COMPLETE Quartet - Wheels - The Fifth Cycle - thw

bluechien · Post by **bluechien** » February 5th, 2018, 12:13 pm

Newgatenovelist wrote: ↑February 5th, 2018, 11:58 am Section 44 is PL OK. And there was a bonus 'end of section' on your file, so it all works out in the end! Have a good evening!

Thanks for the PLs, Erin! I figured the narrator does end of section but whatever y'all like is fine with me.

More coming tonight, I'm afraid!

Newgatenovelist · Post by **Newgatenovelist** » February 5th, 2018, 2:55 pm

Okay, Nemo, absolutely positively the last one from me tonight:

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/wheels5_27_various_128kb.mp3 (2.22)

NemoR · Post by **NemoR** » February 5th, 2018, 3:07 pm

Hi Erin,

Yes, the cats love poetry but are very particular about what they listen to. They are a brother/sister combo we adopted from the local SPCA - Gideon and Kiku (they picked out their own names).

Here are sections 28 and 29 for spot PL's:

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/wheels5_28_various_128kb.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/wheels5_29_various_128kb.mp3

I will PL your sections tonight!

Newgatenovelist · Post by **Newgatenovelist** » February 5th, 2018, 3:37 pm

NemoR wrote: ↑February 5th, 2018, 3:07 pm Hi Erin,

Yes, the cats love poetry but are very particular about what they listen to. They are a brother/sister combo we adopted from the local SPCA - Gideon and Kiku (they picked out their own names).

Here are sections 28 and 29 for spot PL's:

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/wheels5_28_various_128kb.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/wheels5_29_various_128kb.mp3

I will PL your sections tonight!

28 and 29 are PL OK. And, more importantly, your cats are from the local shelter! And a pair, too! It's always harder to rehome a family. That's very exciting. I'm very glad they've gone to the right poetry-loving home, and I hope they help you pick out some good projects in future, too.

NemoR · Post by **NemoR** » February 5th, 2018, 5:13 pm

Hi Erin,

All of your sections posted to-date are PL OK

NemoR · Post by **NemoR** » February 5th, 2018, 8:43 pm

Hi Erin,

Sections 7 and 8 are in the MW for PL.

Thanks you!

bluechien · Post by **bluechien** » February 5th, 2018, 8:50 pm

Oh no, I see I'm jumping late into a cats conversation. I didn't read this before, honest!

So, ladies and gentlemen, beg pardon a moment:

Discovered: Erin.
Location: a bunker, tastefully decorated.
Small-release vinyl on the record player. She lifts the needle -- she's a PL professional, after all.
Lady Grey wafts from the bunker-kitchen.
Notification, on LV forum! One new message, from Eva D.
"Here's my new poem for PL! Eight consecutive Edith Sitwells! Titled, '8 More Bucolic Poems.' Thirteen minutes and an extra 25 seconds long!"

This face:
http://bit.ly/2FP5QgX

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/wheels5_34_various_128kb.mp3 13:25

Newgatenovelist · Post by **Newgatenovelist** » February 6th, 2018, 3:16 am

NemoR wrote: ↑February 5th, 2018, 8:43 pm Hi Erin,

Sections 7 and 8 are in the MW for PL.

Thanks you!

7 and 8 are PL OK. Mrs Prudential Consults the Witch of Endor is a really cool poem, and I never would have read it if it hadn't been for recording all of Wheels. I think I'll be sorry when 6 is finished.

PS Thanks for PLing my sections!

Newgatenovelist · Post by **Newgatenovelist** » February 6th, 2018, 3:24 am

bluechien wrote: ↑February 5th, 2018, 8:50 pm Oh no, I see I'm jumping late into a cats conversation. I didn't read this before, honest!

So, ladies and gentlemen, beg pardon a moment:

Discovered: Erin.
Location: a bunker, tastefully decorated.
Small-release vinyl on the record player. She lifts the needle -- she's a PL professional, after all.
Lady Grey wafts from the bunker-kitchen.
Notification, on LV forum! One new message, from Eva D.
"Here's my new poem for PL! Eight consecutive Edith Sitwells! Titled, '8 More Bucolic Poems.' Thirteen minutes and an extra 25 seconds long!"

This face:
http://bit.ly/2FP5QgX

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/wheels5_34_various_128kb.mp3 13:25

It would be kind of cool if I lived in a bunker. I have the idea that it would be quieter than where I currently live and I could record more that way. Although if I had my own bunker, I would probably turn it into an unofficial animal shelter and it wouldn't be as quiet as I'm thinking!

Three small notes for 34, Eight More Bucolic Poems

6.44-6.47. P. 104, section IV. Omission:
...these
Thoughts are [as] thick as peas!'"

7.47-7.50. P. 105, V.
As [heard And] thick as the daisies in the sky...

11.59-12.01. P. 110, VIII.
Seems [heard Seem] cornucopias of fruits;

Algy Pug · Post by **Algy Pug** » February 6th, 2018, 5:37 am

Another batch:

Section 14 - 1:11
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/wheels5_14_various_128kb.mp3

Section 15 - 2:31
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/wheels5_15_various_128kb.mp3

Section 16 - 2:08
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/wheels5_16_various_128kb.mp3

Section 17 - 3:09
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/wheels5_17_various_128kb.mp3

Section 18 - 2:50
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/wheels5_18_various_128kb.mp3

Cheers

Newgatenovelist · Post by **Newgatenovelist** » February 6th, 2018, 8:59 am

Hi Nemo,

I think I got it this time:
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/wheels5_11_various_128kb.mp3 (1.07)

NemoR · Post by **NemoR** » February 6th, 2018, 10:08 am

Newgatenovelist wrote: ↑February 6th, 2018, 8:59 am Hi Nemo,

I think I got it this time:
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/wheels5_11_various_128kb.mp3 (1.07)

Section 11 is PL OK!

NemoR · Post by **NemoR** » February 6th, 2018, 10:13 am

My three DR's are in the MW ready for PL - sections 37, 42 and 45 ( 3:47. 0:53 and 1:48 )

Newgatenovelist · Post by **Newgatenovelist** » February 6th, 2018, 12:53 pm

NemoR wrote: ↑February 6th, 2018, 10:13 am My three DR's are in the MW ready for PL - sections 37, 42 and 45 ( 3:47. 0:53 and 1:48 )

Sections 42 and 45 are PL OK.

I have one note, or perhaps more of a query, for section 37. It's at 3.03-3.07, the second stanza on p. 27 or near the bottom of p. 2.
...the eccentricity
Of Saints and early Christians who try

Two of my main go-to guides give a different pronunciation for eccentricity:

https://www.merriam-webster.com/dictionary/eccentricity
https://en.oxforddictionaries.com/definition/eccentricity

Newgatenovelist · Post by **Newgatenovelist** » February 6th, 2018, 2:41 pm

Algy Pug wrote: ↑February 6th, 2018, 5:37 am Another batch

14-18 are PL OK!