[COMPLETE]Quartet - Wheels - The Sixth Cycle - thw

NemoR · Post by **NemoR** » February 7th, 2018, 2:24 pm

Section 1 for spot PL:

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/wheels6_01_various_128kb.mp3

Newgatenovelist · Post by **Newgatenovelist** » February 7th, 2018, 2:39 pm

NemoR wrote: ↑February 7th, 2018, 2:24 pm Section 1 for spot PL:

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/wheels6_01_various_128kb.mp3

Section 1 is spot PL OK!

bluechien · Post by **bluechien** » February 7th, 2018, 3:16 pm

Newgatenovelist wrote: ↑February 7th, 2018, 2:13 pm A couple of notes for 13, Two Bucolic Poems:

3.29. P. 47. Omission:
To Richard Jennings.

5.00-5.08. P. 48, antepenultimate couplet:
(That once in ['the' added] dark blue grass dew-dabbled
Lay) .... those [heard these] ghosts like turkeys gabbled

13 for spot pl:
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/wheels6_13_various_128kb.mp3

Newgatenovelist · Post by **Newgatenovelist** » February 8th, 2018, 2:25 am

bluechien wrote: 13 for spot pl:
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/wheels6_13_various_128kb.mp3

13 is PL OK.

Newgatenovelist · Post by **Newgatenovelist** » February 8th, 2018, 3:05 pm

One for PL:

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/wheels6_04_various_128kb.mp3 (1.20)

NemoR · Post by **NemoR** » February 8th, 2018, 7:00 pm

Newgatenovelist wrote: ↑February 8th, 2018, 3:05 pm One for PL:

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/wheels6_04_various_128kb.mp3 (1.20)

Section 4 is PL OK.

Algy Pug · Post by **Algy Pug** » February 10th, 2018, 2:57 am

My final three sections:

Section 9 - 11:22
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/wheels6_09_various_128kb.mp3

Section 10 - 2:05
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/wheels6_10_various_128kb.mp3

Section 11 - 2:06
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/wheels6_11_various_128kb.mp3

Cheers

Newgatenovelist · Post by **Newgatenovelist** » February 10th, 2018, 4:15 am

Sections 9 and 11 are PL OK.

One note for 10, An Imitation

1.36-1.39, p. 39, last line of penultimate stanza:
And knew the purpose of these [heard those] plumes.

Algy Pug · Post by **Algy Pug** » February 10th, 2018, 4:37 am

Section 10 corrected and reuploaded.

Cheers

Newgatenovelist · Post by **Newgatenovelist** » February 10th, 2018, 5:39 am

Section 10 is spot PL OK.

Newgatenovelist · February 10th, 2018, 12:45 pm

Hi Nemo,

Section 16 is up. I think there might be a type in the first line, with 'lands' for 'lauds'. It's 'lauds' in the last line, when it's cycled back on itself. I recorded a version with 'lands' to be on the safe side, but see what you think.

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/wheels6_16_various_128kb.mp3 (1.46)

NemoR · Post by **NemoR** » February 10th, 2018, 1:21 pm

Newgatenovelist wrote: ↑February 10th, 2018, 12:45 pm Hi Nemo,

Section 16 is up. I think there might be a type in the first line, with 'lands' for 'lauds'. It's 'lauds' in the last line, when it's cycled back on itself. I recorded a version with 'lands' to be on the safe side, but see what you think.

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/wheels6_16_various_128kb.mp3 (1.46)

Thanks Erin, this is PL OK.

Yes, "lauds" it is! .. This verse first appeared in the Autumn 1920 addition of "Coterie" .... see page 59 ... https://library.brown.edu/pdfs/1188560994859375.pdf

Newgatenovelist · Post by **Newgatenovelist** » February 10th, 2018, 2:22 pm

Ah, looking it up would have been the sensible thing to do! Thanks for checking, and next time I won't be so impatient!

Newgatenovelist · Post by **Newgatenovelist** » February 12th, 2018, 9:54 am

Hi Nemo,

Section 17 is ready for PL. I hope your week is off to a good start!

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/wheels6_17_various_128kb.mp3 (6.34)

NemoR · Post by **NemoR** » February 12th, 2018, 8:51 pm

Newgatenovelist wrote: ↑February 12th, 2018, 9:54 am Hi Nemo,

Section 17 is ready for PL. I hope your week is off to a good start!

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/wheels6_17_various_128kb.mp3 (6.34)

Thanks Erin!

This is PL OK ....(and I love your ending)

That is a wrap folks!