COMPLETE: Studies in Stagecraft, by Clayton Hamilton - jo

ADKreader1122 · Post by **ADKreader1122** » December 20th, 2020, 2:09 pm

Noah--
Chapter 3 is PL Okay-thanks for making the fixes.

Lora

ADKreader1122 · Post by **ADKreader1122** » December 20th, 2020, 2:28 pm

Hi Andrew,
Chapter 1 is PL Okay.

Thanks,
Lora

ADKreader1122 · Post by **ADKreader1122** » December 20th, 2020, 2:55 pm

Hi Jo,
PL Okay for chapter 2--thank you!

Lora

December 20th, 2020, 3:33 pm

Thanks, Lora.

ADKreader1122 · Post by **ADKreader1122** » December 21st, 2020, 3:14 pm

Hello Noah,
One PL note for chapter 22--between 18:43 and 18:55 there is a repetition of the sentence, "In the case of a new author, his ambitious four-act play will probably be bad." Please omit one. Thank you!

Lora

ADKreader1122 · Post by **ADKreader1122** » December 22nd, 2020, 2:43 pm

Hi Noah,
Great job on chapter 15; it is PL Okay.

Thank you--
Lora

OooThatsNifty · Post by **OooThatsNifty** » December 24th, 2020, 11:30 am

Lora - I've added Chapter 10 to the MW, ready for PL when you get a chance. Apologies for my French pronunciation, it's beyond rusty. I hope it's not too distracting, but I don't mind giving those bits another shot if need be. Let me know

Thanks to everyone for the great work so far!

suzu94 · Post by **suzu94** » December 27th, 2020, 11:25 am

here's chapters 7 and 8- both ready for PL!

https://librivox.org/uploads/knotyouraveragejo/studiesinstagecraft_07_hamilton_128kp.mp3

https://librivox.org/uploads/knotyouraveragejo/studiesinstagecraft_08_hamilton_128kp.mp3

also, I'd happily do chapters 9 and 11 since they're open

OooThatsNifty · Post by **OooThatsNifty** » December 27th, 2020, 11:32 am

suzu94 wrote: ↑December 27th, 2020, 11:25 am here's chapters 7 and 8- both ready for PL!

https://librivox.org/uploads/knotyouraveragejo/studiesinstagecraft_07_hamilton_128kp.mp3

https://librivox.org/uploads/knotyouraveragejo/studiesinstagecraft_08_hamilton_128kp.mp3

also, I'd happily do chapters 9 and 11 since they're open

Thanks very much! I've added these to the MW for PL, and signed you up for 9 & 11.

One small thing - when you post your links, don't forget to also post the length of the files in mm:ss. Helps keep everything running smoothly

Post by **ToddHW** » December 27th, 2020, 3:37 pm

Section 4 recorded. Must edit.

Thanks, Todd

ADKreader1122 · Post by **ADKreader1122** » December 28th, 2020, 10:54 am

Hello, Sarah (suzu94),
I enjoyed your recordings of chapters 7 and 8. Chapter 8 is PL Okay. For chapter 7, I have a few PL notes for you to please review. I think the meaning of the text will be clearer with the corrections.

At 7:22 in chapter 7, please change "immorial" to "immemorial" in "...the high and immemorial dreamers..." At 7:42 and 7:46, please change "arbors" to "abhors" and at 13:08 change "appreciation" to "apprehension" in "...of his own apprehension of the..."

Thank you so much!
Lora

ADKreader1122 · Post by **ADKreader1122** » December 28th, 2020, 12:21 pm

Hi Andrew,
Your French pronunciation was fine--and chapter 10 is PL Okay.

Thank you,
Lora

Post by **ToddHW** » December 30th, 2020, 9:29 am

Here is Section 4. Length 11:24.

https://librivox.org/uploads/knotyouraveragejo/studiesinstagecraft_04_hamilton_128kb.mp3

Thanks, Todd

ADKreader1122 · Post by **ADKreader1122** » December 30th, 2020, 2:58 pm

Hi Todd,
Chapter 4 is PL Okay-nice job!

Thank you,
Lora

Post by **ToddHW** » January 1st, 2021, 6:50 am

Glad you liked it. I was really pleased that thanks to Librivox, I understood the references to the various plays - I have played in most of them here!

Here is Chapter 13. Length 12:05

https://librivox.org/uploads/knotyouraveragejo/studiesinstagecraft_13_hamilton_128kb.mp3

Thanks, Todd