aaaah I don't like stories that end with the death of an animal. And I agree with you, I also root for the underdog most of the times. We also have folk stories here and it's always the wolf that is outfoxed, I don't like these either. If at least he hadn't died in the end...
Well...can't be helped, you did narrate beautifully, I loved the "in character" speeches you did here, makes it all so lively.
Which leads me to think that you may enjoy our drama group, have you ever tried participating in a stage play here ? It's great fun (I'm very active there). I think you are expressive enough that you fit in there right well.
For this section, you only missed the footnote. I wanted to include all the footnotes in these sections, as they are usually interesting added info. (see second post on how to read footnotes).
> at 3:57
: (p. 74) Could you please insert here: "Footnote: The sacred drum used in the pueblo dances - End of Footnote
the rest is perfect, thank you ! And looking forward to your next section