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Post Posted:: October 2nd, 2017, 10:37 am 

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Newgatenovelist wrote:
Cool! Sections 1 and 5 are PL OK. Osbert Sitwell is coming up with lots of surprises in this cycle.

One note for 6, Song of the Fauns, at 1.30-1.33, page 18:
Up to the sky
We cast these [heard thee] high

Erin


Section 6 up for spot check:

https://librivox.org/uploads/dlolso21/wheels3_06_various_128kb.mp3

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Post Posted:: October 2nd, 2017, 11:01 am 

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Newgatenovelist wrote:
Hi Eva,

45 and 47 are PL OK.

I have one note for 44, Myself on the Merry-go-round:
0.30-0.33, p. 90:
Casts [heard cast] colours on the face of these

I think the S was articulated clearly with other words, which is why I marked this one (as articulation, not accent). Could you please listen?


I'll get to corrections soon, really :D

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Post Posted:: October 2nd, 2017, 11:22 am 

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Nemo - 6 is PL OK. Go have a nice cup of tea.

Eva - do your thing. I'll be here, whenever you're ready.


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Post Posted:: October 3rd, 2017, 10:32 pm 

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2 spot PLs! I'm having no luck with more substantial edits, have to wait until a cold abates. In the meantime ...

Newgatenovelist wrote:
I have one note for 44, Myself on the Merry-go-round:
0.30-0.33, p. 90:
Casts [heard cast] colours on the face of these

I think the S was articulated clearly with other words, which is why I marked this one (as articulation, not accent). Could you please listen?

https://librivox.org/uploads/dlolso21/wheels3_44_various_128kb.mp3

Newgatenovelist wrote:
A short note for 17, Two Fragments from the Spanish:

At 0.13, please add 'I' at the beginning of the first fragment


https://librivox.org/uploads/dlolso21/wheels3_17_various_128kb.mp3

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Post Posted:: October 4th, 2017, 3:48 am 

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bluechien wrote:
2 spot PLs! I'm having no luck with more substantial edits, have to wait until a cold abates. In the meantime ...



Boy, do I know that feeling. I hope you have a mug of hot honey and a nice book of poetry to keep you company until your immune system gets on top of the cold.

Until then, 17 and 44 are PL OK.
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Post Posted:: October 4th, 2017, 12:11 pm 

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Poems 13-16 are PL OK!


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Post Posted:: October 4th, 2017, 1:50 pm 

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Algy Pug wrote:
Here are my remaining readings:


Sections 18, 19 and 21 are PL OK.

20, Psittachus Eois Imitatrix Ales Ab Indis
0.35-0.38, line 3 of stanza 2
Are immemoriably [heard immemorially] old

It looks like Sitwell is being deliberately archaic. From spending five minutes searching, he wasn't the first to use this word, but a transcription of this poem on Poets' Corner is the first hit from most of the search engines I use. Make of that whatever you will.


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Post Posted:: October 4th, 2017, 3:23 pm 

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Section 20 corrected and reuploaded.

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Post Posted:: October 5th, 2017, 2:09 am 

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Hi Algy,

20 and 22 are PL OK.

23, Outskirts
1.39-1.41, p. 55, second half of page
The rings and circles [heard ripples] spread

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Post Posted:: October 6th, 2017, 1:51 am 

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Hi Eva and Nemo,

Section 12 is PL OK - well done!


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Post Posted:: October 6th, 2017, 2:01 am 

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Section 23 corrected and re-uploaded.

https://librivox.org/uploads/dlolso21/wheels3_23_various_128kb.mp3

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Post Posted:: October 6th, 2017, 2:41 am 

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Hi Algy,

I really shouldn't take a base pleasure in these bickering critics, but I do. Thank you.

One PL note each:

48, Press cuttings
P. 101, 4.54-5.01, Note
...will find her happy to produce [heard send] photographs of counterfoils of all cheques sent by the contributors during the last three years.


49, Bibliography
3.40-3.45. First paragraph under 'Our Stylists'. Possible omission - did you want to include this?:
...on such unadulterated drive take [(sic)] one's breath away.


Erin



On edit: section 23 spot check is okay.


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Post Posted:: October 7th, 2017, 3:46 pm 

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Sections 48 and 49 corrected and reuploaded:

https://librivox.org/uploads/dlolso21/wheels3_48_various_128kb.mp3

https://librivox.org/uploads/dlolso21/wheels3_49_various_128kb.mp3

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Post Posted:: October 8th, 2017, 8:21 am 

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48 and 49 are PL OK. Sorry about the typo in the PL notes!
Erin


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Post Posted:: October 10th, 2017, 6:37 am 

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The first round of Iris Tree for PL!

https://librivox.org/uploads/dlolso21/wheels3_24_various_128kb.mp3 (1.15)
https://librivox.org/uploads/dlolso21/wheels3_25_various_128kb.mp3 (2.11)
https://librivox.org/uploads/dlolso21/wheels3_26_various_128kb.mp3 (1.50)

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