Section 7 is PL OK, Bill.
Great reading!
Thanks!
Amy
Complete-[Politcs/Philosophy]Enquiry Concerning Political Justice Vol1-William Godwin-ag
Animadvert. I have a new word! It could be useful.
Section 7 is PL OK, Bill.
Great reading!
Thanks!
Amy
Section 7 is PL OK, Bill.
Great reading!
Thanks!
Amy
In the mind, or consciousness of the Earth this flower first lay latent as a dream. Perhaps, in her consciousness, it nested as that which in us corresponds to a little thought.--A.Blackwood
PL Notes
Sections 1 and 2. Spot PL OK.
Sections 24 and 25 PL OK
Thank you, Gentlemen!
Sections 1 and 2. Spot PL OK.
Sections 24 and 25 PL OK
Thank you, Gentlemen!
In the mind, or consciousness of the Earth this flower first lay latent as a dream. Perhaps, in her consciousness, it nested as that which in us corresponds to a little thought.--A.Blackwood
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williamjones wrote: ↑March 31st, 2020, 7:25 pmPL NOTE Section 20 onlyJddykst wrote: ↑March 28th, 2020, 10:40 am Sections 19 and 20 submitted, at 20:43 and 21:09, respectively.
https://librivox.org/uploads/alg1001/enquiry_20_godwin_128kb.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/alg1001/enquiry_19_godwin_128kb.mp3
jddykst
Great job, Jim. It's a pleasure to listen to Godwin's words so carefully brought to life by your sonorous voice.
Only one blip:
20:07 heard: "Such are the general principles of human society"
s/b : "Such are the GENUINE principles of human society"
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https://librivox.org/uploads/alg1001/enquiry_19_godwin_128kb.mp3
Section 19 re-submitted/corrected, at 20:07. Sorry about that, I think I need to be a bit more diligent in proofing my stuff, before I submit. There are some terms in this work that I haven't been exposed to, but that's part of the fun. I have tried to speed up the tempo a bit, and finally settled on +3, thanks for the suggestion. I agree, that's an improvement.
Jim D.
Section 19 re-submitted/corrected, at 20:07. Sorry about that, I think I need to be a bit more diligent in proofing my stuff, before I submit. There are some terms in this work that I haven't been exposed to, but that's part of the fun. I have tried to speed up the tempo a bit, and finally settled on +3, thanks for the suggestion. I agree, that's an improvement.
Jim D.
Jim D.
Never put off till tomorrow what you can do the day after tomorrow just as well -Mark Twain
Never put off till tomorrow what you can do the day after tomorrow just as well -Mark Twain
https://librivox.org/uploads/alg1001/enquiry_17_godwin_128kb.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/alg1001/enquiry_18_godwin_128kb.mp3
Sections 17 and 18 re-submitted/corrected, at 8:30 and 17:22, respectively.
Thanks for the proof -
Jim D.
https://librivox.org/uploads/alg1001/enquiry_18_godwin_128kb.mp3
Sections 17 and 18 re-submitted/corrected, at 8:30 and 17:22, respectively.
Thanks for the proof
-Jim D.
Jim D.
Never put off till tomorrow what you can do the day after tomorrow just as well -Mark Twain
Never put off till tomorrow what you can do the day after tomorrow just as well -Mark Twain
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Section 26 Of Obedience PL NOTES
Like Kant, Godwin dots every "i" and crosses every "t". He's skating on the edge between thoroughness and pedantry.
You're an excellent reader, Jim, I'm glad you found this project.
again, only one blip:
29:01 Heard "can no otherwise be PERPETRATED,"
s/b "can no otherwise be PERPETUATED,"
Like Kant, Godwin dots every "i" and crosses every "t". He's skating on the edge between thoroughness and pedantry.
You're an excellent reader, Jim, I'm glad you found this project.
again, only one blip:
29:01 Heard "can no otherwise be PERPETRATED,"
s/b "can no otherwise be PERPETUATED,"
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Sections 16, 17, 18, 19, 20 All - PL OK!!
-- Bill Jones
When you think that you have exhausted all possibilities, remember this: you haven't.
--- Thomas Edison
When you think that you have exhausted all possibilities, remember this: you haven't.
--- Thomas Edison
https://librivox.org/uploads/alg1001/enquiry_20_godwin_128kb.mp3
I have corrected Section 20, at about 20:31, and also revised the tempo, based on your previous excellent suggestion.
