[COMPLETE][Fiction]An Iceland Fisherman by Pierre Loti - kit

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PL for Section 50 - just one edit to make:
0:38 “that, it had not been…” read for “that had it not been …”
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BrianFullen wrote: November 29th, 2022, 11:50 am You're not a cart rider, are you?
Not yet! Hopefully not for a long time! It was a long trek today, mind you. Those who wanted golf carts were disappointed, 'though: it's been raining pretty much non-stop for several days, so they were banned today.
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PL for Section 46:
I've marked it PL OK.

If you want to be picky, most of your breathings throughout are rather loud 'gasps' and could do with de-amplifying.

That was a marathon!
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GillH wrote: November 29th, 2022, 12:11 pm Sections 47 and 48 PL OK!
Thks Gill! :D
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GillH wrote: November 29th, 2022, 12:23 pm PL for Section 46:
I've marked it PL OK.

If you want to be picky, most of your breathings throughout are rather loud 'gasps' and could do with de-amplifying.

That was a marathon!
Well noted, Gill... :hmm: I'll come back to this at the very end before the deadline and see what I can do.
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GillH wrote: November 29th, 2022, 12:17 pm PL for Section 49: Just a couple of little things.

At 4:24 you pronounce "Leopoldine" differently from elsewhere.

Optional:
For "Norden Fjords" I hear something like "Nuan Fu-ah" (at 0:49, 1:41, 2:09 and 3:12), but whether you take it as English or Icelandic (or even French) the pronunciation would be just as it looks. Do you have a reason for pronouncing it this way?
:hmm: I actually wasn't 100% sure about the pronounciation of "Norden Fjords" and I guess Google was wrong to tag it as Danish (which is what I had followed: the Danish pronounciation--which sounds like "Nuan Fu-ah", I guess!). Go figure. :?

I'll fix these both soon. :)
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GillH wrote: November 29th, 2022, 12:18 pm PL for Section 50 - just one edit to make:
0:38 “that, it had not been…” read for “that had it not been …”
Noted! :shock: I'll fix this after fixing Section 49.
Let me come back to you.
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BrianFullen wrote: November 28th, 2022, 8:18 am
GillH wrote: November 28th, 2022, 1:05 am Thanks, Rel.
I'll get on it once it's noted in the MW.
Noted! Thanks.
Section 51 uploaded now :clap: :
https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/icelandfisherman_51_loti_128kb.mp3 [5:02]

For this reading, there seems to be 2 typos in the printed text, so I read in the recording the following:

"quite close" instead of printed "quiet close"; and,
"2nd of August" instead of printed "2d of August".

Please let me know what you think. :hmm:
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Rel22 wrote: November 30th, 2022, 1:16 am
BrianFullen wrote: November 28th, 2022, 8:18 am
GillH wrote: November 28th, 2022, 1:05 am Thanks, Rel.
I'll get on it once it's noted in the MW.
Noted! Thanks.
Section 51 uploaded now :clap: :
https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/icelandfisherman_51_loti_128kb.mp3 [5:02]

For this reading, there seems to be 2 typos in the printed text, so I read in the recording the following:

"quite close" instead of printed "quiet close"; and,
"2nd of August" instead of printed "2d of August".

Please let me know what you think. :hmm:
Thanks Rel and Gill! Section 51 is noted in MW!
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PL for Section 51:
Just again the pronunciation of Leopoldine at 2:44, 4:03 and 4:20 - in the earlier sections you were saying "...deen" but in this section each time it's the diphthong "ai" (as in "my")

[That's what I meant in the PL for Section 49: you had said "...een" each time until that final instance at 4:24.]

You're right - "quiet" was a typo; however, '2d' is quite often found as an alternative or older form of '2nd'. All good!

Thanks!
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Rel22 wrote: November 30th, 2022, 1:07 am
GillH wrote: November 29th, 2022, 12:23 pm PL for Section 46:
I've marked it PL OK.

If you want to be picky, most of your breathings throughout are rather loud 'gasps' and could do with de-amplifying.

That was a marathon!
Well noted, Gill... :hmm: I'll come back to this at the very end before the deadline and see what I can do.
Hi Gill, I've fixed up Section 46 now. :clap:
It's been re-uploaded (and reconfirming that the time is unchanged):

https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/icelandfisherman_46_loti_128kb.mp3 [4:44]

My gasps were annoying! (Sorry about that!) I realise now I mis-compressed this file! :shock: (I'm still in that learning curve!!). :roll:
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Section 46 'still' PLOK!
Very nice. Thanks.

I don't think there's really a deadline once you have submitted the first version of the section.
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GillH wrote: December 2nd, 2022, 2:21 am Section 46 'still' PLOK!
Very nice. Thanks.

I don't think there's really a deadline once you have submitted the first version of the section.
I see... :hmm: I don't know what that means entirely just yet. (Now I'm wondering, if I get much better at compressing these files in the not so distant future, hopefully :? , should I go back to fix up older files and reupload?).

Meanwhile, I've also now uploaded Section 52 :clap: :
https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/icelandfisherman_52_loti_128kb.mp3 [9:01]

I'll come to the pending fixes of the other sections I have and also uploading the very last section very soon. :)
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Rel22 wrote: December 4th, 2022, 6:36 am
Meanwhile, I've also now uploaded Section 52 :clap: :
https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/icelandfisherman_52_loti_128kb.mp3 [9:01]

I'll come to the pending fixes of the other sections I have and also uploading the very last section very soon. :)
Thank you Rel! :)
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BrianFullen wrote: December 4th, 2022, 7:27 am
Rel22 wrote: December 4th, 2022, 6:36 am
Meanwhile, I've also now uploaded Section 52 :clap: :
https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/icelandfisherman_52_loti_128kb.mp3 [9:01]

I'll come to the pending fixes of the other sections I have and also uploading the very last section very soon. :)
Thank you Rel! :)
And now Section 53 uploaded as well! :clap:
https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/icelandfisherman_53_loti_128kb.mp3 [2:15]

And a big thank you, Brian, for your patience and understanding--and for bringing me onto this wonderful work. What a story and ending! :shock:

I'm working on those other fixes pointed out by Gill...I'll come back to you all again soon on those! :)
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