[FULL] Triumphant Democracy by Andrew Carnegie - tg

msfry · Post by **msfry** » December 6th, 2020, 2:09 pm

Marya999 wrote: ↑
December 6th, 2020, 2:03 pm
Thank you May I read #15, Ch 12, Trade and Commerce?

Marya

You're in the MW. Fire away!

msfry · Post by **msfry** » December 6th, 2020, 2:54 pm

Section 30 is uploaded.

https://librivox.org/uploads/triciag/triumphantdemocracy_30_carnegie_128kb.mp3 25:49

Over to you again, Wayne.

Kalamareader · Post by **Kalamareader** » December 6th, 2020, 3:16 pm

It will be Tuesday, but I promise I will get to it.

I am sorry I will be done with it. Very interesting and I love you narrations.

msfry · Post by **msfry** » December 6th, 2020, 4:13 pm

Kalamareader wrote: ↑
December 6th, 2020, 3:16 pm
It will be Tuesday, but I promise I will get to it.

I am sorry I will be done with it. Very interesting and I love you narrations.

Done? Maybe not. You could claim another section, and I may also claim a few more and then I will need your PL services again.

KevinS · Post by **KevinS** » December 6th, 2020, 7:07 pm

Section 19

https://librivox.org/uploads/triciag/triumphantdemocracy_19_carnegie_128kb.mp3 (20:27)

It's probably for the best that Mr. Carnegie missed the Jazz Age.

mleigh · Post by **mleigh** » December 7th, 2020, 5:32 pm

Here are my two sections for chapter 13 on railways and waterways

16:
https://librivox.org/uploads/triciag/triumphantdemocracy_16_carnegie_128kb.mp3
26:07

17:
https://librivox.org/uploads/triciag/triumphantdemocracy_17_carnegie_128kb.mp3
36:55

In section 17, the author used a series of !'s to emphasize a sentence. I read them in the recording at about 27:56. Let me know if you would like them removed.

Thanks,

M

msfry · Post by **msfry** » December 7th, 2020, 6:09 pm

Thanks Kevin and M. I look forward to listening soon.

Kalamareader · Post by **Kalamareader** » December 8th, 2020, 6:17 pm

msfry wrote: ↑
December 6th, 2020, 2:54 pm
Section 30 is uploaded.

https://librivox.org/uploads/triciag/triumphantdemocracy_30_carnegie_128kb.mp3 25:49

Over to you again, Wayne.

Michele,

Great reading, as always.

Just a few minor corrections:

1:15 Authors name is Bryce, heard By-ee
7:39 Pronunciation should be Guess-ler. (I am sure that is a typo referring to Albrecht Gessler)
8:02 Check here for pronunciation of Trevelyan https://www.pronouncekiwi.com/Trevelyan
13:14 Froude is pronounced Frood
17:13 At the end of this quotation you say "unquote" however at the beginning you don't say "quote".
21:09 You say prejudicial, should be prejudiced. Your call.

Wayne

msfry · Post by **msfry** » December 8th, 2020, 6:36 pm

Frood? Can you give me more of a hint about the oo.

Kalamareader · Post by **Kalamareader** » December 8th, 2020, 10:14 pm

msfry wrote: ↑
December 8th, 2020, 6:36 pm
Frood? Can you give me more of a hint about the oo.

Frood like food. James Anthony Froude (/fruːd/ FROOD;) 23 April 1818 – 20 October 1894 was an English historian, novelist, biographer, and editor of Fraser's Magazine.

Wayne

msfry · Post by **msfry** » December 9th, 2020, 8:19 am

Section 1 is PL OK. Good chapter, good job reading it Bill. Thank you.

msfry · Post by **msfry** » December 9th, 2020, 8:20 am

Section 30 is uploaded with corrections, with the exception of the missing quote/end quote. I found neither.

TIP: Sometimes when the text says something like "Pericles said . . . . .//////////////////////////////", I let the Pericles said substitute for the "quote", but put the "end quote" at the end to separate it from the author's comments. It varies with the circumstances, for the listener's better understanding.

Tn145 · Post by **Tn145** » December 9th, 2020, 9:59 am

Could I claim sections 12,13,14, please?

Thank you, Tanuj

msfry · Post by **msfry** » December 9th, 2020, 10:00 am

PL Notes Section 19

9:15 repeat "The famous blunder in an old pl;iy of ' Enter a king and two fiddlers solus'"

No mention of guitars at all. What would Willie say?

msfry · Post by **msfry** » December 9th, 2020, 10:11 am

Tn145 wrote: ↑
December 9th, 2020, 9:59 am
Could I claim sections 12,13,14, please?

Thank you, Tanuj

Welcome to the project. I see you are claiming many sections in several projects -- probably too many to start out with. Since 12 and 13 are two parts to one chapter, how about I assign you 14, and let's see how that goes. As it is a rather long chapter, (over 5000 words will be around 35 minutes at completion), it will likely take you several hours to record, edit and proof listen your file before submitting it here for a final Proofing. I appreciate your enthusiasm, and look forward to listening. Be sure to read the first post thoroughly. It will tell you exactly how to name your file, where to upload, and what to say at the Intro and Outro.