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bhavya
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Post by bhavya » June 8th, 2020, 11:44 pm

Thank you all!

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Post by stoogeswoman » June 9th, 2020, 8:32 am

Weezer, first of all, excellent reading! I love your style!

Just a couple of tiny PL Notes:

1. At 07:50, you read: "They're murdering us" instead of "them" in this sentence:
Blows were struck in a lusty fashion and cries of "Police!" "They're murdering them!" "Help!" rang out.
2. At 08:14, you put the word "and" in the wrong place in this sentence:
a girl, still in her teens, broke through the crowd and turning to Havel, said:
(you read "through the crowd, turning to Havel, and said").

That's it - thanks! 8-)
weezer wrote:
June 8th, 2020, 7:21 pm
https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/motherearth4_4_various_128kb.mp3
duration- 10 minutes
Thanks. Weezer

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Post by weezer » June 9th, 2020, 9:39 am

I would like to claim section 6 please
Thanks. Weezer

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Post by stoogeswoman » June 9th, 2020, 9:51 am

weezer wrote:
June 9th, 2020, 9:39 am
I would like to claim section 6 please
Thanks. Weezer
OK, you've got it! 8-)

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Post by weezer » June 9th, 2020, 10:03 am

https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/motherearth4_4_various_128kb.mp3
duration 10 minutes
corrected narration
Thanks. Weeezer

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Post by weezer » June 9th, 2020, 10:41 am


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Post by stoogeswoman » June 9th, 2020, 4:45 pm

weezer wrote:
June 9th, 2020, 10:41 am
https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/motherearth4_6_various_128kb.mp3
duration: 2:51 minutes
Thanks. Weezer
Great, thanks -- both section 4 and 6 are now PL OK! 8-)

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Post by StevenW » June 14th, 2020, 12:41 am

https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/motherearth4_12_various_128kb.mp3

Just uploaded Section 12, Dignity Speaks.

This was a really cool reading, especially in light of the current worldwide sociopolitical climate. It is different than anything I've yet attempted. Dignity felt kind of like a sarcastic jerk here, so that's what I tried to sound like. Hopefully it does the text justice.

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Post by stoogeswoman » June 14th, 2020, 2:52 pm

Great, thank you so much! I will proof it this afternoon or tomorrow morning (depending on, well, a buncha stuff! :mrgreen: )!
StevenW wrote:
June 14th, 2020, 12:41 am
https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/motherearth4_12_various_128kb.mp3

Just uploaded Section 12, Dignity Speaks.

This was a really cool reading, especially in light of the current worldwide sociopolitical climate. It is different than anything I've yet attempted. Dignity felt kind of like a sarcastic jerk here, so that's what I tried to sound like. Hopefully it does the text justice.

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Post by stoogeswoman » June 14th, 2020, 4:15 pm

UPDATE: PL OK! Great job, and yes, I do see what you mean about its relevance to today! 8-)
stoogeswoman wrote:
June 14th, 2020, 2:52 pm
Great, thank you so much! I will proof it this afternoon or tomorrow morning (depending on, well, a buncha stuff! :mrgreen: )!
StevenW wrote:
June 14th, 2020, 12:41 am
https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/motherearth4_12_various_128kb.mp3

Just uploaded Section 12, Dignity Speaks.

This was a really cool reading, especially in light of the current worldwide sociopolitical climate. It is different than anything I've yet attempted. Dignity felt kind of like a sarcastic jerk here, so that's what I tried to sound like. Hopefully it does the text justice.

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Post by maxgal » June 15th, 2020, 1:16 pm

I'm sorry, lots of stuff is delaying me...
I don't want to hold up the project, so please take back sections 9 ("Marriage & Motherhood") and 16 ("The Jungle"). :cry:
I'm still aiming to do section 7 ("The Antichrist"). :twisted:
...LJB
Louise
"every little breeze..."

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Post by stoogeswoman » June 15th, 2020, 1:25 pm

Oh, sorry to hear that, but I totally understand! If you change your mind, just let us know. 8-)

Sections 9 and 16 are now open!
maxgal wrote:
June 15th, 2020, 1:16 pm
I'm sorry, lots of stuff is delaying me...
I don't want to hold up the project, so please take back sections 9 ("Marriage & Motherhood") and 16 ("The Jungle"). :cry:
I'm still aiming to do section 7 ("The Antichrist"). :twisted:
...LJB

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Post by stoogeswoman » June 15th, 2020, 4:46 pm

I've claimed sections 11 and 16, and 11 is done. I'll work on 16 tomorrow. 8-)

https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/motherearth4_11_various_128kb.mp3 01:30

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Post by bhavya » June 16th, 2020, 7:22 am

stoogeswoman wrote:
June 15th, 2020, 4:46 pm
I've claimed sections 11 and 16, and 11 is done. I'll work on 16 tomorrow. 8-)

https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/motherearth4_11_various_128kb.mp3 01:30
Thank you, I'll pl your sections

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Post by stoogeswoman » June 16th, 2020, 11:06 am

Thanks, bhavya. I'll also be uploading Section 16 in just a few minutes. 8-)
bhavya wrote:
June 16th, 2020, 7:22 am
stoogeswoman wrote:
June 15th, 2020, 4:46 pm
I've claimed sections 11 and 16, and 11 is done. I'll work on 16 tomorrow. 8-)

https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/motherearth4_11_various_128kb.mp3 01:30
Thank you, I'll pl your sections

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