all right, then we better go back to readers wanted although I have a hunch we won't stay there long
Sonia
all right, then we better go back to readers wanted although I have a hunch we won't stay there long
Hi Analiese, are you still here? Do you want the available story?
Well done! This was a rather long (and strange story) there are just two comments I would make:Seppukun wrote: ↑February 11th, 2018, 3:26 pm Ready for PL.
https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/chaucerstorybook_10_tappan_128kb.mp3
Elizabby wrote: ↑February 13th, 2018, 4:51 amWell done! This was a rather long (and strange story) there are just two comments I would make:Seppukun wrote: ↑February 11th, 2018, 3:26 pm Ready for PL.
https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/chaucerstorybook_10_tappan_128kb.mp3
@16:14 there is an extra "she" inserted in the sentence which changes the meaning. I don't think it will be easy to edit out, so I suggest re-recording the sentence "and then deserted her for the love of a fair young kite".
@16:49 I think it would be helpful to give the first part of the footnote here: "Chaucer did not complete this story. The ending given here was written by Edmund Spenser nearly 200 years later."
Once you have made those changes, you need to re-export the file (using the same filename) and reupload and I'll spot check just those two places.
Just one other little comment for noting is that the tone of the recording changes significantly (for the better) at around 23 seconds into the recording, as the actual text starts. Did you do something different with your microphone or settings? It changes back later on. If you can remember what you did, it would be worth keeping those settings! It makes your voice sound nearer and warmer.