[COMPLETE] Buffalo Bill and the Overland Trail, by Edwin L. Sabin-mtf

[silverquill]

Hi - chapt 17 is now done! (18:39)

https://librivox.org/uploads/mightyfelix/buffalobill_17_sabin_128kb.mp3

Thanks

Just under the wire, but very glad to have your recording.
Please stay tuned for your proof listening report in case there are any corrections needed.

[lomond]

https://librivox.org/uploads/mightyfelix/buffalobill_12_sabin_128kb.mp3

Chapter 12 uploaded. 21:17

Greetings -

Welcome to LibriVox, browningallyson1. Hope you stay around for a good long time.

Chapter 12 was nicely read; a very good first offering. No complaints about the reading from your DPL.

Just one minor fix is needed and it will be listed as PL OK. The silent period at the end of the recording needs to be 2-3 seconds longer.

Let's hear more from you real soon.

Lomond

[lomond]

Hi there, can I take 17?

Hi - chapt 17 is now done! (18:39)

https://librivox.org/uploads/mightyfelix/buffalobill_17_sabin_128kb.mp3

Thanks

Greetings -

A couple of notes on Chapter 17:

TIME: 00:22 COMMENT: The title of the chapter, "Davy 'The Bullwhacker'" is omitted.

TIME: 17:07 TEXT: "After the parting of the trail, the next station" The reading has "train" instead of "trail".

Other than those two, this one is PL OK.

Lomond

[browningallyson1]

I added the additional silence at the end of the recording. Thank you!

Chapter 12 21:21

https://librivox.org/uploads/mightyfelix/buffalobill_12_sabin_128kb.mp3

[silverquill]

I added the additional silence at the end of the recording. Thank you!

Chapter 12 21:21

https://librivox.org/uploads/mightyfelix/buffalobill_12_sabin_128kb.mp3

Thank you!
Marked Ready for Spot PL

[lomond]

Greetings -

I listened to the new recordings of Chapters 13 and 21 and found some things that need attention.

Chapter 13:

TIME: 00:17 COMMENT: There is a four second pause here that could use some trimming in length.

TIME: 09:00 TEXT: "become when they found that they could not" COMMENT: Pause after "not" needs to be trimmed.

TIME: 21:35 TEXT: "at a thousand dollars apiece!" COMMENT: The five second silent period right after "apiece" should be at the very end of the recording.

Chapter 21:

TIME: 00:15 COMMENT: The long pause here should be shortened.

TIME: 02:49 TEXT: "addressed to the post sutler," COMMENT: There is some hesitancy between "post" and "sutler" that could use a quick edit.

TIME: 04:38 COMMENT: "Butte" is pronounced like the first syllable of "beaut-iful"

TIME: 10:51 TEXT: "but which was then western" COMMENT: This phrase has a repeat in it.

TIME: 17:45 COMMENT: This needs to be fixed in the same way as the end of Chapter 13 needs to be with the five second silent period at the end of the recording.

Hang in there, MickeyMac. Everyone goes through this learning curve. Don't hesitate to ask for assistance if you need.

Lomond

[CBinns]

Greetings -

A couple of notes on Chapter 17:

TIME: 00:22 COMMENT: The title of the chapter, "Davy 'The Bullwhacker'" is omitted.

TIME: 17:07 TEXT: "After the parting of the trail, the next station" The reading has "train" instead of "trail".

Other than those two, this one is PL OK.

Lomond

Thanks for the review and feedback Lomond. Now edited and re-uploaded: https://librivox.org/uploads/mightyfelix/buffalobill_17_sabin_128kb.mp3 (18:41)

[silverquill]

Thanks for the review and feedback Lomond. Now edited and re-uploaded: https://librivox.org/uploads/mightyfelix/buffalobill_17_sabin_128kb.mp3 (18:41)

Thank you!
I've marked this Ready for Spot PL

[lomond]

Thanks for the review and feedback Lomond. Now edited and re-uploaded: https://librivox.org/uploads/mightyfelix/buffalobill_17_sabin_128kb.mp3 (18:41)

Thank you!
I've marked this Ready for Spot PL

Greetings -

Thanks for the good fixes, CBinns. Now marked as PL OK.

Getting close to the end of this one.

Lomond

[BookBard]

Hi, may I please claim section 14?

[silverquill]

Hi, may I please claim section 14?

Yes, thank you!
This is the last chapter we need to complete this book.

[BookBard]

OK, here is chapter 14!

https://librivox.org/uploads/mightyfelix/buffalobill_14_sabin_128kb.mp3 24:16

Please let me know if you catch needed edits or have other suggestions.

[silverquill]

OK, here is chapter 14!

https://librivox.org/uploads/mightyfelix/buffalobill_14_sabin_128kb.mp3 24:16

Please let me know if you catch needed edits or have other suggestions.

Thank you so much for the quick turnaround!
Stay tuned for your report.

[lomond]

OK, here is chapter 14!

https://librivox.org/uploads/mightyfelix/buffalobill_14_sabin_128kb.mp3 24:16

Please let me know if you catch needed edits or have other suggestions.

Greetings -

BookBard, thanks for a nice job of reading Chapter 14. Definitely PL OK.

And thanks to all the readers who contributed to this enjoyable book.

Lomond

[silverquill]

Thanks!
Another PM sent to get the corrections we need on two chapters to complete this book.