Craig, I checked all your files. Brilliant job on the boatswain
as if you'd done it all your life. It would have been perfect if you had recorded it all in a storm on your boat (we all have to make sacrifices
) but this will do as well
excellent job and PL ok
The narrator parts are all well read too, but I have a few corrections to make in some scenes:
> at 0:01-0:15
: long intro can be cut
out as well as we will start with scene 2 immediately
> at about 0:53
: missing: "Caliban, within
> at 1:55
of "To Ferdinand" - did you only want to keep one version and forgot to cut one out ?
> at about 0:15
: missing: "Thunder
> at 0:44
: "end of scene 2
can be cut out"
> at 1:56
: "loaden with glistering apparel, &c
"- this means "et cetera" not "and company". In the previous scenes we can leave that expression as it's indeed a company of people, but here it wouldn't fit
> at about 2:07
: missing "aside to Ariel
" & "exit Ariel
> at about 2:42
: missing "End of The Tempest by William Shakespeare
> at 0:01
: as narrator you need to include the intro/outro to this as well: "Dramatis Personae of The Tempest by William Shakespeare. This is a Librivox recording. All Librivox recordings are in the public domain. For more information, or to volunteer, please visit Librivox dot org
> at 0:42
: I would say "Stage directions
" instead of Narrator
> at about 0:50
: missing "End of Dramatis Personae
2.1. / 3.1. / 3.2. / 3.3.
are PL ok
. Some intros or end of scenes could be cut but since there are no other errors, we can cut them in the final assembly, no reuploads needed.
Thanks for the great work !