all right, I started listening to the PL backlog here, and sorry for the delay.WalterLee wrote:https://librivox.org/uploads/linny/nequa_13_adams_128kb.mp3
dur:38:43
section 13
section 11
https://librivox.org/uploads/linny/nequa_11_adams_128kb.mp3
dur:55:50
Lee, your two sections were very interesting to listen to. Section 13 really was a longish treatise about the exploitation of the banks but quite true what the authors wrote in there.
I found a few spots to correct, if you wouldn't mind. Don't worry, no need to re-record it all ! Only correct he time stamps I will mention in my list. It will save you (and me) a lot of time
PL notes for Section 11:
> at 0:16: second part of full LV disclaimer intro is missing, please add: "NEQUA or The Problem of the Ages, by Jack Adams." before starting with Chapter 10
> at 11:47: missed part: "but what shall I write to Ganoe ?"
> at 18:23: "and under the operation of an awakened conscience" – you say "awkward" instead of "awakened", which changes the meaning a lot
> at 43:50: stumble: "relieves my mind" – you say "relieves me my mind" – "me" can easily get cut out
> at 44:21: "and ethical problem" – you say "ethnical"
> at 55:28: missed part of sentence: "all is well"
PL notes for Section 13:
> at 0:17: also here: second part of full LV disclaimer intro is missing, please add: "NEQUA or The Problem of the Ages, by Jack Adams. Chapter 12. The institute of superintendents. Part 1"
> at 10:47: "cumbersome" – you say "curbsome"
> at 24:07: "Under the inequitable methods of exchange" – you say "equivalent" instead of "inequitable"
> at 28:53: missed sentence: "At frequent intervals, these bank panics reduced thousands of people to bankruptcy."
> at 38:37: "End of Chapter 12, Part 1." – you say "End of Section 13"
Just reupload with the same filename.
Thanks
Sonia