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Post by KevinS » October 8th, 2020, 1:36 pm

Eysiss wrote:
October 8th, 2020, 12:48 pm
Hi Kevin
I have just a couple of remarks if I may:

at 14:18 you say "Savronarola", that is not corret since is "Savonarola"
at 17:05 you say "free creation be lost" instead of "free creation should be lost"

forgive me, I couldn't refrain myself.
Emanuela
Thank you! Thank you! Never refrain yourself!

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Post by Kazbek » October 8th, 2020, 2:58 pm

Iunta4Ios wrote:
October 8th, 2020, 12:54 pm
Eysiss wrote:
October 8th, 2020, 12:51 pm
Pier
the section is Pl Ok for the poem, but in the introduction I hear:

"Section 6 of Selected Poems....this is a Librivox ...etc etc....
Selected Poems from Michelangelo Buonarroti, section 6, Selected Poems from Michelangelo Buonarroti, quarto, seconda lezione"

I'm not sure is correct...
Emanuela
Sure, I'll check the introduction.
Pier
Yes, the intros for the poems are all in Italian:

"[Titolo] di Michelangelo Buonarroti" (usually the first line of the poem, but check the MW for exceptions)

Thanks! :)

Michael

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Post by Iunta4Ios » October 8th, 2020, 10:07 pm

Kazbek wrote:
October 8th, 2020, 2:58 pm

Yes, the intros for the poems are all in Italian:

"[Titolo] di Michelangelo Buonarroti" (usually the first line of the poem, but check the MW for exceptions)

Thanks! :)

Michael
Thanks Michael, I was confused looking at what to read for the Intro, instead of for second and subsequent poems. I shall correct it.
Pier

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Post by Iunta4Ios » October 9th, 2020, 12:23 am

Iunta4Ios wrote:
October 8th, 2020, 10:07 pm
Kazbek wrote:
October 8th, 2020, 2:58 pm

Yes, the intros for the poems are all in Italian:

"[Titolo] di Michelangelo Buonarroti" (usually the first line of the poem, but check the MW for exceptions)

Thanks! :)

Michael
Thanks Michael, I was confused looking at what to read for the Intro, instead of for second and subsequent poems. I shall correct it.
Pier
But, following the instructions for second and subsequent poems, we have to read at the end of each poem: "End of poem. This Librivox recording is in the public domain." in English. Correct?
Pier

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Post by Kazbek » October 9th, 2020, 3:48 am

Iunta4Ios wrote:
October 9th, 2020, 12:23 am
But, following the instructions for second and subsequent poems, we have to read at the end of each poem: "End of poem. This Librivox recording is in the public domain." in English. Correct?
Pier
Yes, "we" as a group. Since this disclaimer follows the English translation of the poem, it will be read by the person who reads the translation.

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Post by Iunta4Ios » October 9th, 2020, 4:50 am

Kazbek wrote:
October 9th, 2020, 3:48 am

Yes, "we" as a group. Since this disclaimer follows the English translation of the poem, it will be read by the person who reads the translation.

Michael
Ok. That's clear. Thank you.
Pier

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Post by Iunta4Ios » October 9th, 2020, 7:10 am

I uploaded the revised section 6:
https://librivox.org/uploads/triciag/selectedpoems_006_buonarroti_128kb.mp3
(1:03 m)
and also, after the last clarifications, sec. 5:
https://librivox.org/uploads/triciag/selectedpoems_005_buonarroti_128kb.mp3
(1:08 m)
In both files only the introduction and the end (end of…) were modified

I hope I understood well the clarifications :D .
Pier

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Post by Eysiss » October 13th, 2020, 1:22 pm

Hi Pier
I listened to them and I think that now they are ok.
I would prefer to Michael and/or Kevin to listen to one of them in order to confirm that this is what they have in their mind for this project.

However I will go with the Pl Ok on the MW

Thanks everyone
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Post by Kazbek » October 13th, 2020, 5:06 pm

Eysiss wrote:
October 13th, 2020, 1:22 pm
Hi Pier
I listened to them and I think that now they are ok.
I would prefer to Michael and/or Kevin to listen to one of them in order to confirm that this is what they have in their mind for this project.

