[COMPLETE]Wheels - The Third Cycle by various - dlo

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Post by NemoR » October 2nd, 2017, 10:37 am

Newgatenovelist wrote:Cool! Sections 1 and 5 are PL OK. Osbert Sitwell is coming up with lots of surprises in this cycle.

One note for 6, Song of the Fauns, at 1.30-1.33, page 18:
Up to the sky
We cast these [heard thee] high

Erin
Section 6 up for spot check:

https://librivox.org/uploads/dlolso21/wheels3_06_various_128kb.mp3

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‘By not holding to fixed views,
The pure-hearted one, having clarity of vision,
Being freed from all sense-desires,
Is not born again into this world.’

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Post by bluechien » October 2nd, 2017, 11:01 am

Newgatenovelist wrote:Hi Eva,

45 and 47 are PL OK.

I have one note for 44, Myself on the Merry-go-round:
0.30-0.33, p. 90:
Casts [heard cast] colours on the face of these

I think the S was articulated clearly with other words, which is why I marked this one (as articulation, not accent). Could you please listen?
I'll get to corrections soon, really :D

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Eva D
PLers: pls correct pronunciation!

“But take my advice, when you meet anything that's going to be human and isn't yet, or used to be human once and isn't now, or ought to be human and isn't, you keep your eyes on it and feel for your hatchet.”

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Post by Newgatenovelist » October 2nd, 2017, 11:22 am

Nemo - 6 is PL OK. Go have a nice cup of tea.

Eva - do your thing. I'll be here, whenever you're ready.

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Post by bluechien » October 3rd, 2017, 10:32 pm

2 spot PLs! I'm having no luck with more substantial edits, have to wait until a cold abates. In the meantime ...
Newgatenovelist wrote: I have one note for 44, Myself on the Merry-go-round:
0.30-0.33, p. 90:
Casts [heard cast] colours on the face of these

I think the S was articulated clearly with other words, which is why I marked this one (as articulation, not accent). Could you please listen?
https://librivox.org/uploads/dlolso21/wheels3_44_various_128kb.mp3
Newgatenovelist wrote: A short note for 17, Two Fragments from the Spanish:

At 0.13, please add 'I' at the beginning of the first fragment
https://librivox.org/uploads/dlolso21/wheels3_17_various_128kb.mp3
Eva D
PLers: pls correct pronunciation!

“But take my advice, when you meet anything that's going to be human and isn't yet, or used to be human once and isn't now, or ought to be human and isn't, you keep your eyes on it and feel for your hatchet.”

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Post by Newgatenovelist » October 4th, 2017, 3:48 am

bluechien wrote:2 spot PLs! I'm having no luck with more substantial edits, have to wait until a cold abates. In the meantime ...

Boy, do I know that feeling. I hope you have a mug of hot honey and a nice book of poetry to keep you company until your immune system gets on top of the cold.

Until then, 17 and 44 are PL OK.
Erin

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Post by Newgatenovelist » October 4th, 2017, 12:11 pm

Poems 13-16 are PL OK!

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Post by Newgatenovelist » October 4th, 2017, 1:50 pm

Algy Pug wrote:Here are my remaining readings:
Sections 18, 19 and 21 are PL OK.

20, Psittachus Eois Imitatrix Ales Ab Indis
0.35-0.38, line 3 of stanza 2
Are immemoriably [heard immemorially] old

It looks like Sitwell is being deliberately archaic. From spending five minutes searching, he wasn't the first to use this word, but a transcription of this poem on Poets' Corner is the first hit from most of the search engines I use. Make of that whatever you will.

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Post by Algy Pug » October 4th, 2017, 3:23 pm

Section 20 corrected and reuploaded.

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Post by Newgatenovelist » October 5th, 2017, 2:09 am

Hi Algy,

20 and 22 are PL OK.

23, Outskirts
1.39-1.41, p. 55, second half of page
The rings and circles [heard ripples] spread

Erin

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Post by Newgatenovelist » October 6th, 2017, 1:51 am

Hi Eva and Nemo,

Section 12 is PL OK - well done!

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Post by Algy Pug » October 6th, 2017, 2:01 am

Section 23 corrected and re-uploaded.

https://librivox.org/uploads/dlolso21/wheels3_23_various_128kb.mp3

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Post by Newgatenovelist » October 6th, 2017, 2:41 am

Hi Algy,

I really shouldn't take a base pleasure in these bickering critics, but I do. Thank you.

One PL note each:

48, Press cuttings
P. 101, 4.54-5.01, Note
...will find her happy to produce [heard send] photographs of counterfoils of all cheques sent by the contributors during the last three years.


49, Bibliography
3.40-3.45. First paragraph under 'Our Stylists'. Possible omission - did you want to include this?:
...on such unadulterated drive take [(sic)] one's breath away.


Erin



On edit: section 23 spot check is okay.

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Post by Algy Pug » October 7th, 2017, 3:46 pm

Algy Pug

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Post by Newgatenovelist » October 8th, 2017, 8:21 am

48 and 49 are PL OK. Sorry about the typo in the PL notes!
Erin


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