Very enjoyable reading! There are a few things to correct. I'm not sure if you accidentally uploaded the unedited version of your audio because there are quite a few repeats of misread text. However, I went ahead and listed for you everything that needs to be edited out.RozeLynn wrote: ↑October 29th, 2020, 7:09 pmHere's Section 5!
Time was 21:31.
Beginning- there is ~3 seconds of silence. Can you please cut it down to between 0.5 and 1 second?
7:09- misread and repeat of "And as he hopped along...those briars without being terribly scratched." The correct phrase is repeated at 7:26 so you can cut out the one at 7:09 with the mistake.
8:15- misread and repeat of "There it was again- Thump, thump thump! It had an ugly, threatening sound." The correct phrase is repeated at 8:26.
9:19- misread and repeat of "It was very clear that this was just what the other proposed to do if his thumps meant anything at all." The correct phrase is repeated at 9:30.
11:30- missing text "I'll live on one side, and you live on the other," replied Tommy. And so it was agreed."
13:31- misread and repeat of "-but I have to keep on". The correct phrase is repeat at 13:33.
17:51- misread and repeat of "In the moonlight he and Peter...they must need sit up every minute or so to stop." The correct phrase is repeated at 18:06.
Ending- the silence at the end need to be trimmed to ~5 seconds