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Post by Kazbek » August 5th, 2020, 6:14 pm

KevinS wrote:
August 5th, 2020, 5:55 pm
Kazbek wrote:
August 5th, 2020, 5:46 pm
Should they be one section each, called "Epigrammi" and "Epitaffi"?
Michael
I would say yes.
OK. With that, I'll start filling out the MW tonight.

Could you adjust to first post:

"[Titolo] di Michelangelo Buonarroti" (usually the first line of the poem, but check the MW for exceptions)

Michael

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Post by KevinS » August 5th, 2020, 6:16 pm

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August 5th, 2020, 6:10 pm
Moving this to Readers Found. You can iron out any other wrinkles there. :)
Thanks!
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Post by Kazbek » August 5th, 2020, 8:01 pm

The Italian portion of the MW has been filled out.

I'll claim the risposta of the first epigram, hoping that someone else would like to read the first part. :wink:

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Post by KevinS » August 5th, 2020, 8:59 pm

Section 071 up, but I forgot to add "This Librivox recording is in the public domain." I'll add it in a bit.

Michael is this recording what we are hoping for?
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Post by Kazbek » August 5th, 2020, 9:05 pm

KevinS wrote:
August 5th, 2020, 8:59 pm
Section 071 up, but I forgot to add "This Librivox recording is in the public domain." I'll add it in a bit.

Michael is this recording what we are hoping for?
It's beautifully read and the format is what I had in mind, too (I don't have an opinion on what order the dedication and translator's name should come in). Aside from that, it's a question for Emanuela. :)

Michael

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Post by Eysiss » August 6th, 2020, 9:31 am

Hallo
I'm here alive and almost kicking.
I do not know where to look if I'm listed somewhere as DPL.

But I will start immediately to listen to the first section.
Can't wait.

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Post by Eysiss » August 6th, 2020, 9:52 am

Question to Kevin and Michael:
Kevin in you preface at 1:15 you read "frequently" (I think) instead of "freely" (16th line of page 1).
For the required standard of PL is to be changed or not?

I'm just trying to understand how much I have to be pernickety,
because I've been that a lot, perhaps too much, giving poor Pier headaches.

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Post by KevinS » August 6th, 2020, 10:07 am

Eysiss wrote:
August 6th, 2020, 9:52 am
Question to Kevin and Michael:
Kevin in you preface at 1:15 you read "frequently" (I think) instead of "freely" (16th line of page 1).
For the required standard of PL is to be changed or not?

I'm just trying to understand how much I have to be pernickety,
because I've been that a lot, perhaps too much, giving poor Pier headaches.

Emanuela
Emanuela, thank you so very much for volunteering!

When the meaning of a phrase or sentence changes because of an incorrect word used, please correct me. But I should say that in 'standard' prooflistening, one does not have to follow the text. Sometimes mistakes escape us, and that's to be expected (to a limited extent, of course.) I would say in the case of poetry, one's careful attention is always great appreciated, as words here are so important in terms of sound and rhyme, etc.

I don't want YOU to have headaches. I can live with MY having headaches.

Does the anglicization of 'Michelangelo' irk you? I'm afraid that's what we English speakers do.
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Post by Eysiss » August 6th, 2020, 10:19 am

I LOVE the way you pronounce "Michelangelo".
You spell it quite well, and leave there a taste of non-italian language that makes me savour it.

I can't wait to hear the poems...

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Post by KevinS » August 6th, 2020, 12:13 pm

Eysiss wrote:
August 6th, 2020, 9:52 am
Question to Kevin and Michael:
Kevin in you preface at 1:15 you read "frequently" (I think) instead of "freely" (16th line of page 1).
For the required standard of PL is to be changed or not?

I'm just trying to understand how much I have to be pernickety,
because I've been that a lot, perhaps too much, giving poor Pier headaches.

Emanuela
Correction made.

https://librivox.org/uploads/triciag/selectedpoems_001_buonarroti_128kb.mp3 (4:01)
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Post by Eysiss » August 6th, 2020, 12:46 pm

Now it's perfect!
Thank you Kevin.

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Post by Eysiss » August 6th, 2020, 12:55 pm

TO LUIGI DEL RICCIO:

8th line May --> Must
11th line That --> Thus

You are really good Kevin. Indeed.

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Post by KevinS » August 6th, 2020, 12:56 pm

Eysiss wrote:
August 6th, 2020, 12:55 pm
TO LUIGI DEL RICCIO:

8th line May --> Must
11th line That --> Thus

You are really good Kevin. Indeed.

Emanuela
I can't be good. Look at these mistakes!
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Post by Kazbek » August 6th, 2020, 2:32 pm

Eysiss wrote:
August 6th, 2020, 9:52 am
Question to Kevin and Michael:
Kevin in you preface at 1:15 you read "frequently" (I think) instead of "freely" (16th line of page 1).
For the required standard of PL is to be changed or not?

I'm just trying to understand how much I have to be pernickety,
because I've been that a lot, perhaps too much, giving poor Pier headaches.

Emanuela
Hi Emanuela,

If you would like to do the same kind of PL for my readings here as you and Pier did for Galileo (word-perfect), that would be very helpful. Though you're also welcome to do standard PL, if you prefer.

Michael

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Post by Eysiss » August 6th, 2020, 2:48 pm

I think I will be accurate for what concern poetry, because as Kevin suggested, over there is also important the sound and the rithm of the words.
For all the parts like introduction and such, I will probably be a little more "standard".

Please do not refrain from pointing out to me if you think I'm not doing well.

Emanuela
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