[group] The White Czar: A Story of a Polar Bear - philc

Solo or group recordings that are finished and fully available for listeners
Post Reply
philchenevert
LibriVox Admin Team
Posts: 24589
Joined: October 17th, 2010, 9:23 pm
Location: Basking by the Bayou
Contact:
Contact philchenevert

Post by philchenevert »

Omarius wrote: ↑November 6th, 2020, 4:22 pm Section 6: https://librivox.org/uploads/philchenevert/whiteczar_06_hawkes_128kb.mp3

First submission, feedback gratefully received!
Thank you. Ignatius, the LibriPenguin of Happiness Image will put this into the Magic Window for proof listening.
"I lost my trousers," said Tom expansively.
89 Decibels? Easy Peasy ! https://youtu.be/aSKR55RDVpk
Top
OneForTheBooks
Posts: 30
Joined: October 3rd, 2020, 1:48 pm

Post by OneForTheBooks »

Here is a link to Section 4. It is 27m 18.06s long.

https://librivox.org/uploads/philchenevert/whiteczar_04_hawkes_128kb.mp3
Top
philchenevert
LibriVox Admin Team
Posts: 24589
Joined: October 17th, 2010, 9:23 pm
Location: Basking by the Bayou
Contact:
Contact philchenevert

Post by philchenevert »

OneForTheBooks wrote: ↑November 8th, 2020, 10:33 am Here is a link to Section 4. It is 27m 18.06s long.

https://librivox.org/uploads/philchenevert/whiteczar_04_hawkes_128kb.mp3
Thank yo u !!!
"I lost my trousers," said Tom expansively.
89 Decibels? Easy Peasy ! https://youtu.be/aSKR55RDVpk
Top
ConanTheReader
Posts: 43
Joined: July 19th, 2020, 9:48 pm

Post by ConanTheReader »

Section 5 complete and ready for check. Cool story.

https://librivox.org/uploads/philchenevert/whiteczar_05_hawkes_128kb.mp3 ....10m37s
Peace
ConanTheReader
Top
philchenevert
LibriVox Admin Team
Posts: 24589
Joined: October 17th, 2010, 9:23 pm
Location: Basking by the Bayou
Contact:
Contact philchenevert

Post by philchenevert »

ConanTheReader wrote: ↑November 8th, 2020, 9:48 pm Section 5 complete and ready for check. Cool story.

https://librivox.org/uploads/philchenevert/whiteczar_05_hawkes_128kb.mp3 ....10m37s
Right! Thanks :clap:
"I lost my trousers," said Tom expansively.
89 Decibels? Easy Peasy ! https://youtu.be/aSKR55RDVpk
Top
RSlabaugh
Posts: 1238
Joined: June 29th, 2019, 6:43 pm
Location: USA

Post by RSlabaugh »

Omarius wrote: ↑November 6th, 2020, 4:22 pm Section 6: https://librivox.org/uploads/philchenevert/whiteczar_06_hawkes_128kb.mp3

First submission, feedback gratefully received!
Good job on your first submission! I do have a few notes for corrections to be made.

*Beginning silence should be a little longer so that the first words don't get chopped off by any player. Most people have it somewhere between .5 - 1 second. (Just not over 1 sec)
~9:03 stumble followed by correction "The young woman shrieked"
~9:43 repeat: "The great silence"
*End silence is around 2.8 seconds and should be ~5 sec.
*Volume is in range, but just barely (currently at 86.1 dB). It wouldn't hurt to amplify about 3 dB.

Again, I think it's sounding pretty good overall! :)

Thanks,
~Rosebud
Top
RSlabaugh
Posts: 1238
Joined: June 29th, 2019, 6:43 pm
Location: USA

Post by RSlabaugh »

OneForTheBooks wrote: ↑November 8th, 2020, 10:33 am Here is a link to Section 4. It is 27m 18.06s long.

https://librivox.org/uploads/philchenevert/whiteczar_04_hawkes_128kb.mp3
Section 4 PL notes:
~1:30-33 longish pause
~3:25-29 longish pause
*Missed 'end of section... ' disclaimer

Quite the story, isn't it?! :)

Thanks,
~Rosebud
Top
RSlabaugh
Posts: 1238
Joined: June 29th, 2019, 6:43 pm
Location: USA

Post by RSlabaugh »

ConanTheReader wrote: ↑November 8th, 2020, 9:48 pm Section 5 complete and ready for check. Cool story.

https://librivox.org/uploads/philchenevert/whiteczar_05_hawkes_128kb.mp3 ....10m37s
(PL note)
Everything sounds great, but that bitrate pulled another prank on you! :wink: Hopefully this time it'll let you fix it first try!

