[COMPLETE] Mrs. Dymond by Thackeray Ritchi - ke
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Good job, Roohi! Chapter 35 is PL OK.
Hello, gang,
I am just posting to let you all know that I am going away July 4th and will be away from internet about 3 weeks. I'll catalog when I get back, if the project is complete then. *smile* No rush at all, I just wanted to give you a heads up in case you finish before I am back and I seem unresponsive...
I am just posting to let you all know that I am going away July 4th and will be away from internet about 3 weeks. I'll catalog when I get back, if the project is complete then. *smile* No rush at all, I just wanted to give you a heads up in case you finish before I am back and I seem unresponsive...
Kathrine
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Have a good one. I will be away for ten days myself. We will meet again.
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Hello, Roohi, I hope all is well. Your 33 is PL OK. Good job. Jim
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Hello, Roohi, glad to hear from you. This chapter is fine except for these issues:
1. At the beginning of the text, there is an epigraph below the title, which has been omitted.
2. There is a repeat "I and I" at about 1:55.
3. "Country" for "county" at 4:32 may not matter very much, so I leave it up to you to change or not.
4. "Glazing" for "glaring" probably should be fixed because otherwise it doesn't make sense.
5. Also, "shake" for "shade" at 12:33.
6. At about 13:07, you have omitted an entire thought; your reading skips from "undo" to "Ah!"
7. The final seconds seem a bit noisy, if you could redo that, it would sound better.
I hope all is well with you and that we can get this book done soon and out of our hair, so to speak. Yours, Jim
1. At the beginning of the text, there is an epigraph below the title, which has been omitted.
2. There is a repeat "I and I" at about 1:55.
3. "Country" for "county" at 4:32 may not matter very much, so I leave it up to you to change or not.
4. "Glazing" for "glaring" probably should be fixed because otherwise it doesn't make sense.
5. Also, "shake" for "shade" at 12:33.
6. At about 13:07, you have omitted an entire thought; your reading skips from "undo" to "Ah!"
7. The final seconds seem a bit noisy, if you could redo that, it would sound better.
I hope all is well with you and that we can get this book done soon and out of our hair, so to speak. Yours, Jim
https://librivox.org/uploads/kathrinee/mrsdymond_34_ritchie_128kb.mp3
hopefully fixed
Thanks
regards
roohi
hopefully fixed
Thanks
regards
roohi
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Excellent, Roohi. Section 34 is PL OK.
Note: The time is longer now with the additions. I put it in the MW with 14:13 instead of 14:06. Ok?
Note: The time is longer now with the additions. I put it in the MW with 14:13 instead of 14:06. Ok?