COMPLETE Love Songs by GG Currie -ck

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terrybenn
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Post by terrybenn »

GregGiordano wrote: October 3rd, 2018, 4:06 pm
In re Section 71 - I have no argument regarding the placement of the footnote. I agree it does break up the flow of the poem. I guess I am old school in that you read the footnote where the author placed it, but it does detract from the work itself. I hesitate to remove it totally since the author obviously had a reason to include it. I will move it to the end and see how that sounds.

Thanks!

Greg
Normally, I agree. I'm also old school, but in the convos I've seen in various threads concerning footnotes it seems the prevailing attitude is that they're elective to an extent when it interferes with the flow of the work. In this case, with the footnote being almost as long as the poem itself :lol: I have to agree with moving it or leaving it out.

T
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Post by GregGiordano »

Here is the corrected Section 71 (footnote moved to the end of poem):

https://librivox.org/uploads/carolin/plumpudding_12_morley_128kb.mp3

New run time is 3:06

Please let me know if this sounds better than when it was in the middle of the poem.

Thanks!

Greg
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Post by Carolin »

Thank you all!

Greg, moving the footnote is entirely optional and up to you. You can leave it as it is if you prefer :thumbs:
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Post by ellies »

terrybenn wrote: October 3rd, 2018, 7:56 am Section 40 PL OK

42 PL OK

44 PL OK

49 PL OK

50 6:38 ...death to his... should be ...death to be his...

51 1:115 ...I will make it... should be ...I will take it...

53 :33 And glad heart... should be And my glad heart...
1:13 I'll beg for her... should be I'll beg of her...

thanks Terry,

50 corrected: https://librivox.org/uploads/carolin/lovesongs_currie_50_128kb.mp3

51 corrected: https://librivox.org/uploads/carolin/lovesongs_currie_51_128kb.mp3

53 corrected: https://librivox.org/uploads/carolin/lovesongs_currie_53_128kb.mp3

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I would like to claim sections 64, 65 and 66.

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thank you both :D
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Thank you :thumbs:
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Hi Carolin, can I claim the remaining sections, if still available
thanks
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ellies wrote: October 5th, 2018, 12:20 am Hi Carolin, can I claim the remaining sections, if still available (86 and 87)
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Post by lpeders »

terrybenn wrote: October 3rd, 2018, 7:31 am Section 41. There's a hum in the background. It's light so cleaning may remove it.
:47 I swear I hear chickens.
file name is in the wrong order. The number should come before currie.

It's a lovely reading. The only issues are tech things.

T
New file uploaded. I think I got rid of the chickens! :lol:
How is the hum?
Thanks,
Lauren
https://librivox.org/uploads/carolin/lovesongs_41_currie_128kb.mp3 (1:54)
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GregGiordano wrote: October 3rd, 2018, 5:12 pm Here is the corrected Section 71 (footnote moved to the end of poem):

https://librivox.org/uploads/carolin/plumpudding_12_morley_128kb.mp3

New run time is 3:06

Please let me know if this sounds better than when it was in the middle of the poem.

Thanks!

Greg
I am reposting this just in case it was lost in the back and forth of our footnote discussion! :)
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Thank you all so much :thumbs:
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GregGiordano wrote: October 6th, 2018, 4:14 am I am reposting this just in case it was lost in the back and forth of our footnote discussion! :)
It must have, sorry about that. Thank you :thumbs:
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