Carmelea wrote: ↑July 22nd, 2018, 2:11 pmI hope the recording sounds good. In this chapter, Delores brings justice to her foe, antagonizes her captives, err, "guests", and decides it's time for dinner.
woah, Yellow Rufe's ending was quite gruesome, especially because it was so minutely described. Dolores really is a nasty piece of work.
But the section was extremely entertaining, and wonderfully narrated by you, Carmen.
With your powerful and lively narrative, I really felt in the thick of it all, especially at the beginning when they yelled orders up and down the ship. You did a great job with the several distinct voices for each character. I love reading in character myself, so I am always thrilled when I hear sections read like this
I'm already looking forward to your next chapter !! Oh and if ever you consider joining the drama forum, Todd and me will be mightily pleased at this great addition. I'm sure you like it there, seeing how well you do character voices.
Textually, the recording was flawless. There is only one tiny error in the outro:
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at 19:24: you can cut out "
the pirate woman" in the outro. This is not required for every chapter, only for the very last one of the book.
Thank you for this great reading !
Sonia