Jim D.
I have corrected Section 20, at about 20:31, and also revised the tempo, based on your previous excellent suggestion.
Jim D.
Jim D.
Never put off till tomorrow what you can do the day after tomorrow just as well -Mark Twain
Never put off till tomorrow what you can do the day after tomorrow just as well -Mark Twain
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Jddykst wrote: ↑April 2nd, 2020, 1:13 pm https://librivox.org/uploads/alg1001/enquiry_20_godwin_128kb.mp3
I have corrected Section 20, at about 20:31, and also revised the tempo, based on your previous excellent suggestion.
Molto Bene!
Jim D.
-- Bill Jones
When you think that you have exhausted all possibilities, remember this: you haven't.
--- Thomas Edison
When you think that you have exhausted all possibilities, remember this: you haven't.
--- Thomas Edison
https://librivox.org/uploads/alg1001/enquiry_26_godwin_128kb.mp3
Thanks for the proof, I've corrected and re-submitted Section 26, at 28:42
Jim D.
Thanks for the proof, I've corrected and re-submitted Section 26, at 28:42
Jim D.
Jim D.
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Thanks, Jim. 26 is now PL OK.Jddykst wrote: ↑April 3rd, 2020, 9:28 am https://librivox.org/uploads/alg1001/enquiry_26_godwin_128kb.mp3
Thanks for the proof, I've corrected and re-submitted Section 26, at 28:42
Jim D.
One last comment on the suggestion that you employ the Change Tempo effect: I had asked my LV Mentor, MsFry about my own recordings and among other suggestions she explained the Tempo thing. She even suggested that I try Tempo +12 in on one section and then +14, etc. It was only at +20 that I obviously had to dial it back. In places where I'm trying to squeeze every bit of juice out of every word I tend to get PONDEROUS to the +12 level. (Just ask my wife!) But, I almost always do a +6 tempo change to my files. That's just the way I talk.
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When you think that you have exhausted all possibilities, remember this: you haven't.
--- Thomas Edison
When you think that you have exhausted all possibilities, remember this: you haven't.
--- Thomas Edison
https://librivox.org/uploads/alg1001/enquiry_10_godwin_128kb.mp3
Section 10 submitted at 16:31, thanks.
You're too generous, but I appreciate the positive feedback. I've been increasing the tempo recently, but not to the extent you suggest. I'll play with it a little more going forward.
Jim D.
Section 10 submitted at 16:31, thanks.
You're too generous, but I appreciate the positive feedback. I've been increasing the tempo recently, but not to the extent you suggest. I'll play with it a little more going forward.
Jim D.
Jim D.
Never put off till tomorrow what you can do the day after tomorrow just as well -Mark Twain
Never put off till tomorrow what you can do the day after tomorrow just as well -Mark Twain
Thank you for Section 10, Jim!
In the mind, or consciousness of the Earth this flower first lay latent as a dream. Perhaps, in her consciousness, it nested as that which in us corresponds to a little thought.--A.Blackwood
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Nicely Done, Jim! PL OK!Jddykst wrote: ↑April 4th, 2020, 8:43 pm https://librivox.org/uploads/alg1001/enquiry_10_godwin_128kb.mp3
Section 10 submitted at 16:31, thanks.
You're too generous, but I appreciate the positive feedback. I've been increasing the tempo recently, but not to the extent you suggest. I'll play with it a little more going forward.
Jim D.
-- Bill Jones
When you think that you have exhausted all possibilities, remember this: you haven't.
--- Thomas Edison
When you think that you have exhausted all possibilities, remember this: you haven't.
--- Thomas Edison
Thanks.
Sections 12 and 11 are submitted, at 18:44 and 8:06, respectively.
https://librivox.org/uploads/alg1001/enquiry_12_godwin_128kb.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/alg1001/enquiry_11_godwin_128kb.mp3
Jim D.
Sections 12 and 11 are submitted, at 18:44 and 8:06, respectively.
https://librivox.org/uploads/alg1001/enquiry_12_godwin_128kb.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/alg1001/enquiry_11_godwin_128kb.mp3
Jim D.
Jim D.
Never put off till tomorrow what you can do the day after tomorrow just as well -Mark Twain
Never put off till tomorrow what you can do the day after tomorrow just as well -Mark Twain