Thanks for another enjoyable listen!
~Rosebud
Top
ConanTheReader
Posts: 43
Joined: July 19th, 2020, 9:48 pm

Post by ConanTheReader »

RSlabaugh wrote: ↑November 9th, 2020, 9:56 am
ConanTheReader wrote: ↑November 8th, 2020, 9:48 pm Section 5 complete and ready for check. Cool story.

https://librivox.org/uploads/philchenevert/whiteczar_05_hawkes_128kb.mp3 ....10m37s
(PL note)
Everything sounds great, but that bitrate pulled another prank on you! :wink: Hopefully this time it'll let you fix it first try!

Thanks for another enjoyable listen!
https://librivox.org/uploads/philchenevert/whiteczar_05_hawkes_128kb.mp3 :)
Peace
ConanTheReader
Top
RSlabaugh
Posts: 1238
Joined: June 29th, 2019, 6:43 pm
Location: USA

Post by RSlabaugh »

ConanTheReader wrote: ↑November 9th, 2020, 6:39 pm
RSlabaugh wrote: ↑November 9th, 2020, 9:56 am
ConanTheReader wrote: ↑November 8th, 2020, 9:48 pm Section 5 complete and ready for check. Cool story.

https://librivox.org/uploads/philchenevert/whiteczar_05_hawkes_128kb.mp3 ....10m37s
(PL note)
Everything sounds great, but that bitrate pulled another prank on you! :wink: Hopefully this time it'll let you fix it first try!

Thanks for another enjoyable listen!
https://librivox.org/uploads/philchenevert/whiteczar_05_hawkes_128kb.mp3 :)
You got it! :clap: PL OK
~Rosebud
Top
ConanTheReader
Posts: 43
Joined: July 19th, 2020, 9:48 pm

Post by ConanTheReader »

RSlabaugh wrote: ↑November 10th, 2020, 11:08 am
ConanTheReader wrote: ↑November 9th, 2020, 6:39 pm
RSlabaugh wrote: ↑November 9th, 2020, 9:56 am
(PL note)
Everything sounds great, but that bitrate pulled another prank on you! :wink: Hopefully this time it'll let you fix it first try!

Thanks for another enjoyable listen!
https://librivox.org/uploads/philchenevert/whiteczar_05_hawkes_128kb.mp3 :)
You got it! :clap: PL OK
yesssssssssss thank yahhhhh
Peace
ConanTheReader
Top
ConanTheReader
Posts: 43
Joined: July 19th, 2020, 9:48 pm

Post by ConanTheReader »

hi phil.
may i please claim section 8?
peace
chris
Peace
ConanTheReader
Top
philchenevert
LibriVox Admin Team
Posts: 24589
Joined: October 17th, 2010, 9:23 pm
Location: Basking by the Bayou
Contact:
Contact philchenevert

Post by philchenevert »

ConanTheReader wrote: ↑November 10th, 2020, 11:53 am hi phil.
may i please claim section 8?
peace
chris
Sure. Section 8 is all yours/ :thumbs:
"I lost my trousers," said Tom expansively.
89 Decibels? Easy Peasy ! https://youtu.be/aSKR55RDVpk
Top
Omarius
Posts: 9
Joined: May 23rd, 2020, 5:14 pm

Post by Omarius »

RSlabaugh wrote: ↑November 9th, 2020, 9:43 am
Omarius wrote: ↑November 6th, 2020, 4:22 pm Section 6: https://librivox.org/uploads/philchenevert/whiteczar_06_hawkes_128kb.mp3

First submission, feedback gratefully received!
Good job on your first submission! I do have a few notes for corrections to be made.

*Beginning silence should be a little longer so that the first words don't get chopped off by any player. Most people have it somewhere between .5 - 1 second. (Just not over 1 sec)
~9:03 stumble followed by correction "The young woman shrieked"
~9:43 repeat: "The great silence"
*End silence is around 2.8 seconds and should be ~5 sec.
*Volume is in range, but just barely (currently at 86.1 dB). It wouldn't hurt to amplify about 3 dB.

Again, I think it's sounding pretty good overall! :)

Thanks,
Thanks for the great feedback. Can't believe I missed editing out the stumble!

Have made the corrections and boosted the volume a little, it's now at 88.4 dB :)

https://librivox.org/uploads/philchenevert/whiteczar_06_hawkes_128kb.mp3
Top
RSlabaugh
Posts: 1238
Joined: June 29th, 2019, 6:43 pm
Location: USA

Post by RSlabaugh »

Omarius wrote: ↑November 10th, 2020, 3:07 pm
Thanks for the great feedback. Can't believe I missed editing out the stumble!

Have made the corrections and boosted the volume a little, it's now at 88.4 dB :)

https://librivox.org/uploads/philchenevert/whiteczar_06_hawkes_128kb.mp3
Spot PL OK :thumbs:

Congratulations on your first PL OK LibriVox contribution!! :clap:

Take care,
~Rosebud
Top
Post Reply

Return to “Completed Projects”