I was quite puzzled by the mother's use of 'Dr' here. Even less so when I saw she wrote out 'dear' in full. But surely these occasions in her letter of 'Dr' is an abbreviation of 'dear.' I cannot fathom it otherwise.
Really good spot. Not sure how I missed them. Seem so obvious when you pointed out. Thanks. The revision now is ready for spot PL. There are three occassions: 10:23, 11:27, and 12:10. I hope I have caught all of them. Have a lovely weekend.
I was quite puzzled by the mother's use of 'Dr' here. Even less so when I saw she wrote out 'dear' in full. But surely these occasions in her letter of 'Dr' is an abbreviation of 'dear.' I cannot fathom it otherwise.
Really good spot. Not sure how I missed them. Seem so obvious when you pointed out. Thanks. The revision now is ready for spot PL. There are three occassions: 10:23, 11:27, and 12:10. I hope I have caught all of them. Have a lovely weekend.
KevinS wrote: ↑December 9th, 2019, 3:04 pm
Section 3 is fine with the exception of too long a period of silence at the close. (Bit of stray voice there, too.)
Thank you Kevin. You are ahead of me I planned to finish Chapter 2 yesterday and then message you but I failed to deliver. Will revise Grahame's Chapter 3 when I upload mine. Cheers. Xiaoyan
KevinS wrote: ↑December 9th, 2019, 3:04 pm
Section 3 is fine with the exception of too long a period of silence at the close. (Bit of stray voice there, too.)
Thank you Kevin. You are ahead of me I planned to finish Chapter 2 yesterday and then message you but I failed to deliver. Will revise Grahame's Chapter 3 when I upload mine. Cheers. Xiaoyan
Haha! Without a voice, all I can do is listen. I'm racing through those responsibilities.
KevinS wrote: ↑December 9th, 2019, 3:04 pm
Section 3 is fine with the exception of too long a period of silence at the close. (Bit of stray voice there, too.)
Hope your voice is back. I have uploaded the revision for istDG. Have a lovely weekend.
KevinS wrote: ↑December 9th, 2019, 3:04 pm
Section 3 is fine with the exception of too long a period of silence at the close. (Bit of stray voice there, too.)
Hope your voice is back. I have uploaded the revision for istDG. Have a lovely weekend.
KevinS wrote: ↑December 9th, 2019, 3:04 pm
Section 3 is fine with the exception of too long a period of silence at the close. (Bit of stray voice there, too.)
Hope your voice is back. I have uploaded the revision for istDG. Have a lovely weekend.