have made enough posts to be abe to use that feature. I'll submit the 1-minute sample shortly and let me know if it's OK. I'm new to this, so if you want to go with someone else I totally understand. I got caught up in work at the end of the year and am now just digging myself out.
Best
Roy
It's all yours - thank you!
Hello!ADKreader1122 wrote: ↑December 28th, 2020, 10:54 amHello, Sarah (suzu94),
I enjoyed your recordings of chapters 7 and 8. Chapter 8 is PL Okay. For chapter 7, I have a few PL notes for you to please review. I think the meaning of the text will be clearer with the corrections.
At 7:22 in chapter 7, please change "immorial" to "immemorial" in "...the high and immemorial dreamers..." At 7:42 and 7:46, please change "arbors" to "abhors" and at 13:08 change "appreciation" to "apprehension" in "...of his own apprehension of the..."
Thank you so much!
Lora
Great - it's yours. Thanks!