However I will go with the Pl Ok on the MW

Thanks everyone
Emanuela
Thanks for checking, Emanuela. Kevin instructed us not to include the numbers and genre, so we need to ask Pier to cut out the words "madrigali", "terzo", and "quarto". I wasn't sure about "seconda lezione", but since Kevin included it in his reading, we can keep that.

Michael

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Post by Iunta4Ios » October 13th, 2020, 9:18 pm

Kazbek wrote:
October 13th, 2020, 5:06 pm
Eysiss wrote:
October 13th, 2020, 1:22 pm
Hi Pier
I listened to them and I think that now they are ok.
I would prefer to Michael and/or Kevin to listen to one of them ......

Thanks everyone
Emanuela
Thanks for checking, Emanuela. Kevin instructed us not to include the numbers and genre, so we need to ask Pier to cut out the words "madrigali", "terzo", and "quarto". I wasn't sure about "seconda lezione", but since Kevin included it in his reading, we can keep that.

Michael
Thanks Emanuela and Michael!
I shall make the required revisions asap, probably not today since I am afraid I will be busy all day in a boring activity, called professional job.
Pier

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Post by Iunta4Ios » October 15th, 2020, 8:00 am

Iunta4Ios wrote:
October 13th, 2020, 9:18 pm
Kazbek wrote:
October 13th, 2020, 5:06 pm
Eysiss wrote:
October 13th, 2020, 1:22 pm
Hi Pier
I listened to them and I think that now they are ok.
I would prefer to Michael and/or Kevin to listen to one of them ......

Thanks everyone
Emanuela
Thanks for checking, Emanuela. Kevin instructed us not to include the numbers and genre, so we need to ask Pier to cut out the words "madrigali", "terzo", and "quarto". I wasn't sure about "seconda lezione", but since Kevin included it in his reading, we can keep that.

Michael
Thanks Emanuela and Michael!
I shall make the required revisions asap, probably not today since I am afraid I will be busy all day in a boring activity, called professional job.
Pier
Here are are the reuploaded files:
https://librivox.org/uploads/triciag/selectedpoems_005_buonarroti_128kb.mp3
(1:05 m)
https://librivox.org/uploads/triciag/selectedpoems_006_buonarroti_128kb.mp3
(1:01 m)
My very dear friends,
may I just make a very friendly and kind remark on your admirable project?
Not always it is so clear what a reader has actually to read or not and this can discourage some possible readers,
very amicably,
best whishes to your high quality project!
Pier

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Post by Kazbek » October 15th, 2020, 3:16 pm

Iunta4Ios wrote:
October 15th, 2020, 8:00 am
My very dear friends,
may I just make a very friendly and kind remark on your admirable project?
Not always it is so clear what a reader has actually to read or not and this can discourage some possible readers,
very amicably,
best whishes to your high quality project!
Pier
Thanks for the feedback, Pier. Sorry about any confusion. It's just the four of us working on the project, so let's clarify any remaining questions and check with Kevin if any of us is unsure about his plan.

Michael

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Post by Iunta4Ios » October 15th, 2020, 9:11 pm

Kazbek wrote:
October 15th, 2020, 3:16 pm
Thanks for the feedback, Pier. Sorry about any confusion. It's just the four of us working on the project, so let's clarify any remaining questions and check with Kevin if any of us is unsure about his plan.

Michael
It is O.K Michael, I think everything is quite clear for me now. My worry was just for any possible new reader.
Pier

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Post by Iunta4Ios » October 16th, 2020, 1:08 am

So may I be assigned now section 4 "Epitaffi"
Just a question:
Shal I read at the beginning :
"EPITAFFI
PER
CECCHINO BRACCI FIORENTINO,
MORTO IN ROMA NEL DICIASSETTESIMO ANNO, L' VIII GENNAIO MDXLIIII.
MANDATI A LUIGI DEL RICCIO"?
Pier

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Post by Kazbek » October 16th, 2020, 5:48 am

Iunta4Ios wrote:
October 16th, 2020, 1:08 am
So may I be assigned now section 4 "Epitaffi"
Just a question:
Shal I read at the beginning :
"EPITAFFI
PER
CECCHINO BRACCI FIORENTINO,
MORTO IN ROMA NEL DICIASSETTESIMO ANNO, L' VIII GENNAIO MDXLIIII.
MANDATI A LUIGI DEL RICCIO"?
Pier
Thanks, Pier. I'm not sure whether Kevin wants to include the second part of this. Kevin?

Michael

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