[COMPLETE]The Wrong of Slavery by Robert Dale Owen-mtf

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progressingamerica
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wib66 wrote: March 19th, 2021, 11:55 am Could I read sections 11 and 12 please
I have assigned both, thank you.
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Well, I'm willing to tackle Section 21 to finish this project.

The BIG QUESTION: Do you want to have that sideways table read?
I can do it if you like, but thought I would check before plowing through it.
~ Larry
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Section 26 is PL OK. :thumbs:

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silverquill wrote: March 21st, 2021, 8:21 pm Well, I'm willing to tackle Section 21 to finish this project.

The BIG QUESTION: Do you want to have that sideways table read?
I can do it if you like, but thought I would check before plowing through it.
Thanks for taking that section.

As for the table, yes I would think you should read it as its referenced in the text but also earlier on in this work other tables have also been read. (I also read one, see earlier comments if you like) To have one missing would be inconsistent.
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progressingamerica wrote: March 22nd, 2021, 9:59 pm
silverquill wrote: March 21st, 2021, 8:21 pm Well, I'm willing to tackle Section 21 to finish this project.

The BIG QUESTION: Do you want to have that sideways table read?
I can do it if you like, but thought I would check before plowing through it.
Thanks for taking that section.

As for the table, yes I would think you should read it as its referenced in the text but also earlier on in this work other tables have also been read. (I also read one, see earlier comments if you like) To have one missing would be inconsistent.
That is fine, and I have no problem doing tables.
This one is a bit of a challenge because it is printed sideways, but I think I have something worked out for that. I'll get to work on it. :)
~ Larry
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Here is Section 21:

https://librivox.org/uploads/mightyfelix/thewrongofslavery_21_owen_128kb.mp3 19:01

I did my best on the table, and inserted it into the text at what seemed like the most logical place.

I usually read from a tablet, so actually all I had to do was turn off auto-rotate to read the table.
~ Larry
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Michele
When you're having what you feel like is a 'bad day' and then someone comes along out of nowhere and extends to you the simplest of kind gestures, you feel it so deeply within your heart.” ―Miya Yamanouchi
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Michele
When you're having what you feel like is a 'bad day' and then someone comes along out of nowhere and extends to you the simplest of kind gestures, you feel it so deeply within your heart.” ―Miya Yamanouchi
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silverquill wrote: March 28th, 2021, 11:41 am Here is Section 21:

https://librivox.org/uploads/mightyfelix/thewrongofslavery_21_owen_128kb.mp3 19:01

I did my best on the table, and inserted it into the text at what seemed like the most logical place.

I usually read from a tablet, so actually all I had to do was turn off auto-rotate to read the table.
You did a great job with the table, although following along with it made gave me motion sickness. :?

Just a few easy fixes to make it PL OK.

~ 0:27 - the title "Amalgamation" is missing, needs to be added
~ 4:06-4:08 - the text here "which from ... again" should be deleted, it is corrected immediately following
~ 4:14-4:15 - the text here " say two and ... again" should be deleted, it is corrected immediately following

On the whole, well done.

Thanks,

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Great job with the reading of such a lengthy chapter. It is PL OK :clap:


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Good job except for one little repeat that needs to be removed.

~ 3:03-3:05 the text "For a time these masters increased in" followed by a "clap clap" sound should be removed. The complete text is read immediately afterwards.

Other than that, it is good to go.

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Here is the edited section 12 the length is now 7:32 thanks

https://librivox.org/uploads/mightyfelix/thewrongofslavery_12_owen_128kb.mp3
Michele
When you're having what you feel like is a 'bad day' and then someone comes along out of nowhere and extends to you the simplest of kind gestures, you feel it so deeply within your heart.” ―Miya Yamanouchi
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wib66 wrote: April 3rd, 2021, 5:25 pm Here is the edited section 12 the length is now 7:32 thanks

https://librivox.org/uploads/mightyfelix/thewrongofslavery_12_owen_128kb.mp3
Thank you. It is now PL OK.

M
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mleigh wrote: April 3rd, 2021, 4:14 pm
silverquill wrote: March 28th, 2021, 11:41 am Here is Section 21:

https://librivox.org/uploads/mightyfelix/thewrongofslavery_21_owen_128kb.mp3 19:01

I did my best on the table, and inserted it into the text at what seemed like the most logical place.

I usually read from a tablet, so actually all I had to do was turn off auto-rotate to read the table.
You did a great job with the table, although following along with it made gave me motion sickness. :?

Just a few easy fixes to make it PL OK.

~ 0:27 - the title "Amalgamation" is missing, needs to be added
~ 4:06-4:08 - the text here "which from ... again" should be deleted, it is corrected immediately following
~ 4:14-4:15 - the text here " say two and ... again" should be deleted, it is corrected immediately following

On the whole, well done.

Thanks,

M
Thank you for the good PL!
Here is the corrected recording:
https://librivox.org/uploads/mightyfelix/thewrongofslavery_21_owen_128kb.mp3 18:58
~ Larry
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Post by mleigh »

Corrections for chapter 8 as they are buried somewhere in previous posts:

Section 8
Need between .5 and 1 second at the beginning.
At 7:12, "we may put it in 1860" is repeated.
At 13:26, you have "sir", should be "senhor"

They are all easy fixes.

Thanks,

M
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