[COMPLETE] Mrs. Dymond by Thackeray Ritchi - ke

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Thanks, Roohi. :D
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Good job, Roohi! Chapter 35 is PL OK. :clap:
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Thanks
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Hello, gang,

I am just posting to let you all know that I am going away July 4th and will be away from internet about 3 weeks. I'll catalog when I get back, if the project is complete then. *smile* No rush at all, I just wanted to give you a heads up in case you finish before I am back and I seem unresponsive...
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Have a good one. I will be away for ten days myself. We will meet again. :thumbs:
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Great Jim
Enjoy!
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Hello, Roohi, I hope all is well. Your 33 is PL OK. Good job. :thumbs: Jim
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Hello, Roohi, glad to hear from you. This chapter is fine except for these issues:

1. At the beginning of the text, there is an epigraph below the title, which has been omitted.
2. There is a repeat "I and I" at about 1:55.
3. "Country" for "county" at 4:32 may not matter very much, so I leave it up to you to change or not.
4. "Glazing" for "glaring" probably should be fixed because otherwise it doesn't make sense.
5. Also, "shake" for "shade" at 12:33.
6. At about 13:07, you have omitted an entire thought; your reading skips from "undo" to "Ah!"
7. The final seconds seem a bit noisy, if you could redo that, it would sound better.

I hope all is well with you and that we can get this book done soon and out of our hair, so to speak. Yours, Jim :thumbs:
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Sorry
Cam back after a months holiday.
Will complete over the weekend
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Thanks, Roohi. Have a good day! :)
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Excellent, Roohi. Section 34 is PL OK. :clap:

Note: The time is longer now with the additions. I put it in the MW with 14:13 instead of 14:06. Ok?
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