[Complete] King Mombo by Paul du Chaillu - lt

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Section 16 PL OK
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Hello!
Here's the link to Chapter 14: https://librivox.org/uploads/lynnet/kingmombo_14_duchaillu_128kb.mp3 (duration 14:39s)
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Mamacheetah wrote: September 25th, 2020, 9:22 am Hello!
Here's the link to Chapter 14: https://librivox.org/uploads/lynnet/kingmombo_14_duchaillu_128kb.mp3 (duration 14:39s)
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Ch 14 PL OK
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Are you looking for a DPL Lynnet? I’d be happy to help out.
“It is said that your life flashes before your eyes just before you die. That is true, it's called Life.”
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julianpratley wrote: September 28th, 2020, 3:16 pm Are you looking for a DPL Lynnet? I’d be happy to help out.
This is proving tough to PL, but if you’re up for the challenge, you’re welcome :mrgreen:
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Lynnet wrote: September 28th, 2020, 3:55 pm
julianpratley wrote: September 28th, 2020, 3:16 pm Are you looking for a DPL Lynnet? I’d be happy to help out.
This is proving tough to PL, but if you’re up for the challenge, you’re welcome :mrgreen:
How so?
“It is said that your life flashes before your eyes just before you die. That is true, it's called Life.”
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julianpratley wrote: September 28th, 2020, 4:34 pm
Lynnet wrote: September 28th, 2020, 3:55 pm
julianpratley wrote: September 28th, 2020, 3:16 pm Are you looking for a DPL Lynnet? I’d be happy to help out.
This is proving tough to PL, but if you’re up for the challenge, you’re welcome :mrgreen:
How so?
I’ll PM you...
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Hi. Here's the link for chapter 15: https://librivox.org/uploads/lynnet/kingmombo_15_duchaillu_128kb.mp3 (duration 20:00)

Can I read ch 19 and 20? Thank you!
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Mamacheetah wrote: September 30th, 2020, 7:21 am Hi. Here's the link for chapter 15: https://librivox.org/uploads/lynnet/kingmombo_15_duchaillu_128kb.mp3 (duration 20:00)

Can I read ch 19 and 20? Thank you!
Thank you and yes.
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Chapter 15 PL OK
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Mamacheetah wrote: September 30th, 2020, 11:38 pm Chapter 19 is done.
https://librivox.org/uploads/lynnet/kingmombo_19_duchaillu_128kb.mp3 (duration 13:03)
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Hi! I have a question.
I'm editing ch 20 at the moment, and stumble on an odd sentence. It's near the end of the chapter.
".....Come towards us, if you dare. We are [cut by an illustration] ok at us straight in the face. We laugh at you..."

I don't feel this sentence make sense "We are ok at us straight in the face."

I'm guessing it should be "We are men. Look at us straight in the face." But of course, it's just a random guess.

What should I do? Do you have any suggestion?
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Mamacheetah wrote: October 1st, 2020, 10:12 am Hi! I have a question.
I'm editing ch 20 at the moment, and stumble on an odd sentence. It's near the end of the chapter.
".....Come towards us, if you dare. We are [cut by an illustration] ok at us straight in the face. We laugh at you..."

I don't feel this sentence make sense "We are ok at us straight in the face."

I'm guessing it should be "We are men. Look at us straight in the face." But of course, it's just a random guess.

What should I do? Do you have any suggestion?
You’re certainly right about “Look at us straight in the face”. As for the first part, it could be men or it could be ‘here’, which would make more sense to me. I don’t really have any advice, so treat it as you think fit :hmm:
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