Thank you.rpbrevard wrote: ↑December 3rd, 2019, 10:07 am chapter 5
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Here's the fix:lymiewithpurpose wrote: ↑November 1st, 2019, 7:09 pmNice reading. Although the story content and technical settings were fine, this is the last chapter of the book and the ending disclaimer "End of The Laughing Bear and other stories, by Robert Bloomer Hare Bell" needed to be recorded as well.KevinS wrote: ↑October 20th, 2019, 1:48 pm Chapter 7
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Awesome recording, you have a great storytelling voice. I have a few notes, but most of them have to do with volume jumps/spikes:rpbrevard wrote: ↑December 3rd, 2019, 10:07 am chapter 5
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0:22 – you forgot to say the name of the chapter (The Black Hus)
1:16 – heard ‘they’ instead of ‘he’ (although it may have been more of an adventure if the sons had fled)
1:30 – startling volume spike
3:20 – rather large volume jump
9:36 – large volume jump
15:57 – volume jump
19:06 – volume jump
20:55 – volume jump
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Nice fix! Now this is PL OK (and another gruesome story is completed).KevinS wrote: ↑December 3rd, 2019, 11:59 amHere's the fix:lymiewithpurpose wrote: ↑November 1st, 2019, 7:09 pmNice reading. Although the story content and technical settings were fine, this is the last chapter of the book and the ending disclaimer "End of The Laughing Bear and other stories, by Robert Bloomer Hare Bell" needed to be recorded as well.KevinS wrote: ↑October 20th, 2019, 1:48 pm Chapter 7
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Thank you for the notes! Hopefully these changes work well.lymiewithpurpose wrote: ↑November 23rd, 2019, 2:19 pm Wow, quite the intense story. Every story makes me feel less and less like this is for kids. Anyways, here are my notes.
Intro: The main issue here is that you are missing the last line ‘The Laughing Bear and other stories, by Robert Bloomer Hare Bell’, which is the only part with the author in it. In addition, some smaller mentions would be that there was a bit of a long pause after the intro and before the text. In addition, if you wanted, you could edit out the ‘number’ in the initial ‘chapter number 6’ to just say ‘chapter 6’. Your call on the last two.
2:06 – stumble ‘w-about her’
4:15 – a few slight stumbles in this sentence, you may want to redo it
13:52 – slight stumble (b-hide)
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Thanks. by the way, I am removing the 'children' from the summary. I think some of these stories are really appropriate for aduolts only.rpbrevard wrote: ↑December 5th, 2019, 9:32 am Chapter 5 with corrections
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They did work well, which leads to the OK! Nice work.Kessie wrote: ↑December 4th, 2019, 9:42 pmThank you for the notes! Hopefully these changes work well.lymiewithpurpose wrote: ↑November 23rd, 2019, 2:19 pm Wow, quite the intense story. Every story makes me feel less and less like this is for kids. Anyways, here are my notes.
Intro: The main issue here is that you are missing the last line ‘The Laughing Bear and other stories, by Robert Bloomer Hare Bell’, which is the only part with the author in it. In addition, some smaller mentions would be that there was a bit of a long pause after the intro and before the text. In addition, if you wanted, you could edit out the ‘number’ in the initial ‘chapter number 6’ to just say ‘chapter 6’. Your call on the last two.
2:06 – stumble ‘w-about her’
4:15 – a few slight stumbles in this sentence, you may want to redo it
13:52 – slight stumble (b-hide)
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That was some impressive editing (especially the volume). PL OK!rpbrevard wrote: ↑December 5th, 2019, 9:32 am Chapter 5 with corrections
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Very smart. I can't help wondering if the author really intended this for kids. I am genuinely curious what the target audience is.philchenevert wrote: ↑December 5th, 2019, 11:18 amThanks. by the way, I am removing the 'children' from the summary. I think some of these stories are really appropriate for aduolts only.rpbrevard wrote: ↑December 5th, 2019, 9:32 am Chapter 5 with corrections
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Eitel sent PM asking about section 1.
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Section1, The Laughing Bear had been put back into the pot for anyone to record.
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Just bumping this to note that only one sections is left to record.