I already listened to the first section about the sheikhs. Wonderful to hear all those names spoken with an authentic pronunciation, thanks for that.
I also love the lively way of narrating the dialogues, this enhances the pleasure of listening.
I only found a couple of small errors, and some pauses between sentences, which were almost 3 seconds long. For a listener who is absorbed in the story, this feels too long
so I would suggest to cut the following to under 2 seconds. Best start with the end, so the time stamps all remain the same
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at 2:55-2:58: (p. 310) long pause after “he never walked upon it no more”
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at 4:27-4:30: (p. 310) long pause after “erect and tall”
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at 7:24: (p. 312) error: “and pay the
price he asked” – you say “
prince”
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at 9:33-9:36: (p. 313) long pause after “and paid him the money”
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at 10:03: (p. 313) stumble and repeat: “
and from that” – can be
cut out
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at 11:33-11:36: (p. 314) long pause after “in the ears of Kaid Abd el Wahid”
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at 16:38-16:41: (p. 316) long pause after “and experience the extent of his power”
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at 17:19: (p. 317) error: “and from which side did
they come” – I hear “
he came”
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at 19:13-19:17: the pause before the end disclaimer is also very long
> And finally, maybe you could run one round of
noise-cleaning to make the background hum a bit less audible
great job in any case, a pleasure to listen to. Thank you. Will try to listen to the other section later on, but I already wanted to give you feedback on this one.
Sonia
well, I really started to think you HAD forgotten. But thank you so much for that section. It's a big one, I will try to PL today still, but I'm about to have lunch with my family...so that will take a bit of time.
Well, it proved an enormous success in the end.
if you wouldn't mind correcting that bit, to make it really perfect:
so pointless. But your sections were interesting to listen to, and they were flawlessly narrated again. So thanks for these, both are PL ok. And we're two sections closer to the end. 
Very lively done, one can really feel the hallucinations while listening to the whole thing.