[MEDICINE/HISTORY] The Evolution of Modern Medicine, by Sir William Osler - availle

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Post by Jmbau13 » January 29th, 2020, 8:12 pm

EltonTheSnowman wrote:
January 27th, 2020, 11:35 am
Hi Jane,
I've made the corrections you've listed in your PL notes. Here are the corrected files:

https://librivox.org/uploads/availle/evolutionmodernmedicine_07_osler_128kb.mp3
(19:47)

https://librivox.org/uploads/availle/evolutionmodernmedicine_08_osler_128kb.mp3
(14:07)

And I agree, the description of the "therapy" for dropsy is very unsettling. When I first read it, I thought I'd misread the instructions!
Thanks for making these changes. Both this and 7 now PL OK.
Presumably if you didn't die of the dropsy, you died of the treatment for it. Merciful heavens.
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Jane Bennett

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Post by Jmbau13 » February 1st, 2020, 12:01 am

EltonTheSnowman wrote:
January 29th, 2020, 11:10 am
Section 9 ready for proof listening:

https://librivox.org/uploads/availle/evolutionmodernmedicine_09_osler_128kb.mp3
(31:06)
Thanks Matea. Just two PL points:
~ 16.22 the text says honesty of speech taken from the work on the joints ; you have omitted the word taken

~28.34 the text says innate heat but I hear heart

Thanks!
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Post by EltonTheSnowman » February 2nd, 2020, 10:36 am

Jmbau13 wrote:
February 1st, 2020, 12:01 am
EltonTheSnowman wrote:
January 29th, 2020, 11:10 am
Section 9 ready for proof listening:

https://librivox.org/uploads/availle/evolutionmodernmedicine_09_osler_128kb.mp3
(31:06)
Thanks Matea. Just two PL points:
~ 16.22 the text says honesty of speech taken from the work on the joints ; you have omitted the word taken

~28.34 the text says innate heat but I hear heart

Thanks!
Thank you for the feedback Jane!
I've made the necessary corrections to the file:

https://librivox.org/uploads/availle/evolutionmodernmedicine_09_osler_128kb.mp3
(31:06)
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Post by Jmbau13 » February 2nd, 2020, 6:34 pm

EltonTheSnowman wrote:
February 2nd, 2020, 10:36 am

Thank you for the feedback Jane!
I've made the necessary corrections to the file:

https://librivox.org/uploads/availle/evolutionmodernmedicine_09_osler_128kb.mp3
(31:06)
Perfect and PL OK now. Thanks.
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Jane Bennett

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Post by Availle » February 8th, 2020, 4:48 am

Jmbau13 wrote:
January 26th, 2020, 1:13 am
Just two tiny things:
~ 10.50 the text is '...famous for its baths]' but I hear only its bath (ie, singular, rather than plural)
~ 18.07 the text says '...lacked the means of pursuing this path...' but I hear pursuing his path
Thank you!
File for section 15 fixed and reuploaded. Time is the same. :D
Cheers,
Ava.

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Post by Jmbau13 » February 10th, 2020, 7:12 pm

Availle wrote:
February 8th, 2020, 4:48 am
Jmbau13 wrote:
January 26th, 2020, 1:13 am
Just two tiny things:
~ 10.50 the text is '...famous for its baths]' but I hear only its bath (ie, singular, rather than plural)
~ 18.07 the text says '...lacked the means of pursuing this path...' but I hear pursuing his path
Thank you!
File for section 15 fixed and reuploaded. Time is the same. :D
Thank you. PL OK.
regards
Jane Bennett

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