COMPLETE Marion Harland's Complete Etiquette -ck

CathyRindhoops · Post by **CathyRindhoops** » June 2nd, 2018, 1:38 pm

Sorry for missing out on completing section 42, time flew so quickly! May I reclaim it please and I'll finish what I started.

Lmnei · Post by **Lmnei** » June 2nd, 2018, 1:51 pm

Then I will do Section 1 Carolin and we will be Full again!

Lynda

Lmnei · Post by **Lmnei** » June 2nd, 2018, 1:56 pm

Hi Tracy!

Your Section 29 is now PL OK!

Great splicing of your edits into the recording! I could not tell where you did them other than I had some hints from what I had written...

Have a great day!

Lynda

Lmnei · Post by **Lmnei** » June 2nd, 2018, 10:13 pm

Hi Carolin -

Here is Section 1 - https://librivox.org/uploads/carolin/completeetiquette_01_harland_128kb.mp3 - 22:36

Have a good day!

Lynda

Foon · Post by **Foon** » June 3rd, 2018, 9:21 am

Here's section 2, at 18:52

https://librivox.org/uploads/carolin/completeetiquette_02_harland_128kb.mp3

Really fun to read about old-fashioned etiquette

Carolin · Post by **Carolin** » June 5th, 2018, 11:47 pm

Thank you all

Lmnei · Post by **Lmnei** » June 7th, 2018, 10:17 am

Foon wrote: ↑June 3rd, 2018, 9:21 am Here's section 2, at 18:52

https://librivox.org/uploads/carolin/completeetiquette_02_harland_128kb.mp3

Really fun to read about old-fashioned etiquette

Hi Foon!

You have a very nice accent!

I just ran into a couple of issues when PL'ing your Section 2

8:31 - The bottle (I think that is what you said) was kept... should be The kettle was kept...
18:18 - "One should a certain" is what I heard - should be "One should a cer TAIN" Totally different words.
In addition, I find that the spaces between paragraphs too long. In the future perhaps you can leave less silence? I was often left wondering if the reading had ended a couple of times.

That is all! Other than that a great reading Foon!

Lynda

Foon · Post by **Foon** » June 7th, 2018, 10:21 am

Lmnei wrote: ↑June 7th, 2018, 10:17 am
Foon wrote: ↑June 3rd, 2018, 9:21 am Here's section 2, at 18:52

https://librivox.org/uploads/carolin/completeetiquette_02_harland_128kb.mp3

Really fun to read about old-fashioned etiquette
Hi Foon!

You have a very nice accent!

I just ran into a couple of issues when PL'ing your Section 2

8:31 - The bottle (I think that is what you said) was kept... should be The kettle was kept...
18:18 - "One should a certain" is what I heard - should be "One should a cer TAIN" Totally different words.
In addition, I find that the spaces between paragraphs too long. In the future perhaps you can leave less silence? I was often left wondering if the reading had ended a couple of times.

That is all! Other than that a great reading Foon!

Lynda

Thanks for the feedback! I'll take care of those two issues and run through it to chop out some bits of silence while I'm editing anyways. I'll post back with new time stamps for those two issues.

Carolin · Post by **Carolin** » June 7th, 2018, 11:46 am

Thank you both

gloryb · Post by **gloryb** » June 7th, 2018, 3:07 pm

Hello, here is the corrected Section 26.

https://librivox.org/uploads/carolin/completeetiquette_26_harland_128kb.mp3

Corrected time is 15:50

Gloria

Carolin · Post by **Carolin** » June 8th, 2018, 12:10 am

Thank you gloria

Foon · Post by **Foon** » June 8th, 2018, 4:08 am

Hi Lynda,

8:17 Re-recorded the line, this time with kettle (it would be an interesting experience making tea with a hot water bottle

)
17:48 Re-recorded the line, this time with the actual pronunciation of the word ascertain... English is not my native language, and every so often I find out there's a word I've been mispronouncing for as long as I can remember

New duration 18:22, I trimmed 30 seconds of silence across the whole recording.

https://librivox.org/uploads/carolin/completeetiquette_02_harland_128kb.mp3

Carolin · Post by **Carolin** » June 8th, 2018, 10:42 pm

Thank you

Lmnei · Post by **Lmnei** » June 9th, 2018, 12:27 pm

gloryb wrote: ↑June 7th, 2018, 3:07 pm Hello, here is the corrected Section 26.

https://librivox.org/uploads/carolin/completeetiquette_26_harland_128kb.mp3

Corrected time is 15:50

Gloria

Gloria - EXCELLENT changes - I could not tell the difference where you inserted the words!

PL OK!

Lynda

Lmnei · Post by **Lmnei** » June 9th, 2018, 12:28 pm

Foon wrote: ↑June 8th, 2018, 4:08 am Hi Lynda,

8:17 Re-recorded the line, this time with kettle (it would be an interesting experience making tea with a hot water bottle )
17:48 Re-recorded the line, this time with the actual pronunciation of the word ascertain... English is not my native language, and every so often I find out there's a word I've been mispronouncing for as long as I can remember

New duration 18:22, I trimmed 30 seconds of silence across the whole recording.

https://librivox.org/uploads/carolin/completeetiquette_02_harland_128kb.mp3

Foon -

This recording is flowing much better now! Thanks so much for also taking some silence from your recording while you were fixing the two words!

You are now PL OK!

Lynda