[COMPLETE] Selected Poems from Michelangelo Buonarroti - tg

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Eysiss wrote: May 30th, 2021, 1:41 pm And here they are:
Wow, that was impressively quick! :shock: Even though they're short sections, I feel like a need a break every time I manage to figure out the syntax of one of Michelangelo's poems and then another break after I record it. :)

We're getting real close to the finish line!

I'm not entirely sure, but I think you can assign sections as DPL. Did you click "Assign reader sections" at the top or try to enter your name into the cell?

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I'm not entirely sure, but I think you can assign sections as DPL. Did you click "Assign reader sections" at the top or try to enter your name into the cell?
Yes, you can. Be sure to type your forum name and not "Emanuela." ;)
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I did try to enter Eysiss into the cell, but it didn't work. But it would have worked if I'd click "Assign reader sections"!
Every day I learn something new.

Thanks!!


And for the speed, it's just that I've already planned to do those 4 too days ago, so I just finished them and uploaded them... :D

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I have a couple of comments, all optional:

section 53
0:11 I hear "suo carcer" instead of "tuo carcer"
0:45 I hear "dimostra" instead of "mostra"
I think you read "altero" correctly, in its poetic sense of "alto, maestoso"

section 54
0:55 the long pause before "sie" sounds a bit strange? I think it's part of the preceding phrase (e ch'io sie converso in foco)

Section 52 is PL OK and section 56 is ready for PL.

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Thank you Michael
I will look at them tomorrow!

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Sections 64-67 are PL OK! I should frame 66 and put in on a wall above my desk... or maybe use your reading as a ringtone on my phone? :hmm:

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:D
you'd be fed up pretty soon!
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Here the corrected sections

https://librivox.org/uploads/triciag/selectedpoems_054_buonarroti_128kb.mp3 1:04
https://librivox.org/uploads/triciag/selectedpoems_053_buonarroti_128kb.mp3 0:59

If you think they are not good enought, please tell me.
I will redo them.
section 54
0:55 the long pause before "sie" sounds a bit strange? I think it's part of the preceding phrase (e ch'io sie converso in foco)
you are right. I remember thinking a bit at it, but then I resolved in a completely different way.
But your interpretation is surely correct, mine was a creative moment of the mind.

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Michael
section 68 is Pl Ok.

Stunning in its sadness... really appreciate it. Thanks
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Sections 69 and 70 combined into one (Section 69.) Ready for PL.

https://librivox.org/uploads/triciag/selectedpoems_069_buonarroti_128kb.mp3 (0:44)
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ooohhh thank you Kevin!!!
I will Pl that tomorrow!

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Yes, that was a moving poem.

Sections 53 and 54 are PL OK. Great edits!

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Good.
The two epigrams at page 3 are Pl Ok.


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Eysiss wrote: June 3rd, 2021, 1:21 pm Good.
The two epigrams at page 3 are Pl Ok.


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