PL notes for Section 16:
2:45 a missed correction "1 tablespoonful of onion juice"
9:10 another one "For impromptu evening affairs"
And since you'll be editing, I found the pause around 12:05 just a tad too long "[...] when ready to serve"
13:26 correction "and cut them into slices a half inch thick."
14:45 last one "and with a large vegetable scoop or teaspoon"
This all makes me hungry

Also, makes me want to cook!