Thank you!Kitty wrote: ↑August 22nd, 2022, 3:00 am oh what a tragic and shocking ending I was afraid this would happened when the man and son decided not to tell the mother right away. They have to pay dearly for their secrecy. I was still hoping for a happy ending, but no, it was not such a story.
But you narrated it beautifully, it was a pleasure to listen to the story Thank you so much.
I only found two small pronounciations that are odd and change the meaning of the word, which you might want to correct. And one repeat needs to get cut:
> at 15:50: (p. 27) "and examined the bauble more closely" - you say "babble", this 'au' is pronounced like in haunted, laundry, dawn
> at 25:34: (p. 30) "the blood coursed through her veins" - you say "vines", it should rhyme with pains, lanes, stains
> at 27:50: (p. 31) repeat, one version can get cut: "Marie has awakened before me, the thought"
thank you, Sarah
Sonia
Yes, very tragic. They for their secrecy and her for her greed.
I'll do my best to fix them today.