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Post by JorWat » January 11th, 2020, 2:21 pm

tommack wrote:
January 10th, 2020, 8:20 pm
Here is chapter 9
https://librivox.org/uploads/craigdav1/manandhisancestor_09_morris_128kb.mp3 (45:10)

Tom
Here are your notes:

11:28: "in this respect agreeing with those described by Dr. Chaillu" should be "in this respect agreeing with those described by Du Chaillu"
17:00: "but they remember the Bushmen in complexion" should be "but they resemble the Bushmen in complexion"
45:04: The ending silence is too long. You should be aiming for 5 seconds, and you've got over 6.5.
Jordan

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Post by tommack » January 11th, 2020, 7:39 pm

Here is the corrected chapter 9

https://librivox.org/uploads/craigdav1/manandhisancestor_09_morris_128kb.mp3 (45:71)

Sorry, I thought I had it OK the first time.

Tom

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Post by JorWat » January 12th, 2020, 12:06 pm

tommack wrote:
January 11th, 2020, 7:39 pm
Here is the corrected chapter 9

https://librivox.org/uploads/craigdav1/manandhisancestor_09_morris_128kb.mp3 (45:71)

Sorry, I thought I had it OK the first time.

Tom
PL OK
Jordan

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Post by JorWat » January 15th, 2020, 1:58 pm

LukeD wrote:
January 13th, 2020, 9:03 am
Here is Chapter 6:

https://librivox.org/uploads/craigdav1/manandhisancestor_06_morris_128kb.mp3

(46:50)

All the best,
Luke
Here are your notes:

33:05: 'The arthropoid apes' should be 'The anthropoid apes'
46:47: The ending silence is too short. You should be aiming for 5 seconds, and you've got less then 3.5
Jordan

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Post by RitaBoutros » January 19th, 2020, 9:21 am

Greetings!
I'd like the remaining open sections: That is, 08, 10, 12 and 13

Thanks, Rita

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Post by JorWat » January 19th, 2020, 9:23 am

RitaBoutros wrote:
January 19th, 2020, 9:21 am
Greetings!
I'd like the remaining open sections: That is, 08, 10, 12 and 13

Thanks, Rita
They're all yours. I guess this means we can move this to 'Readers Found'.
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Post by JorWat » January 27th, 2020, 3:09 pm

PL OK
Jordan

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Post by LukeD » February 3rd, 2020, 4:33 am

Chapter 6 with correction and 5 seconds of silence at the end.

https://librivox.org/uploads/craigdav1/manandhisancestor_06_morris_128kb.mp3

(46:53)

All the best,
Luke

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Post by JorWat » February 3rd, 2020, 1:10 pm

LukeD wrote:
February 3rd, 2020, 4:33 am
Chapter 6 with correction and 5 seconds of silence at the end.

https://librivox.org/uploads/craigdav1/manandhisancestor_06_morris_128kb.mp3

(46:53)

All the best,
Luke
PL OK
Jordan

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Post by RitaBoutros » February 12th, 2020, 7:39 am

Here is section 10: This was a marathon! Could easily have been broken into 2 or even 3 sections.

https://librivox.org/uploads/craigdav1/manandhisancestor_10_morris_128kb.mp3
1:06:34

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Post by JorWat » February 13th, 2020, 3:14 pm

RitaBoutros wrote:
February 12th, 2020, 7:39 am
Here is section 10: This was a marathon! Could easily have been broken into 2 or even 3 sections.

https://librivox.org/uploads/craigdav1/manandhisancestor_10_morris_128kb.mp3
1:06:34
PL OK. Well done for persisting.
Jordan

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Post by JorWat » Yesterday, 4:42 pm

Just one note:

32:36: "conscience become the controlling force in human actions, let fall the whip" should be "conscience become the controlling force in human actions, and government let fall the whip"
Jordan

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