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At the end of section 43 should I simply say "end of chapter"? Or "end of series" since it is the end of multiple books?
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I appreciate the offer, Makenna. I'm going to give those a little more time before I decide that the chapters need to be redone. If it comes to that, I will be happy to take you up on it.
As for the end of section 43 - I would say the typical end of chapter #, volume #, etc and then please also add End of The Younger Sister by Catherine Ann Hubback.
To be honest, I don't know what the readers of the last chapter of each "book" have said so I'll have to listen to the ends of those sections to check.
As for the end of section 43 - I would say the typical end of chapter #, volume #, etc and then please also add End of The Younger Sister by Catherine Ann Hubback.
To be honest, I don't know what the readers of the last chapter of each "book" have said so I'll have to listen to the ends of those sections to check.
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Hi Nichole,
Here are the PL notes for Vol. 3 chapter 10:
--at 3:18 please change "coalition" to "collation" in "A collation in a marquee..."
--at 11:25 omit the incorrect version of "...the feeling of interest which could incite him..."
--at 11:58-12:04 please omit the break in recording and background noise; remove the incorrect version of "...like all women who love their husbands..."
Thank you,
Lora
Here are the PL notes for Vol. 3 chapter 10:
--at 3:18 please change "coalition" to "collation" in "A collation in a marquee..."
--at 11:25 omit the incorrect version of "...the feeling of interest which could incite him..."
--at 11:58-12:04 please omit the break in recording and background noise; remove the incorrect version of "...like all women who love their husbands..."
Thank you,
Lora
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Sounds good. Thanks, Jo.
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Hi Lora - I made an attempt at fixing this section since Nichole hasn't picked up my PM. See what you think -ADKreader1122 wrote: ↑October 7th, 2021, 2:26 pm Hi Nichole,
Here are the PL notes for Vol. 3 chapter 10:
--at 3:18 please change "coalition" to "collation" in "A collation in a marquee..."
--at 11:25 omit the incorrect version of "...the feeling of interest which could incite him..."
--at 11:58-12:04 please omit the break in recording and background noise; remove the incorrect version of "...like all women who love their husbands..."
Thank you,
Lora
edited version here: https://librivox.org/uploads/knotyouraveragejo/youngersister_34_hubback_128kb (This is currently the file linked in the MW) 29:28
original file here: https://librivox.org/uploads/knotyouraveragejo/youngersister_34_hubback_128kb2021_10_08_17_58_23.mp3 29:45
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Also for section 32: this one was a little more difficult - see what you think, it's not perfect, but hopefully good enough.ADKreader1122 wrote: ↑October 2nd, 2021, 10:52 am Hi Nichole,
I am sorry it has taken me so long to PL your submissions. For Vol. 3 Chapter 8 I have the following notes:
--at 20:18 please change "convenience" to "convalescence" in the phrase "...for she had, on her convalescence..."
--at 27:56 please change "brother-in-law's" to "brother's" in "...her brother's little menage..."
--at 28:29 please omit the repetition of "If she could only..."
--at 34:21 please change "visibility" to "visibly" in "...on the growing visibly growing attachment..."
Thank you very much,
Lora
edited version here: https://librivox.org/uploads/knotyouraveragejo/youngersister_32_hubback_128kb 40:05
original file here: https://librivox.org/uploads/knotyouraveragejo/youngersister_32_hubback_128kb2021_10_08_17_58_33.mp3 40:06
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Jo,
These two sections sound great; you did a fabulous job and I've marked them both PL Okay.
Thanks so much,
Lora
These two sections sound great; you did a fabulous job and I've marked them both PL Okay.
Thanks so much,
Lora
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Thanks!
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Hi Jo,
Here are the PL notes for Vol. 3, chapters 11 and 12. I am hoping that perhaps you can work your editing magic on them.
Chapter 11:
--at 4:14 change "affection" to "affectation" in "...and a little affectation..."
--at 6:44 change "coalition" to "collation" in "...was invited to the collation..."
--at 18:26 change "be convinced" to "condescend" in "You must condescend to be beholden..."
--at 19:21 change "from" to "for" in "For whom shall I dip?"
Chapter 12:
--at 3:20 change "shrouded" to "showed" in "...her white crape gown showed..."
--at 26:37 change "articulated" to "accurately" in "...the address had been accurately surveyed..."
Thanks so much,
Lora
Here are the PL notes for Vol. 3, chapters 11 and 12. I am hoping that perhaps you can work your editing magic on them.
Chapter 11:
--at 4:14 change "affection" to "affectation" in "...and a little affectation..."
--at 6:44 change "coalition" to "collation" in "...was invited to the collation..."
--at 18:26 change "be convinced" to "condescend" in "You must condescend to be beholden..."
--at 19:21 change "from" to "for" in "For whom shall I dip?"
Chapter 12:
--at 3:20 change "shrouded" to "showed" in "...her white crape gown showed..."
--at 26:37 change "articulated" to "accurately" in "...the address had been accurately surveyed..."
Thanks so much,
Lora
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Some of those will be a challenge, but I'll see what I can do...
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Section 11 ready for Spot PL.
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Section 12 also ready for Spot PL.
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These fixes will work quite well--thanks, Jo! PL Okay for those two sections.
Lora
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PL Okay for Vol. 3 chapter 13.
L.
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