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Post Posted:: October 6th, 2017, 7:45 am 

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Section 22 is PL OK.

23, A Desperate Assault
5.25-5.35. Final paragraph, first sentence. Stumble and 'those' for 'these':
Boldly though they had taken and held that hill, prudence came to the Boer riflemen as these [heard as thos-as those] eager bayonets bore down upon them.


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Post Posted:: October 6th, 2017, 11:42 am 

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Hello Algy,

I have a couple of PL notes:

20, Australia's springtime
2.35-2.39. First line of last stanza.
...and the dazzled eye [heard eyes] may see
Wondrous dreams of future greatness

21, The man that saved the match
3.28-3.33. First line of a stanza roughly in the middle.
The bowler with [heard from] the break from leg sent down a hardish ball,

5.10-5.18. Penultimate line of antepenultimate stanza.
It was a single innings game, and plainly on the play [heard day]
It seemed the glory would be ours upon that Christmas Day.


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Post Posted:: October 7th, 2017, 4:05 pm 

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Three sections corrected and reuploaded:

Section 20
https://librivox.org/uploads/triciag/cooeereciter_20_various_128kb.mp3

Section 21
https://librivox.org/uploads/triciag/cooeereciter_21_various_128kb.mp3

Section 23
https://librivox.org/uploads/triciag/cooeereciter_23_various_128kb.mp3

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Post Posted:: October 8th, 2017, 8:26 am 

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20, 21 and 23 are PL OK.

Notes for 17, Free Trade v Protection

2.17-2.21. Omission, third line:
Set [all] the manger-loving dogs a-barking in his praise,

4.02-4.06. Last line:
"As soon as I have packed my things, I'm coming straight [heard right] away."

4.10-4.13. Second line, omission:
Her ancestors owned land and beeves long [years] before the flood;

5.05-5.10. Third line, repetition:
Of carpet-bags Of carpet-bags three dozen most plethorically crammed,

Erin


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Post Posted:: October 8th, 2017, 11:20 am 

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Good morning Algy!

Notes for 19, The Little Duchess:

5.11-5.14:
...then, when at last [heard at last when] they were within the gates...

6.42-6.45:
"Oh, no," cried [heard said] the boy eagerly...

8.51-8.55:
The little Duchess should [heard would] be his debtor, and run no more risks.

10.10-10.11
The boy drew [heard drew in] a deep breath...

Erin


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Post Posted:: October 8th, 2017, 5:10 pm 

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Sections 17 and 19 corrected and reuploaded.

https://librivox.org/uploads/triciag/cooeereciter_17_various_128kb.mp3

https://librivox.org/uploads/triciag/cooeereciter_19_various_128kb.mp3

Still awaiting PL notes for Section 18.

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Post Posted:: October 9th, 2017, 5:41 am 

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17 is PL OK. Last lap:

18, The Lion's Cubs
Bottom of page 2, 2.45-2.52
The wide world shall be shown
That we mean to hold our own
In the home [heard land] of our adoption, free and fair;


19, The Little Duchess
5.11-5.14:
...then, when at last [heard at last when] they were within the gates...


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Post Posted:: October 9th, 2017, 3:54 pm 

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Sections 17 and 19 corrected and reuploaded.

https://librivox.org/uploads/triciag/cooeereciter_17_various_128kb.mp3

https://librivox.org/uploads/triciag/cooeereciter_19_various_128kb.mp3

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Post Posted:: October 10th, 2017, 5:12 am 

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Howdy Algy,

19 is PL OK.

I think we got our wires crossed somewhere. 17 is PL OK - I just spot checked it, and it's all fine and dandy. 18 has one PL note:

Bottom of page 2, 2.45-2.52
The wide world shall be shown
That we mean to hold our own
In the home [heard land] of our adoption, free and fair;


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Post Posted:: October 10th, 2017, 4:29 pm 

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Section 18 corrected and reuploaded:

https://librivox.org/uploads/triciag/cooeereciter_18_various_128kb.mp3

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Post Posted:: October 11th, 2017, 3:07 am 

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PL OK.


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